BOATS script feedback

Name of script being evaluated: Corfe Wraith

Name of author: Matt

Please answer the following questions:

1. What did The characters were very realistic and their language made sense
you like for the setting , it was obvious when they were on and off camera
best about
the script?

2. Was there a Considering it’s horror I think it was well balance , a lot more action
good than dialogued but it made sense in this case.
balance of
action and
dialogue?

3. Was the Yes it was – each character had their own voice and personality
dialogue (if
any)
convincing?

4. Was the
story easy
to
understand Yes – it got confusing when the white lady appeared but I think
? that was intentional

5. Did the script It had a sad and ominous ending and I would love to find out more
have a between the white lady and grounds keeper pact.
satisfying
pay-off?

6. What could More context of what the pact between the gosht and keeper was
be improved but overall I really liked it and it was very captivating
on a second
draft?