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    This short document provides feedback on a writing sample, praising the introduction but noting areas for improvement. It identifies specific elements like thesis, evidence, and conclusion that could be strengthened. A grade of 16/25 is given with encouragement to continue writing.

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    Buck in The Snow MARKED

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    anupa dewundarage
    This short document provides feedback on a writing sample, praising the introduction but noting areas for improvement. It identifies specific elements like thesis, evidence, and conclusion that could be strengthened. A grade of 16/25 is given with encouragement to continue writing.

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    Good introduction!

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    Goof effort! I see improvement in your writing! Keep writing!

    16/25

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