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Earth Hour by David Malouf:

Notes on the poems


Jennifer Fletcher, St. Charbel’s College
A critical study of literature allows individuals to more fully own a text and inhabit its world, and a critical study
of the Maloufian worldview through the poems in Earth Hour can result in enlightenment, leading humanity to
realise its unity with nature and its unique environmental responsibility at the top of the food chain. David Malouf
is an Australian award winning, multi-hyphenate composer whose soul is arguably that of a pure poet, whose
‘ideas and values are fundamentally poetic’ according to critic Dennis Haskell. In his didactic and lyrical 2014
poetry collection, Earth Hour, Malouf explores the unity of all living things on our eco-threatened planet and
implores us to recognise this connectedness in the interest of survival.

As an older man—80 at the time of writing these poems— more to darkness/than nightfall
he leaves this volume as his legacy and plea to future caught reversed in a mirror’s lens.
generations. The suite of poems chosen from the wider Here begins Malouf ’s theme of the duality of man—that
text exhibits textual integrity as its circular structure— multidimensionality peculiar to humans where body and
bookended by ‘Aquarius’ and its echo ‘Aquarius II’— soul are co-existent yet separate entities, governed by our
conveys Malouf ’s essential themes: the duality and imagination which allows us to time travel to the past and
multidimensionality of humankind, and the inner stillness envision the future while rooted in one concrete moment
that comes from meditating on the quotidian, making it of space and time. When that something in us ‘snaps’, we
transcendent. Ultimately, the suite of poems presents a get a flash of our primordial selves, and the Eden from
hopeful image of mankind’s place as stewards of the earth. which we were expelled through sin.

‘Aquarius’ In connecting man so profoundly with his environment


in the first poem, Malouf conflates our existence with
The initial poem in the suite prescribed for study is aptly that of our planet and its other less sentient inhabitants,
named, as the word connotes not only the start of the ‘loved animal forms’, which seems obvious if it weren’t
astrological year through the constellation it represents, expressed with such elegance and beauty. The use of the
but also the dawn of a new age of awareness and peace paradoxical, Biblically allusive phrase ‘anti-Eden’ from
for humankind. This philosophical and didactic poem which we’ve paradoxically ‘never been expelled’ would
teaches us how to read the rest of the poems in the suite, seem to indicate that we are in fact not fallen, but in fact
as we can find most of Malouf ’s signature themes and still children of God who can tend the Garden with the
techniques within. care and love it deserves. This is perhaps how Malouf
The poem begins with a sense of optimism we gain from would like us to see ourselves.
a sunny day at the beach with beautiful and seemingly
endless oceans in the repetitive imagery, ‘blue upon blue’. ‘Radiance’
The first half of the poem is comprised of short syntax ‘Radiance’ also explores the duality of man. This poem
with enjambment across lines, which might represent seems to be a meditation on death, though it is ironically
the clarity of daytime, of rationality, of clear physicality titled ‘Radiance’ which indicates the sun and the warmth
and the tangible world, while the second half of the of life, instead of the coldness of death. Titling the poem
poem is one long, complex sentence. The complexity and perhaps paradoxically allows Malouf to instantly achieve
density of the second sentence can be seen to represent his transcendental ideals of dualism. Before moving on
the confusion of the ‘counterworld’ Malouf calls to our to death, Malouf first explores the shadow self and the
attention--the confusion evident at night, in our dream reverberations of the past in the present. Biblical allusion
state, in the inability to know our spirits fully. Through is again heavy in the poem, with what seems to be an
enjoying this initial ‘sovereign day’, we are almost fooled allusion to the Book of Tobit when Malouf references
into believing that we, while not regal yet somehow like ‘Tobias the street-smart / teen has his screwball dog,’
the sun, are ‘immortal’. However, Malouf is quick to dispel recalling the religious folktale of the story of the grateful
this notion with the contrasting juxtaposition of ‘dark’ dead. This concept is specifically indicated in his lines,
in line 2. Joy is further proven ephemeral, as evidenced ‘When they / too become one / of the Grateful Dead’,
by the enjambment from lines 7 to 8, and the tonal shift which refers perhaps somewhat comically with its
signaled by the caesura in line 8 capitalisation in a pun on the folk-rock band from the

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1960s, as well as reverberating the reference to the Book to echo the fleeting attention span, wonder and naïveté of
of Tobit. The contrast between a vivacious teenager and childhood, Malouf begins a meditation on a small creature
the pulsing beat of imagined rock music counters the of nature, the ladybird, who represents ‘a kind of grace’,
death imagery, indicating that conflated sense of life and for its ephemeral visitations to us, particularly noticed
death of which humans are constantly aware. The idea in youth. There is a sense in the poem of pantheism, the
of death is developed in between these references by ‘the idea that God is present in nature, and this poem with its
fall across their path / at noon of a shadow / where none focus on nature and the innocence of childhood echoes
should be’, again expressing the duality of man with the the Romantic era poets. The child in the poem ‘sped her
concept that in order to have a shadow at noon, one needs / on her way with the same breath / we used to snuff out
to be out in the sun. The contrast between shadows and birthdays / on a cake’. The imagery of fire that dominates
sun, like in ‘Aquarius’, serves as shorthand to remind us the second half of the poem lies at the heart of the nursery
of our dual natures in the physical and spiritual worlds. rhyme, and this odd juxtaposition of innocent insect
Being so privileged, we must make use of our prominence and the anthropomorphic desire to rush home to save
and power to save our environment. imagined ladybird babies from a fire is rightly questioned
by the recollected child, ‘(but why/was her house on fire?)’.
Toward the end of the poem, Malouf takes us back to the
Malouf here juxtaposes the innocence of childhood with
mystery of death particularly in a person of faith, as an
the savagery that colours the grown-up world around us,
‘angel’ that connotes a child, being ‘waist high at our side’,
perhaps a different kind of dualism reliant on memory,
appears and ushers us ‘at his nod’ to the next realm. This
since we can all remember childhood moments as we
reference to angels links to ‘A Recollection of Starlings:
grow. The adult and child become conflated by memory
Rome ’84’ with its destructive ‘Avenging / Angel’, and to
and can almost exist in the same space, with this duality
‘Towards Midnight’, with its contrasting ‘guardian angel’
of child and adult mind represented by the intrusive
and ‘upstart angel’. For Malouf, the spirit world exists right
parenthetical questions.
alongside us, ever-present in the human condition, as
Malouf focuses his energies on ‘the point where objects The child is connected to the ladybird through his breath,
cross the consciousness and become perception’, (Malouf paradoxically representing the power of the individual to
in Tulip 275, in Haskell, ‘Silence and poetic inwardness in animate the insect in flight, but also bring death to the
the writings of David Malouf ’). flames of birthday candles (and by extension, the ladybird
itself, since it is metaphorically described as the flame on
The poem ends on a cyclical note with the image of
the birthday candles— ‘the break and flare / of her wings
an ‘infant’, recalling the start of the life cycle after his
the flame that leapt / from the match’). Again, Malouf
meditation on death, and how we are ‘smiling’ which
gives us another kind of duality. This power is reiterated
reminds us of the sibilant ‘serenely’ in the poem’s second
at the end of the poem when Malouf notes, ‘In our hands
line. The poem’s purpose seems to be to remind us of the
/ (we had no warning / of this) the world is alive and
cycle of life, the mystery of spiritual presence in our lives,
dangerous’, and here the hands may be both those of the
and the fact that we are all ultimately united by the same
child and of the adult recollecting the past.
fate. As such, since we are all leveled by death in the end, we
should realise the importance of life, the sun, its radiance, Through recollecting the simple childhood pleasures of
and our ability to shape a green future for posterity. The use communing with nature, and conjuring the power an
of couplets throughout the poem seems to represent this individual holds over nature—controlling the flight of
duality of body and spirit, with the final single line, ‘smiling’, the ladybird and the presence or absence of fire—Malouf
breaking the pattern, and paradoxically revealing the wants to awaken us to the delight we take in the natural
disembodied soul broken free of its body, but finding peace wonders of our earthly home, but also to realise the power
in this freedom. we wield to bring our environment harm, or heal it.

‘Ladybird’ ‘A recollection of starlings: Rome ‘84’


Malouf has stated that he focuses on poetic writing even Again Malouf takes memory as his starting point in this
in his prose because he wanted to explore what he had poem, drawn from his experiences living in Italy in the
to say in ‘some more inward way’. Critic Dennis Haskell 1980s. As Emily Bitto states, ‘The act of remembering,
avers that the ‘idea of “some more inward way” seems to of looking back on the past, is for Malouf always a re-
[him] key to all Malouf ’s writing.’ Malouf moves us into presentation of both time and space’. He takes inspiration
the inner world of memory and nostalgia with this poem from this poem from watching starlings at dusk in Rome,
that centres on the outward being of a ladybird which has as they swoop en masse in murmurations over the ‘Eternal
connotations of childhood with its intertextual reference City’. The scattered words on the page--the fragmented
to the nursery rhyme. Here, through enjambment meant lineation--mimic the flight of the flock of starlings as

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they form seemingly random patterns over Rome. By


juxtaposing the fleeting movements of birds, themselves
short-lived creatures, at dusk—when light too is fleeting
and soon to give way to darkness—with a city of antiquity,
given its name by centuries of poets who wrote about it,
Malouf again reminds us of the duality of man: we exist
in one moment of conflated space and time, yet we can
remember and imagine the past, and the future, thus
transcending our physical limitations. As Bitto states, ‘Any
“single” place is conceived temporally as well as spatially
in Malouf ’s poetry, as constituted by the sediment of past
versions of itself ’.
The poem is a meditation on the creative process, and
of the process of creating poetry, the ‘flight / of starlings’
juxtaposed with the ‘wing-clatter / of a typewriter’ and
the ‘scatter/of letters’. Words on a page seem random to
the poet like movements of the birds seem random, but
there is method in the madness as the spiritual creative
Image source: UnSplash_Erica Marsland Huynh
force ultimately makes sense of both animal movements
and human creativity. The above mentioned appositive ‘Eternal moment at Poggio Madonna’
phrases with their asyndeton further conflate the birds
This is the second poem (in this HSC suite of poems) from
and the poet, pushing them closer together so the links
Malouf’s time spent in Italy in the 1980s. He repeats his
are obvious. The process of reading the poem follows this
starting point in nature, as in ‘Ladybird’ and ‘A Recollection
same pattern, as the responder makes sense of seemingly
of Starlings: Rome ’84’, but with a cat, this time. His title is
randomly placed words on the page, linking them to
paradoxical as it juxtaposes seeming opposites—an ‘eternal
starlings. It’s almost like a cyclical process in miniature
moment”--but then this is the essence of Malouf, as noted
echoed by birds, poet and responder.
by critic Emily Bitto: ‘Malouf sees the myriad space-times of
The cyclical nature of life is referenced through the the past as already contained within the present space-time.’
destruction brought by a storm, followed by the cleansing
The meditation on the cat, ‘Miss Mischa’, transcends
it brings to the atmosphere, allowing the process to start
the physical and acts as a catalyst for the persona to
again. This is traced with the introduction of
contemplate the spot the cat has chosen to sleep, imagining
Once as a storm-cloud that the supernatural powers of the cat have allowed it to
sense how
shadow
the sun, centuries back,
swoop in a burst of candescence,
of one wing of the Avenging had danced there
This natural imagery is personified even further, playing
Angel above on the conflation of ‘sun’ and ‘god’, as a young ancient
The Avenging Angel brings death and destruction, spiritual being had been drawn back to a place where he
breaking and reforming the clouds of starlings, as well had seen and fallen in love with a beautiful mortal. All of
as clouds in weather patterns and ultimately the creative this imagined past activity about the one space is a hallmark
process as a poet writes, breaks up / in particles’ his draft, of Malouf’s writing and his idea of our multidimensionality.
and then starts his ‘new draft’ on a ‘clean sheet’. Martin Leer states, ‘Malouf is not interested in the power
Through his technical mastery and sense of whimsy in of the human mind to create something new and startling,
this poem, Malouf conflates the mystery of nature—of but in the sharp shock of déjà vu: those moments when we
what causes a flock of thousands of individual birds to realise the meaning of something that was always lurking in
act as one—with the creative process, which causes one the back of our minds, but only becomes conscious when
individual to speak to and on behalf of thousands. It is as if we see it in its true place in the pattern of things.’ This
the creative process is as much a gift from God as are the statement could apply to most of the poems in this suite.
birds, and both are guided by a kind of unseen grace. The introduction of ‘midnight’ signifies that a
transformation is taking place, and this transformation

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again may be death. The last stanza is consumed by a Darkness gives way to ‘The Rapture’, here meant to
paradoxical, Escher-like image of a sleeping cat dreaming of represent both literal overwhelming joy but also, in the
someone dreaming of her and within his dreams, pats her. Biblical sense, the moment when believers in Christ will
The meditation on the cat draws us out of ourselves, and be lifted to Heaven at His second coming. This section of
inspires us to contemplate the connectedness of all living the poem is coloured by the repeated use of hendiadys,
things through our imagination, and transports Malouf, again to reflect the duality of man: ‘being seized / and
and now the responder, to existential, multidimensional taken’, ‘trembled and cracked open’, ‘the moment / and
thoughts about the human condition. As Bill Ashcroft all / time’, and finally ‘swept up and taken’. There seems
states, ‘Malouf is fascinated by ordinary objects, first to be a paradox in the third pairing as one moment
because they are luminous with possibility, and second cannot equal all time, but for Malouf, it does exactly that.
because they disrupt our myth of the linearity of time. Because of our multidimensionality, we are able to exist in
Objects will lead us into the past as well as into the future.’ one moment of space and time, but remember everything
before us and imagine everything that will come in the
future. This is the grace of the human being, and the
‘Towards Midnight’ reason we are tasked with the responsibility of caring for
The idea of midnight is reprised in ‘Towards Midnight’, our environment—we are specially created by God. This
a triptych and another meditation on death and rebirth. section of the poem is also colored by enjambment which
The poem is dedicated to Malouf ’s friend in Italy, Joan mirrors the moment of confusion at transformation to
Tesei, on her passing, and as such the idea of death makes spirit, ‘less / a breaking than a breaking / out’. There is
sense here. The poem with its three parts is complex and comfort here, and perhaps Malouf is comforting himself
phrases are reiterated, causing us to reconsider their new as he considers the loss of his friend.
meanings at different stages of the meditation.
The first section, ‘The Cup’, begins with what appears to ‘Earth Hour’
be a cup that holds ‘darkness’ and its contrast, ‘sunlight’--a In the eponymous poem, Malouf arguably moves to a
pattern repeated throughout this suite. This juxtaposition cautionary approach to his didacticism, as he scolds
reflects the dual nature of man again, recalls life and its responders for smugly and glibly living in ‘McMansions’
opposite death, and represents the human body. Malouf foolishly thinking their extravagance can be mitigated
moves us to the physical, and inserts the person with if they turn their lights out an hour a year and give
‘I’ into the poem, making the suggested body concrete. a gold coin donation to help environmental efforts.
Here the persona revels in the magnificence of the body While Dennis Haskell calls Malouf ‘by temperament an
through the act of breathing, and a sense of peace is optimist’, here we see the opposite. The fourth word in
connoted by the presence of the very body, here called a the poem is ‘our’ and this collective pronoun is significant
‘guardian angel / of the ordinary / and of this world’. The as Malouf wants responders to see environmentalism as
power of the persona’s mind makes sense of ‘what sleep a universal concern. The repetition of ‘earth hour’ at the
for a time / has scattered’ through memory, however end of the first stanza is tongue in cheek as he means
sometimes these memories are ‘bitter- / sweet’, the our own deaths, but the phrase itself has a connotation
enjambment here echoing the pain past recollections can of the doomsday clock heralding the point of man-made
bring, especially if they are of a deceased friend. global catastrophe (we are supposed to be at two minutes
From the quotidian cup—and we can think back to Bill to midnight, incidentally). The clock is a metaphor for
Ashcroft’s statement about Malouf ’s fascination with threats to humanity from unchecked technological and
ordinary objects to serve as portals to the past or the scientific advances. Responders are reminded again of our
future—we reach the transformational through the connection with nature and the animal world through
eponymous section, ‘Towards Midnight’. Midnight is the the repeated collective first person pronoun, ‘we are feral
witching hour, a time where day and night seem to exist / at heart, unhouseled creatures’. Malouf implores us to
in one instant. Here, the feeling of unease initiated in the remember the truth of our primordial selves, rather than
last stanza of the first section continues. Malouf draws our be caught up with trappings of materialism and supposed
attention to the shadow self, the ‘upstart angel’ or ‘visitant progress. His use of oxymoron in ‘accommodating
lurker’. Enjambment here between ‘a stranger’ and ‘upstart tomb’ in the last line reveals the paradox of living in a
angel’ conveys the disturbance from these dark thoughts, ‘Shatzkammer’, a treasure house, which we’ve made into
and the complexities of life’s experiences. The image of a midden, or a dump for domestic waste. The tone here
the ‘late guest’ in the final stanza suggests that the human is quite punitive, and should engender in the responder
condition is one where we wrestle with our demons, but a quick embracing environmentalism, and the realisation
still welcome this struggle as part of life. The room in this that our time here is finite and should be appreciated.
section is a metaphor for the mind.

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‘Aquarius II’ something, in this case, a life, and also reminds us of


Malouf ’s purpose to make his poetry accessible and
Martin Leer states that, ‘Malouf ’s topography of the inclusive of everyone, in our common humanity through
psyche seems to reject the Freudian iceberg image of this common phrase. Malouf after all admits that he
conscious and subconscious. It is more concerned is making an exit: ‘I leave the room / to its play, sacred
with out and inner than with upper and lower, more perhaps, with salt and sun-motes.’ Again, he imagines the
concerned with perception and more conscious of its life of a space beyond the time in which he can perceive
own language as a means of perception.’ The final poem it, but assumes it has its own life, even though he can no
in the suite recalls with circularity the opening poem, and longer experience it. This idea of some kind of life after
reflects textual integrity as Malouf focuses on the cyclical death fits in nicely with the idea of the cyclical structure
nature of life. While ‘Aquarius’ was a more generalised of the suite, and indicates the textual integrity of the poem
reflection on our dual existence, this poem takes the and the suite.
same specific location near water —presumably of the
Aquarius apartment block on the ocean in the Gold Final word
Coast—as its starting point for a rumination on that
same topic. The poem is about death, and yet is about Teaching at a Lebanese Maronite Catholic College, our
rebirth. Remembering that Malouf is an octogenarian faculty was delighted to find that David Malouf ’s poetry
at the time of writing, he arguably links himself to other had made its way onto the HSC Advanced English
great composers who have left the stage. One reference prescriptions list for the new syllabus back in 2019 and as
is to Mozart, ‘the first four downward / notes of K.581’ you see from the notes above each of the selected poems
and the direct naming, ‘Mozart’. The music referenced adds a richness to teaching and learning experiences. The
was written in 1789 and is one of Mozart’s last pieces of inclusion of the suite of poems from the book Earth Hour
writing, so this knowledge of a final piece of writing by was central to our new pattern of study, and dictated
a great composer connotes that sense of legacy Malouf subsequent chess moves. When we first started teaching
wants to communicate through this volume of poetry. the poems, we weren’t sure how they would be received
by our students as the subject matter is more existential
The other reference may be more oblique, but again
than the average 17 or 18 year-old might be inclined to
arguably the final stanza of the poem could be said to
explore, but the reception has been positive. In addition
recall Shakespeare’s Macbeth in Act V, Scene 5, when
to enjoying the poems, our students have performed well
he laments at the end of his trials, ‘Life’s but a walking
on this section of the HSC in our limited run. Malouf
shadow, a poor player / That struts and frets his hour
has added a sense of multi-dimensionality and multi-
upon the stage, / And then is heard no more’. The feeling
temporality with poems spanning infant, present and
of the ‘little drummer’ making his ‘ado’ with the ‘fax /
older selves.
and fiddle’ having ‘had their say’, is like an actor making
an exit after a performance, or a person about to slough Malouf has said that ‘Poems often discover something
off his mortal coil after the sturm and drang of life. The the poet doesn’t know’, according to critic Mike Ladd,
word ‘ado’ seems to be an aural pun, as its literal meaning and this admission is surely what he intended with his
is of a commotion, bustle or tumult, which can be a volume, Earth Hour, that these poems would go on long
metaphor for life; however, when pronounced, the word after his own physical life—like the immortality attained
sounds similar to ‘adieu’, the French colloquialism for by Mozart and Shakespeare—instructing and awakening
‘good bye’, which literally translates to ‘to God’. future generations to the reality of the unity of all living
creatures, and an awareness that we with our dual natures
The aural pun communicates Malouf ’s worldview in an
are acutely positioned to serve as stewards of the Earth.
instant—that human reality is comprised of the bustle
of life and the reality of our coming death, all in one We have made it a habit to hold a painting session as one
breath. The final juxtaposition of ‘to call it / a night, of our last module lessons, asking students to select their
call it a day’, colloquially reiterates Malouf ’s insistence favourite quote from one of the poems and represent
that we remember our dual natures and the balance of it through watercolour. The students consistently come
everything in the universe as we can only see the light away saying it was ‘the best’ English lesson they’ve
of stars because of the darkness surrounding them. had! I’m never sure how to take that, because it’s… art.
The colloquialism of ‘call it a day’ signifies the end of Somehow that conflation seems a fitting conclusion to
draw from this text.

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