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Organizing A News Story453
Organizing A News Story453
Inverted-Pyramid Style
• The lede
• The body of the story
• The conclusion
When to Use Inverted-Pyramid
• If your story demands that you get to the
point ASAP
• Breaking news stories frequently use the
inverted-pyramid lede
Body of the Story
• Direct quotes
– Use if the statement is
clear and does not need
clarification
– Use if it is particularly
memorable or striking
– Use if the person is well-
known and it adds
credibility to the story
Example
“Westwood has become a beacon that
attracts people who have nothing to do,” said
Sgt. John Bradbury of the West Los Angeles
Police Department. “Minors cause problems
with overcrowding, drinking, drugs and
fighting.”
Quotes vs. Paraphrasing
• Paraphrasing
– Use when statement is hard to understand or
technical
– Use when statement can be summarized better
for the flow of your story
Example
Beginning the first weekend in May,
West LAPD will resume periodic curfew
sweeps and mounted patrols, said Linda
Arneal, coordinator of the Westwood
Village Merchants Association.
Hourglass Style
• An alternative type of
writing news
• Begins with summary
lede where main news is
high in story
• A few paragraphs later,
the story contains a turn
that transitions into a
narrative style
Hourglass Style
• A turn is a transitional
paragraph that is used to
tell the chronology of the
story
– Example:
• “Police gave this account
of the latest domestic
violence:”
• “According to police,
eyewitnesses describe the
event this way…”
After the Turn