Name: Reem Almuammar

Reflection on Mistakes Report

Review your descriptive essay after I provided you with feedback. Choose some of the main issues that I highlighted or commented on
them and fill in the following table:
Your Mistake Your Correction How these feedback on your mistakes are helpful in
future writing

Punctuation ( the use of Use the comma and full stop instead of I can now pay attention to the punctuation
commas and semi colon ) semi colon

Use of conjunctions (though) I should use however instead of though I can now pay attention to my choice of conjunctions
because it’s more formal

Use of vocabulary ( a bit too Use better vocabulary such as Overly I now have more knowledge of vocabulary that I can
excited) excited use later

Contractions (I’ll) Use I will instead I now know to use the full phrase instead of a
contraction