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As an older man—80 at the time of writing these poems— more to darkness/than nightfall
he leaves this volume as his legacy and plea to future caught reversed in a mirror’s lens.
generations. The suite of poems chosen from the wider Here begins Malouf ’s theme of the duality of man—that
text exhibits textual integrity as its circular structure— multidimensionality peculiar to humans where body and
bookended by ‘Aquarius’ and its echo ‘Aquarius II’— soul are co-existent yet separate entities, governed by our
conveys Malouf ’s essential themes: the duality and imagination which allows us to time travel to the past and
multidimensionality of humankind, and the inner stillness envision the future while rooted in one concrete moment
that comes from meditating on the quotidian, making it of space and time. When that something in us ‘snaps’, we
transcendent. Ultimately, the suite of poems presents a get a flash of our primordial selves, and the Eden from
hopeful image of mankind’s place as stewards of the earth. which we were expelled through sin.
1960s, as well as reverberating the reference to the Book to echo the fleeting attention span, wonder and naïveté of
of Tobit. The contrast between a vivacious teenager and childhood, Malouf begins a meditation on a small creature
the pulsing beat of imagined rock music counters the of nature, the ladybird, who represents ‘a kind of grace’,
death imagery, indicating that conflated sense of life and for its ephemeral visitations to us, particularly noticed
death of which humans are constantly aware. The idea in youth. There is a sense in the poem of pantheism, the
of death is developed in between these references by ‘the idea that God is present in nature, and this poem with its
fall across their path / at noon of a shadow / where none focus on nature and the innocence of childhood echoes
should be’, again expressing the duality of man with the the Romantic era poets. The child in the poem ‘sped her
concept that in order to have a shadow at noon, one needs / on her way with the same breath / we used to snuff out
to be out in the sun. The contrast between shadows and birthdays / on a cake’. The imagery of fire that dominates
sun, like in ‘Aquarius’, serves as shorthand to remind us the second half of the poem lies at the heart of the nursery
of our dual natures in the physical and spiritual worlds. rhyme, and this odd juxtaposition of innocent insect
Being so privileged, we must make use of our prominence and the anthropomorphic desire to rush home to save
and power to save our environment. imagined ladybird babies from a fire is rightly questioned
by the recollected child, ‘(but why/was her house on fire?)’.
Toward the end of the poem, Malouf takes us back to the
Malouf here juxtaposes the innocence of childhood with
mystery of death particularly in a person of faith, as an
the savagery that colours the grown-up world around us,
‘angel’ that connotes a child, being ‘waist high at our side’,
perhaps a different kind of dualism reliant on memory,
appears and ushers us ‘at his nod’ to the next realm. This
since we can all remember childhood moments as we
reference to angels links to ‘A Recollection of Starlings:
grow. The adult and child become conflated by memory
Rome ’84’ with its destructive ‘Avenging / Angel’, and to
and can almost exist in the same space, with this duality
‘Towards Midnight’, with its contrasting ‘guardian angel’
of child and adult mind represented by the intrusive
and ‘upstart angel’. For Malouf, the spirit world exists right
parenthetical questions.
alongside us, ever-present in the human condition, as
Malouf focuses his energies on ‘the point where objects The child is connected to the ladybird through his breath,
cross the consciousness and become perception’, (Malouf paradoxically representing the power of the individual to
in Tulip 275, in Haskell, ‘Silence and poetic inwardness in animate the insect in flight, but also bring death to the
the writings of David Malouf ’). flames of birthday candles (and by extension, the ladybird
itself, since it is metaphorically described as the flame on
The poem ends on a cyclical note with the image of
the birthday candles— ‘the break and flare / of her wings
an ‘infant’, recalling the start of the life cycle after his
the flame that leapt / from the match’). Again, Malouf
meditation on death, and how we are ‘smiling’ which
gives us another kind of duality. This power is reiterated
reminds us of the sibilant ‘serenely’ in the poem’s second
at the end of the poem when Malouf notes, ‘In our hands
line. The poem’s purpose seems to be to remind us of the
/ (we had no warning / of this) the world is alive and
cycle of life, the mystery of spiritual presence in our lives,
dangerous’, and here the hands may be both those of the
and the fact that we are all ultimately united by the same
child and of the adult recollecting the past.
fate. As such, since we are all leveled by death in the end, we
should realise the importance of life, the sun, its radiance, Through recollecting the simple childhood pleasures of
and our ability to shape a green future for posterity. The use communing with nature, and conjuring the power an
of couplets throughout the poem seems to represent this individual holds over nature—controlling the flight of
duality of body and spirit, with the final single line, ‘smiling’, the ladybird and the presence or absence of fire—Malouf
breaking the pattern, and paradoxically revealing the wants to awaken us to the delight we take in the natural
disembodied soul broken free of its body, but finding peace wonders of our earthly home, but also to realise the power
in this freedom. we wield to bring our environment harm, or heal it.
again may be death. The last stanza is consumed by a Darkness gives way to ‘The Rapture’, here meant to
paradoxical, Escher-like image of a sleeping cat dreaming of represent both literal overwhelming joy but also, in the
someone dreaming of her and within his dreams, pats her. Biblical sense, the moment when believers in Christ will
The meditation on the cat draws us out of ourselves, and be lifted to Heaven at His second coming. This section of
inspires us to contemplate the connectedness of all living the poem is coloured by the repeated use of hendiadys,
things through our imagination, and transports Malouf, again to reflect the duality of man: ‘being seized / and
and now the responder, to existential, multidimensional taken’, ‘trembled and cracked open’, ‘the moment / and
thoughts about the human condition. As Bill Ashcroft all / time’, and finally ‘swept up and taken’. There seems
states, ‘Malouf is fascinated by ordinary objects, first to be a paradox in the third pairing as one moment
because they are luminous with possibility, and second cannot equal all time, but for Malouf, it does exactly that.
because they disrupt our myth of the linearity of time. Because of our multidimensionality, we are able to exist in
Objects will lead us into the past as well as into the future.’ one moment of space and time, but remember everything
before us and imagine everything that will come in the
future. This is the grace of the human being, and the
‘Towards Midnight’ reason we are tasked with the responsibility of caring for
The idea of midnight is reprised in ‘Towards Midnight’, our environment—we are specially created by God. This
a triptych and another meditation on death and rebirth. section of the poem is also colored by enjambment which
The poem is dedicated to Malouf ’s friend in Italy, Joan mirrors the moment of confusion at transformation to
Tesei, on her passing, and as such the idea of death makes spirit, ‘less / a breaking than a breaking / out’. There is
sense here. The poem with its three parts is complex and comfort here, and perhaps Malouf is comforting himself
phrases are reiterated, causing us to reconsider their new as he considers the loss of his friend.
meanings at different stages of the meditation.
The first section, ‘The Cup’, begins with what appears to ‘Earth Hour’
be a cup that holds ‘darkness’ and its contrast, ‘sunlight’--a In the eponymous poem, Malouf arguably moves to a
pattern repeated throughout this suite. This juxtaposition cautionary approach to his didacticism, as he scolds
reflects the dual nature of man again, recalls life and its responders for smugly and glibly living in ‘McMansions’
opposite death, and represents the human body. Malouf foolishly thinking their extravagance can be mitigated
moves us to the physical, and inserts the person with if they turn their lights out an hour a year and give
‘I’ into the poem, making the suggested body concrete. a gold coin donation to help environmental efforts.
Here the persona revels in the magnificence of the body While Dennis Haskell calls Malouf ‘by temperament an
through the act of breathing, and a sense of peace is optimist’, here we see the opposite. The fourth word in
connoted by the presence of the very body, here called a the poem is ‘our’ and this collective pronoun is significant
‘guardian angel / of the ordinary / and of this world’. The as Malouf wants responders to see environmentalism as
power of the persona’s mind makes sense of ‘what sleep a universal concern. The repetition of ‘earth hour’ at the
for a time / has scattered’ through memory, however end of the first stanza is tongue in cheek as he means
sometimes these memories are ‘bitter- / sweet’, the our own deaths, but the phrase itself has a connotation
enjambment here echoing the pain past recollections can of the doomsday clock heralding the point of man-made
bring, especially if they are of a deceased friend. global catastrophe (we are supposed to be at two minutes
From the quotidian cup—and we can think back to Bill to midnight, incidentally). The clock is a metaphor for
Ashcroft’s statement about Malouf ’s fascination with threats to humanity from unchecked technological and
ordinary objects to serve as portals to the past or the scientific advances. Responders are reminded again of our
future—we reach the transformational through the connection with nature and the animal world through
eponymous section, ‘Towards Midnight’. Midnight is the the repeated collective first person pronoun, ‘we are feral
witching hour, a time where day and night seem to exist / at heart, unhouseled creatures’. Malouf implores us to
in one instant. Here, the feeling of unease initiated in the remember the truth of our primordial selves, rather than
last stanza of the first section continues. Malouf draws our be caught up with trappings of materialism and supposed
attention to the shadow self, the ‘upstart angel’ or ‘visitant progress. His use of oxymoron in ‘accommodating
lurker’. Enjambment here between ‘a stranger’ and ‘upstart tomb’ in the last line reveals the paradox of living in a
angel’ conveys the disturbance from these dark thoughts, ‘Shatzkammer’, a treasure house, which we’ve made into
and the complexities of life’s experiences. The image of a midden, or a dump for domestic waste. The tone here
the ‘late guest’ in the final stanza suggests that the human is quite punitive, and should engender in the responder
condition is one where we wrestle with our demons, but a quick embracing environmentalism, and the realisation
still welcome this struggle as part of life. The room in this that our time here is finite and should be appreciated.
section is a metaphor for the mind.
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