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UJIAN TENGAH SEMESTER GENAP TAHUN AKADEMIK 2021/2022

Mata Kuliah : Analytical Editing Tanggal : 17 Mei 2022

Jurusan/Program Studi : Bahasa dan Kebudayaan Pukul : 12.30 – 14.10 WIB
Inggris
Semester/Kelas : 6/6-01 Dosen : Sakti Nugroho, S.S., M.Pd.
Sifat Ujian : Tutup Buku

PETUNJUK PENGERJAAN SOAL

1. Ujian ini WAJIB dikerjakan pada tanggal dan jam UTS daring berlangsung.
2. Jenis ujian ini adalah ujian tertulis.
3. Mahasiswa WAJIB menjawab soal ujian dengan MENGETIK pada Microsoft Word
atau MENULIS pada beberapa lembar kertas.
4. Mahasiswa HANYA mengetikkan atau menuliskan jawaban UTS saja TANPA
disertai dengan soal UTSnya.
5. Setelah selesai, kertas lembar jawaban ujian WAJIB DISIMPAN dalam bentuk PDF
apabila diketik dan WAJIB DIFOTO apabila ditulis tangan.
6. File PDF tersebut mengikuti format penamaan file: UTS-Nama Anda, contoh:
UTSMuhammad Ibrahim.
7. File PDF atau foto lembar jawaban UTS tersebut selanjutnya WAJIB DISIMPAN di
Google Drive milik mahasiswa.
8. Tautan Google Drive berisi file PDF atau file foto kertas jawaban UTS tersebut
digunakan untuk mengisi komentar di portal Unsada.
9. Mahasiswa WAJIB memberikan komentar serta mengunggah tautan Google Drive
berisi file PDF atau file foto kertas lembar jawaban UTS di halaman komentar
perkuliahan daring agar tercatat dalam daftar kehadiran.
10. Kertas lembar jawaban UTS juga WAJIB DIKIRIMKAN ke Google Classroom kelas
Analytical Editing 6-01 melalui tautan:
https://classroom.google.com/c/NDc4NTk1MjcxOTAw/a/NDk0ODM5NjMyMjg4/det
ails

Part A. Identify redundancy in each of the following sentences and improve it to be better.
1. The project will be finished in the month of October for a period of six months.
The project will be finished in the October for a period of six

months___________________________________________________
 2. HIV virus is dangerous for humans.

HIV is dangerous for humans

3. She was screaming and yelling.

She was screaming

4. We need to go to the ATM machine for withdrawing some money.

We need to go to the ATM for withdrawing some money

5. The medical examiner was called to the building where a dead corpse had been found.

The medical examiner was called to the building for a dead corpse.

6. I had to return back to the house to fetch my briefcase.

I had to back to the house to fetch my briefcase

________________________________________________________________________

7. Buy now and we will give a printer as an added bonus.

Buy now and we will give a printer as a bonus

8. Would you please repeat again what you said?

Would you repeat

again_____________________________________________________________________
___

9. Larry thinks he has sufficient enough information to write the article.

Larry thinks he has enough information to write the

article.____________________________________________________________________
____

10. He ordered for a cup of coffee.

He ordered a
coffee____________________________________________________________________
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Part B. Correct the following Run-On/Comma Splice Sentences by adding a period, a
semicolon, a coordinator, AND/OR a subordinator.
1. Lila enjoyed the bouquet of tulips John gave her on prom night however she prefers roses.
Lila enjoyed the bouquet of tulips John gave her on prom night; however, she prefers
roses._____________________________________________________________________
___
2. Participants could leave the study at any time, they needed to indicate their preference.
Participants could leave the study at any time, but they needed to indicate their
preference__________________________________________________________________
______
3. The results of the study were inconclusive, therefore more research needs to be done on the
topic.
The results of the study were inconclusive; therefore, more research needs to be done on
the
topic_____________________________________________________________________
4. I love to write papers I would write one every day if I had the time.
I love to write papers. And I would write one every day if i had the
time_____________________________________

5. Skiing is a dangerous sport you can easily break your leg or your neck.
Skiing is a dangerous sport. You can easily break your leg or your neck.

Part C. Improve the following choppy sentences by combining them.

1. She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up
the idea of becoming a dancer.
She took dance classes, but she had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. And she
eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer
2. Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics. Readers don't always find this funny.
They demand that newspapers not carry the strip.
Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics, but readers don’t always find this
funny. And they demand that newspapers not carry the
strip._______________________________________________________________________
_
3. The campus parking problem is getting worse. The university is not building any new
parking lots.
The campus parking problem is getting worse. And the university is not building any
new parking
lots.________________________________________________________________________
4. Government and private agencies have spent billions of dollars advertising the dangers of
smoking. The number of smokers is still increasing.
Government and private agencies have spent billions of dollars adveritising the danger of
smoking, but the number of smokers is still
increasing.__________________________________________________________________
______
5. Gasoline became expensive. Automobile manufacturers began to produce smaller cars.
Smaller cars use less gasoline.
Gasoline became expensive, so automobile manufacturers began to produce smaller cars,
for smaller cars use less gasoline

Muhammad Dandy Mulyadi

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