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    This document discusses rewriting a passage to better highlight a grey character's good and bad qualities, and to provide a stronger example. It also notes the need to improve a PEEL response.

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    This document discusses rewriting a passage to better highlight a grey character's good and bad qualities, and to provide a stronger example. It also notes the need to improve a PEEL response.

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    This document discusses rewriting a passage to better highlight a grey character's good and bad qualities, and to provide a stronger example. It also notes the need to improve a PEEL response.

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    JE Overall MARKED

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    anupa dewundarage
    This document discusses rewriting a passage to better highlight a grey character's good and bad qualities, and to provide a stronger example. It also notes the need to improve a PEEL response.

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    of 2

    and plot developments.

    K/U
    P

    ^^^^

    K/U

    ^^^^^^
    This needs to be rewritten! Grey character - good and bad qualities

    better example???

    ^^^^^^

    Improve PEEL! 13/25

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