NO:12

NAMA:EGBERT

KELAS:XAMIA

REMEDIAL

Webtoon yang dipilih:One Bite per Month

Episode yang dipilih:EPS 11

-Fate will never have mercy on me

-No matter how I feel, the earth will continue to rotate

-and time will continue without a thing to

care for me

-Rina please listen to me

-There’s something i need to tell to you

-that all this time

 -I like you

-Oh Tidak,Tom!

-I’m surprised

-you know that i won’t live any longer

-Oh no, my view become dark

-my time is coming

-i don’t care,rina

-hold my hand,i will always be there by you

-and rina went left tomi to a better place

-do you believe already that i make comic?

-what do you think?
-why are you sllent?
-we are holding not to say how bad the comic you made
-in my eyes you don’t look like holding anything.

-let me introduce myself from the beggining again

-i am felicia aurel

-born in 10 july 20xx. I am 21 years old

-and now i am trying to publish my own comic

-and i move here to find experience to improve the quality of

my comic
-what do you mean by finding experience and improving
quality?
 -All this time i only learn how to make comic autodidated
-and as long as i post my comic in public

-there are many critics i get about comic that i am making

-although im sad, i always consider. The people who criticize just

want my comic to get better

-after i read all the comments, i can make a clear conclusion

-that my comic is still less one two minor thing

-no no no your comic weakness is not only one two thing

-what lucas mean?

-i may be not in right place to say this but i am so confidence with my

drawing skills

-because i used to join art class

-listen yah

-do you think comic is only about draw?

-if only that all it needs, everyone can be a comic artist

-your drawing in comics is good

-but the plot is unclear

-and the genre of the comic that you just showed is drama ?

-the only thing i cried about is the time that i wasted to read yoyr
comic

-brother,all this time you hide your identity as an editor yah

-I feel a child can also see how bad your comic is

-but luca’s advice is very clear

-then?is there something more brother lucas want to say about comic that i
made?

-with this enthusiasm for learning, i confused why you can write that bad
story.

-maybe first advice i can give is to make story based on experience.

-there’s often when writer uses his experience to write the story.

-what if you start writting your own experience

-ah~

-forget about my words just now

-i won’t be surprised if you don’t understand

-no,i understand what brother lucas mean

-so i must dyingin the hospital so i know the character in the

comic feelings?
-i am curious about one thing

-even though i know i will regret asking this question

-the fact is you are born in rich family and it’s not a thing to hide

-then why i bother to make comic?

Clearly you don’t aim for the money right?

-because when i make comic

-i can feel hapiness

When i realize that,i-

 -Hm?what’s wrong with lucas? Did i say something funny?

-ah sorry sorry

-i already guessed that your answer will be silly

-but i don’t expect will be this silly

-but remembering that you are 21

- i can understand your innocence mind

-yes your world with most people is very different

-what lucas means?

-listen,I’ve been opening this boarding house for a long time

-and i can understand why they move here than your mind
 -there’s someone is forced because of their lifestyle cost of living

-there’s someone who really doesn’t have a living place and money

-or one of the way to saves because they still have many responsibilities in
their life to be fulfilled

-people like us don’t have time to think about what we love or chasing dreams

-we don’t have a luxury like that

-although

-you won’t never understand right?

-rich people like you take independent life as a journey of experience

-people like you

-people that really underestimate poor people’s life like us right?

-i..

-no need to explain anything

-this boarding house doesn’t accept people like you