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Writing task 2 advantages outweigh disadvantages

In this lesson you will learn how to produce a band 9 answer for advantages & disadvantages essay in IELTS Writing. As an example, we will use a topic of tourism in modern world. Basically, in all advantages and disadvantages essays your task is to describe positive and negative sides of a given topic + give your opinion. In this lesson you will: see a
question sample learn effective ways to quickly produce ideas for your answer learn band 9 answer structure for advantages and disadvantages essay in IELTS. IELTS advantages & disadvantages question sample For example, you can get this question for IELTS writing task 2: This essay topic is related to tourism. Of course, topics for questions will
vary, but ideal answer structure is the same for all advantages & disadvantages essays in IELTS. Producing ideas for your answer Before you start writing your essay, you should always spend 1-2 minutes on producing ideas for your answer. This way, you’ll know what to write about and your answer will be more coherent and well-structured. In case
of advantages & disadvantages essay, you need to think of 2-3 advantages and 2-3 disadvantages of the given issue. Let’s think about advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Advantages of tourism: boost in country’s economy due to increased spending new job opening for local people opportunities to discover new places for
individual travelers Disadvantages of tourism: destruction of popular tourist destinations by large numbers of tourists development of illegal economic activities local people can experience loss of privacy Now, after we’ve collected some ideas, it’s time to use them in our essay. Band 9 answer structure for causes & solutions essay Though there are
many ways to structure your IELTS essay, we’ll use this time-tested band 9 essay structure: Introduction Body paragraph 1 – advantages Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages Conclusion Tip: before starting to write your essay, decide what you think: does tourism have more advantages or disadvantages? You’ll need to make accent on your opinion in
one of the body paragraphs. We’ll use the opinion that tourism has more advantages. Introduction Write the introduction in 2 sentences: Sentence 1 - paraphrase the question (restate the problem): Sentence 2 - tell the examiner what you’re going to describe in your essay: Body paragraph 1 - advantages Sentence 1 - state 2 main advantages:
Sentences 2-4 - explain the first advantage + give an example (if possible): Sentences 5-7 - explain the second advantage + give an example (if possible): Body paragraph 2 - disadvantages Sentence 1 - state 2 main disadvantages: Sentences 2-4 - explain the first disadvantage + give an example (if possible): Sentences 5-7 - explain the second
disadvantage + give an example (if possible): Sentences 8 - make an accent on your opinion (we’ll use the opinion that tourism has more advantages): Conclusion Sentences 1-2 - briefly restate the advantages and disadvantages Sentence 2 - give your final opinion Band 9 answer sample Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national
income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of developed tourism industry are boost in country’s economy and a large number of new job openings for the local people. Firstly, tourists spend money on a
wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and medical services. This way, tourism yields an additional income, greatly supporting the country’s economy. Secondly, tourism increases the level of employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, the influx of tourists results in a larger demand in restaurant workers, tour
guides, hotel staff and employees of retail services, exhorting business owners to hire more people for these positions. But tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and development of illegal economic activities. іAncient buildings, temples and monuments struggle to cope with a vast amount of
visitor’s traffic and get damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause environmental problems. For instance, when places of interest are overcrowded, natural resources often become overexploited. What’s more, the presence of a considerable number of tourists with a lot of money to spend, and often carrying valuables such as cameras and
jewelry, increases the attraction for criminals and brings with it activities like robbery and drug dealing. However, proper hospitality management and correct usage of tourism revenue by the local government can eliminate these disadvantages. To conclude, although tourism can have certain negative effects like destructive impact and growth of
crime rate, it has an extremely positive influence on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs for the local people. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks. (299 words) An introduction is important to the essay because it creates an initial impression in terms of the quality of your writing. A clear, well-
organised and relevant introduction will most certainly create a positive first impression on the examiner. So, what makes up an effective introduction? Let’s take a look. In Writing Task 2, you need to address all the parts of the question or task in a relevant way. Because your introduction is the first step towards achieving this goal, you need to
introduce your answer to all the different parts of the question. This is why it is important to take some time to read and analyse the task before you start writing, so you know exactly what you are being asked to write about. Writing Task 2 questions usually begin with a general statement before focusing in on more specific points or questions about
the topic. Using a similar model in your own introduction is a great way to start your essay, but make sure that your general statement is clearly related to your topic and is not too broad. While it is perfectly acceptable for you to use the task as a guide for your introduction, make sure you do not copy material from the task. Copying the task word-
for-word shows the examiner that you have a limited range of language, which can affect your band score. Instead, change the order of the information, use synonyms, and explain more complex ideas in your own words. It is also important not to use a memorised introduction where you insert words related to the question topic. Examiners read
thousands of responses so can recognise memorised scripts.In Writing Task 2, you will need to develop a position while exploring the different parts of the task. It is then important that you clearly state your position in your introduction. Even though this strategy can be considered as optional, briefly explaining how you plan to develop the topic can
help you better organise your writing. It is also a good way to let the examiner know what you’ll be covering in the essay. Don’t forget to re-read your introduction once you’ve finished writing your essay. It is common for test takers to begin their essays thinking about a specific argument, or a specific way to organise their writing but change their
minds as they develop the topic. So, after completing your Writing Task 2, make sure that your final draft still matches your introduction. Now that we have gone over some important strategies for writing a good introduction for Writing Task 2, it’s time to look at a sample introduction. Start by reading and analysing the prompt, as mentioned in tip 1.
Then, carefully read the sample introduction and notice the different strategies used, which have been highlighted for you.The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons
for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.General Statement: Nuclear technology has been around for many years. Details: Whether this technology is used for weapons of mass destruction or as a source of energy, many are of the belief that the use of nuclear energy has
more advantages than disadvantages. Position: In my opinion, nuclear technology can indeed be a very efficient energy source. However, nuclear weapons possess such enormous destructive power that any benefits that this technology may offer to humankind are not enough to counter its potential devastating effects. Plan: This essay will address
why the drawbacks of nuclear technology outweigh the benefits and will include relevant examples to support this position.Just as an effective introduction will let the examiner know what they can expect from your essay, a good conclusion will remind them of the main points presented and will summarise what you want your examiner to remember
from your writing. Check our blog for our post on strategies for writing a good conclusion! A model answer for each type of IELTS essayAn IELTS essay is a ‘discursive essay’ where you may have to discuss an issue, give an opinion, explain the advantages or disadvantages, write about problems or causes of problems and give solutions. There are 5
variations to an IELTS discursive essay. In this blog post, there are 7 model answers for IELTS writing task 2. These are based on essays my students have written with help from me to correct them and make them more concise and clear.First, let’s look at these important points.In a problem-solution essay or an advantage disadvantage essay, the
instruction words will ask something like:What problems does this cause, what solutions can you suggest? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?Notice the plural form here, advantages and disadvantages. Many students (and IELTS teachers) think they have to write more than one
advantage and disadvantage or more than one problem and solution. Yes, you can certainly do this but you can also make it much simpler by writing about one advantage and one disadvantage. The same goes for a problem solution essay.Another point to consider is that you may run out of time if you write 2 of each. You will have only 40 minutes for
the essay. Planning time is around 10 minutes so that means 30 minutes of writing. Another danger of writing about 2 of each is that your word count will go well over 300 words.What does the marking criteria say?Band 8 Task Response states-> ‘presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas…’
There is nothing mentioned in the marking criteria about having more than one advantage or disadvantage only that it needs to be well developed, relevant and supported. So you can take one advantage one disadvantage, explain them well and support them with a specific example within an essay of between 260 to 300 words. Same for a problem
solution essay, one problem one solution. Band 7 coherence and cohesion it states-> ‘presents a clear central topic within each paragraph…’ A well-organized essay will help in scoring a desirable band in the writing test. A lot of the candidates who take the writing test will need at least 5-10 minutes to prepare for the essay once they get the topic. If
you consider certain points while writing the essay, it’ll get a bit easier to get a high IELTS band score. Few points are listed below: Answer the question asked: Before answering, carefully read the question that is asked and try to answer the question to the point, do not divert from the topic. Whatever the topic is try to explain as much as possible.
Do not speak out of the topic, if you do so you may end up losing the marks. Plan your work: After you get the topic for writing, plan your work based on the format. Think about what has to be written in the introduction, two paragraphs, and a conclusion. Once you plan the work, you will get an idea automatically on how to write the essay and score
high band accordingly. Write, Review and Re-write: Before actually taking the IELTS Writing test, it is important to take a practice test. While taking the practice test, take a particular topic and start writing the essay, once you are done writing the essay go through it and review your mistakes. When you take the second practice test, try to improve
or overcome the mistakes that happened before. Skills you need to have: To score a good band in the IELTS examination, there should be some relevant skills, there are two kinds of skills; exam skills as well as language skills. You need to find out which skills you are good at and should improve the skills in which you are not that good. In order to find
this out, you need to take a lot of IELTS practice tests. IELTS sample essays are given in different types of questions. And each type wants you to give a response in different ways. The IELTS model essay types are given below. In this category, one opinion of the particular thing is given and you’ll be asked to discuss whether you agree or disagree
with that particular opinion. IELTS Opinion Essay topics In this type of question, there will be two opinions given, you are asked to understand both the opinions and give your point of view based on that. IELTS Discussion Essay Topics In this type of question, you need to give the reason or cause why something has happened and you are also asked
to discuss the different aspects of it such as the effect, solutions and positive and negative points. Given below are links of sample IELTS essays: In this type of question, you have to discuss the problems related to society and plan accordingly to create a solution for these particular issues. Given below are links of sample IELTS essays: In this type of
question, you have to give opinions relating to the positive and negative sides of a particular topic. Given below are links of sample IELTS essays: There are other types of questions that do not fit in any of the categories above. So these kinds of questions are called other types of questions. Given below are links of sample IELTS essays: The Academic
Writing test will have 60 minutes to complete the test. You are asked to write 2 tasks, task 1 of at least 150 words, and task 2 of at least 250 words. In task 1 you’ll be given a table, chart, process diagram or graph and you’ll have to describe it in around 150 words for which you can take 20 minutes. In task 2, a topic will be given and you should write
a 250-word essay. Given below are links to some of the IELTS writing material for academic: In the General Training test, you will have only 60 minutes to complete the test. There are 2 tasks, where you’ll have to write a 150 words essay for Task 1 and 250 words essay for task 2. In task 1 you’ll have to write a letter, for example, a request letter. In
task 2, it’ll be the same as Academic Writing where you’ll have to write a 250-word response according to the question given. Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go
hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem? In many places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Is writing task 2 same for Academic and
general module of IELTS? Yes. You have to write an essay consisting of 250 words on a given topic. What is the marking criteria for essay writing? Task response – 25% Coherence and Cohesion – 25% Vocabulary – 25% Grammar – 25% I’m confused about opinion essays. Eg.1: Even in agree/disagree essays they ask for your opinion like “To what
extent you agree”. Eg.2: Even in advantage/disadvantage essays they ask for your opinion like “Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages”. Eg.3: There are essays which specifically ask for your opinion. In any essay which asks for your opinion, you may give it. Can I write an essay which is more than 250 words? Will it improve my scores?
Minimum word count is 250. There is no upper limit, which means you can exceed 250 words. But you are not marked for the length of your essay. You are marked on how organised your paragraphs are, logical flow, collocations and grammar. I have memorised some standard phrases to begin and end my essay? Will it improve my scores? They
should be relevant to the question given. Instead of using complex irrelevant phrases which lowers your score, you can follow simple rules such as: 1. For the introduction, you can paraphrase the question given. 2. For the conclusion, you can reiterate the main points.

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