On Manuscript:

1. Add Page Number

2. Add Preliminaries
3. Chapter Title Format. (Follow format, e.g must be centered)
4. Establish the study premise in the introduction.
5. In the Introduction part, the researchers must summarize all of the things they've learned
from their research. (A brief description of the problem, methodologies used, a brief
explanation that describe the framework)
6. Include citations in the introduction just like what you did in the RLL (No references
found)
7. Write a brief explanation of the Conceptual Framework before mentioning the figure. (e.g
explain Progressive UI Framework)
8. Figures were poorly presented.
9. Too much spaces between paragraphs. (Follow the prescribed format)
10. Paragraphs must consist of 3-5 sentences only to avoid paragraphs filling the whole page.
(apply to All Pages)
11. Remove the bullet format in the significance of the study. (the format must be like this.
[Doctors. The product of this research…. ])
12. The Web development life cycle must be explained in the research design section, not in
the definition of terms.
13. In the definition of terms, there must be a sentence describing the definition of terms. e.g

Definition of Terms
The terms used in this study are defined technically and operationally for better
understanding of the readers:

14. Terms must be defined like this. Healthcare refers to the organized provision of medical
care to people and communities (College choice.net, 2021).
15. Include reference for the Developmental Research Design.
16. Explain the Web Development Life cycle and include figure in the research design
section.
17. Figure number and Title must be centered.
18. Respondents of the study must have tabular data presentation (distribution of
respondents)
19. Follow the proper format of table number and table title
20. Format each table (tabular data) properly
21. Follow the proper format in each chapter. e.g

Chapter 3

PRESENTATION, ANALYSIS, AND INTERPRETATION OF DATA

 This chapter presents the development phases of the system and the analysis and
interpretation of the data gathered during evaluation phase to answer the research
questions.

22. The content of the Chapter 3 must be presented according to the stated research
questions in the statement of the problem section.

e.g.

SOP #1. How may the online consultation and reservation system have developed using
the web development life cycle phase in terms…… ?

Chapter 3 First Section.

The Development of Online Consultation and Reservation system using Web

Development Life Cycle.

23. There must be no direct data flow between external entities (e.g. Patient to Doctor)
24. Context diagram must represent the entire software element as a single process with input
and output data. However, in your context diagram no system response (output data)
provided by the system to the external entities.
25. Revise Context diagram (use gane-sarson)
26. Design Phase must be presented in order

Use Case Diagram

Context Diagram
DFD Level 1
DFD Level 2
Normalization
Data Dictionary
Remove other section such as normalization, software design etc

27. Unnormalized form must be presented in single relation (entity)

28. 1NF must be presented in single relation. A revised version of UNF with primary key for
each independent attributes. Define partial and transitive dependencies. (Provide
explanation)
29. in 2NF, the defined partial dependencies must be presented as separate relations.
Relations with transitive dependencies must also be presented. (Provide explanation)
30. Found transitive dependencies in the relations, therefore, your normalization must have
3NF. (All tables must be presented in this level) (Provide explanation)
31. Revise the Normalization . Level 1-3 must have defined PK and FK.
32. Revise ERD. There must be no line intersection. Relationship of each entity must be
presented in single line with appropriate cardinality.
33. Data Dictionary must be presented in tabular form not as screenshot of PhpMyAdmin.
34. There must be no space in the entity (table). (It is violation in the entity creation rule)
35. Revise All DFD Level. Use Gane-Sarson.
36. The definition of external entities are conflicting. (e.g in Level O -> user, Admin, Doctor.
In Level 1 Patient, Admin Doctor.

Rules in DFD Level 1.

– No new external entities should be there. (User and patient are different)
– The data flows from context diagrams (DFD Level 0) should be visible.
– It should consists all main processes.
– Repetition of data sources is allowed (if presented)
– Process can not be repeated.
–

37. Revise DFD Level 2. Follow these rules:

– All the data flows into and out of selected process on the level 1 DFD also
appear on the level 2 DFD
– Data sources must be presented.
– Repetition of data sources is allowed.
– A Data store can appear as a sink or source within level 2 DFD

38. Follow these general rules in Creating DFD

– No internal logic should be shown like loops, if-else, this is not a flow chart
– In order to keep the diagram uncluttered, you can repeat data stores and external
entities
– No process can have only output data flows (a miracle).
– No process can have only input data flows (black hole).
– Data cannot be moved directly from one store to another without a process.
– Data cannot move directly from an external entity to a data store without a
process.
– Data stores can’t be sink( only input data flows) or source ( only output data
flows) in level 1 DFD
– External entities must be people or systems that send information to or accept
information form the system to be engineered
– Check the direction of data flows to and from data stores
– Data flows must always be labelled with the data they contain. Do not put verbs in
the data flow description as this implies a process
 – Parent and child diagrams should be consistent. Do not show a data flow coming
from or to an external entity on a level 1 DFD that isn’t shown on the context
diagram (and vice versa).
– Make sure each process has at least one input and one output.
– Each data store should have at least one input and one output on the DFDs
somewhere.
– Each process name should start with a verb
– Where a process has only two data flows (one input and one output) then check it.
Usually a data flow has been omitted.
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39. Refences must be presented before appendices.

40. References must be in APA format.
41. General revisions on manuscript is required.