Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with patches of clear, accurate language.

However control of tense sequence is insufficient to sustain clear progression of events or ideas. On line
exercises and websites like scholastic.com can help in improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb
agreement techniques. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.

1. Your excellent attitude is reflected in the work you do. Your sentence structures show
variation to create natural fluency and your precise vocabulary is enough to convey intended
shades of meaning. Identification of Fact and Opinion, comprehension skills and contextual
interpretation of words are successfully carried out in Reading paper. Keep up your efforts!

Alian`s work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Paragraphs do show some unity, although
links are sometimes absent or inappropriate. The response to the paper is relevant, although originality
and proper evidence of planning are lacking. Utilise summer vacations by reading Classics and practice
of international competitive tests like IELTS will contribute in refining all language skills. Rigorous
practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.

You have demonstrated comprehension of complex written materials, drawing on knowledge of

complex language structures and vocabulary. You can easily understand figurative language and
determine meaning of unfamiliar vocabulary words from context, even in linguistically complex
academic texts. Keep up your spirits! Utilise summer vacations by reading Classics and practice of
international competitive tests like IELTS will contribute in refining all language skills.

Your positive attitude is reflected in your work. You demonstrate the use of varied sentence structure,
the skill of using different lengths and types of sentences for particular effects and sustain a logical
progression of events. You have displayed a growing awareness of the expressiveness of words and the
conventions of written language with consistency and accuracy. Rigorous practice of Past papers is
recommended.

Makik Ahmed`s work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually
adequate to convey intended shades of meaning, though idioms are absent altogether. The things which
will irrefutably improve reading and writing skills are addressing all required points in details and giving
organised information to support personal opinion. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended
during summer vacation.

Affan tends to work too quickly, which results in many careless errors. He can help himself by managing
the time prudently and using the given information relevantly. Rigorous practice of Past papers is
recommended during summer vacation.

Abdullah writes fascinating stories, exhibit organizational skills and does neat & thorough work by
consolidating complex grammatical structures, wide and precise vocabulary and flawless punctuation
and spelling. Writing reviews of movies, books and political programmes would endorse expression as
well as analytical skills. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.
Nofal takes pride in his work by communicating creatively, using a varied range of vocabulary, sentence
structures and linguistic devices. His composition is complex, sophisticated, possibly tense, and contains
devices such as flashbacks. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.

Mursab demonstrates initiative by exhibiting good understanding of purpose and clear awareness of
situation and audience. He has displayed a growing awareness of the expressiveness of words and the
conventions of written language with consistency and accuracy. His competency in all the syllabus
contents is excellent. All he needs is to maintain the same level of zeal and painstaking work. Rigorous
practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.

You demonstrate initiative by exhibiting good understanding of purpose and clear awareness of
situation and audience. All you need is to maintain the same level of zeal and painstaking work.
Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended.

Hamza demonstrates a logical progression of ideas with a clear focus and expresses ideas clearly
and correctly. Response in both papers is consistently relevant. Rigorous practice of Past papers
is recommended during summer vacation.

Your positive attitude is reflected in your work. You exhibit some variety of sentence structures.
You incorporate complex words into the sentences but need to keep them accordingly. Both
papers are managed enthusiastically. Utilize vacation by reading good books and visit websites
for the analysis and synopsis of the books. Rigorous practice of Past papers is also recommended
during summer vacation.

Rafay`s work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually adequate
to convey intended shades of meaning, though idioms are absent altogether. Reading and Writing skills
will irrefutably improve by addressing all required points in details and giving organised information to
support personal opinion. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended during summer vacation.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Instructions of Directed writing

and minute intricacies of Narrative require your focus. Practice of Past papers and international
competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

You demonstrate a logical progression of ideas with a clear focus; however you tend to work too
quickly, which results in many careless errors. Response in both papers is consistently relevant. Practice
of Past papers and international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language
skills.

Saad imtiaz

You write fascinating stories, exhibit organizational skills and do neat & thorough work by consolidating
complex grammatical structures. .You can easily understand figurative language and determine
meaning of unfamiliar vocabulary words from context, even in linguistically complex academic texts;
however spellings need to be focused. Practice of Past papers and international competitive tests like
IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually adequate to
convey intended shades of meaning. . However control of tense sequence is insufficient to sustain clear
progression of events or ideas. On line exercises and websites like scholastic.com can help in improving
Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement techniques

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually adequate to
convey intended shades of meaning, though idioms are absent altogether. The things which will
irrefutably improve reading and writing skills are addressing all required points in details and giving
organized information to support personal opinion. Follow Action plan. Practice of Past papers and
international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

You tend to work too quickly, which results in many careless errors. You can help yourself by managing
the time prudently and using the given information relevantly . On line exercises and websites like
scholastic.com can help in improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement techniques.
Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended. v

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually adequate to
convey intended shades of meaning.

You tend to work too quickly, which results in many careless errors. You can help yourself by managing
the time prudently and using the given information relevantly . Follow Action plan. Practice of Past
papers and international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

You demonstrate initiative by exhibiting good understanding of purpose and clear awareness of
situation and audience. You have displayed a growing awareness of the expressiveness of words and the
conventions of written language with consistency and accuracy. Practice of Past papers and
international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

Momin an expansive knowledge of English Language 1123 and communicates appropriately, with a clear
awareness of purpose, audience and register. The essay has effective details creating character and
setting,helping to create effective atmospheres.
Practice of Reading paper will elevate grades in future.

You have tried to establish communication, although weight of error caused some blurring. Most of
your sentences are simple and repetitive in structure. Frequent errors in verb forms and haphazard
changes of tense confuse meaning. Vocabulary conveys meaning but too simple and imprecise. .
Directed writing requires clear understanding of statement as well as rubric. Practice of Past papers and
international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

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Hamayal`s written essay is well developed, logical, even complex in collating references.

Moiz has followed the directions well in Directed writing however in Argumentative essay logical
development of idea from specific to general with evidences is missing. Identification of Fact and
Opinion, comprehension skills and contextual interpretation of words require a lot of practice of
Reading paper.

You have followed the directions well in Directed writing however in Argumentative essay
logical development of idea from specific to general with evidences is missing. Practice of Past
papers will contribute in refining all language skills.

You have followed the directions well in Directed writing however Descriptive writing lacks
vivid imagery and figurative expression; it is rather turned into a narrative. Vocabulary conveys
meaning but too simple. On line exercises and websites like grammar bytes can help in
improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement techniques. Rigorous practice of
Past papers is recommended.

Sohaib has followed the directions well in Directed writing however one word essay is immature due to
subjective approach. Identification of Fact and Opinion,use of cohesive devices in
Summary,comprehension skills and contextual interpretation of words require a lot of practice of
Reading paper. Practice of Past papers will contribute in refining all language skills.
You have attempted to address Summary but stretches of concentrated lifting and lack of
innovative vocabulary marred its originality. Similarly use of cohesive devices in Summary, and
contextual interpretation of words require a lot of practice of Reading paper. Practice of Past
papers will contribute in refining all language skills.

Writing paper has been missed by him.

You have extracted content points accurately however Summary lacked cohesive devices and
vocabulary. Similarly comprehension skills and contextual interpretation of words require a lot of
practice of Reading paper..

You have attempted to address Summary but stretches of concentrated lifting and lack of
innovative vocabulary marred its originality. Directed writing needs to be focused to avoid
redundant use of words. Practice of Past papers will contribute in refining all language skills.

You have extracted content points accurately however Summary lacked cohesive devices and
vocabulary. Similarly identification of Fact and Opinion, comprehension skills and contextual
interpretation of words require a lot of practice of Reading paper. In Argumentative essay logical
development of ideas from specific to general with evidences is missing. Directed writing needs to
befocused to avoid redundant use of words.

Hassan has extracted content points accurately however Summary took more space than allotted lines.
Similarly identification of Fact and Opinion, comprehension skills and contextual interpretation of words
require a lot of practice of Reading paper. Directed writing needs to be

focused and concise. Composition is left incomplete so work upon time management.

You write organized, unified and creative texts. Your composition exhibits liveliness and interest value.
You have shown great improvement with the writing skills however comprehension skills and contextual
interpretation of words require a lot of practice of Reading paper.
Rafay encapsulated content points in Summary using cohesive devices however content points are
carelessly extracted. Directed writing needs to be focused to avoid redundant use of words. One word
essay could have been dealt with the formula of DAFTI.

You encapsulated content points in Summary using cohesive devices however content points are
carelessly extracted. Directed writing needs to be focused to avoid redundant use of words. Practice of
Past papers and international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language
skills.

You encapsulated correct content points in Summary Question however inferential questions in
Comprehension passage require strenuous reading. . Directed writing needs to be focused to
avoid redundant use of words. Practice of Past papers will contribute in refining all language
skills.

You encapsulated correct content points in Summary Question however inferential questions in
Comprehension passage require strenuous reading . Voice and tone of Magazine article is entirely
ignored in Directed Writing. Narrative writing would improve by endorsing characterization and other
cogent details.

You have shown some improvement in your written expression by engaging interest of the
reader through varied and interesting text; however, you need to work on your comprehension
skills and punctuation. Consistent exposure to quality reading material will be beneficial for the
development of verbal and written expression
Excellent performance throughout the term! You possess good listening skills and your writing is
organized, imaginative and clear. You write appropriately for different audiences and can
sequence sentences and extend ideas logically, using correct grammatical structure. Keep up the
good work Musa!
A very causal attitude towards learning and submission of work has resulted in
vague and repetitive answers. Your inability to complete your exam in the given
P1: 26 / 50
time has adversely affected your grades. You must cultivate a serious attitude P2: 27 / 50
towards attending classes and completing the given assignments in time to
come up to the class level.
You have shown a desire to improve, yet you need to be more consistent in your work. Try to be
more reciprocal during class discussions. Regular attendance and practice is advised to come up
to the required standard of the class. Extensive reading can help to further improve your written
expression

You are a respectful student and try to participate in class discussions. A faulty sentence structure and repetition of
the same ideas have rendered your answers incomprehensible and incoherent. You need to work on your spelling,
punctuation and creative writing by reading newspapers and other fictional/non-fictional material which will further
develop your understanding of the subject. Learn to manage time effectively while attempting the paper and revise
your work before submitting it.

You have shown marked improvement in written expression. You employ a range of ideas and
material to enhance the effectiveness and quality of your compositions. Your hard work makes
your assignments effective and reflects the time you spend on planning and developing. Good
job!

You encapsulated correct content points in Summary Question however inferential questions in
Comprehension passage require strenuous reading . Voice and tone of Magazine article is entirely
ignored in Directed Writing. Comprehension skills and contextual interpretation of words require a lot
of practice of Past papers.

You have demonstrated the use of varied sentence structure with the skill of using different lengths and
types of sentences for particular effects. However composition depicts misunderstanding of topic and
Directed writed needs to be focused. In Reading paper Summary lacked cohesive devices and
vocabulary. Similarly identification of Fact and Opinion, comprehension skills and contextual
interpretation of words require a lot of practice of Reading paper.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. The use of vocabulary is usually adequate to
convey intended shades of meaning, though idioms are absent altogether. Reading and writing skills will
irrefutably improve by evaluating newspaper articles and giving organized information to support
personal opinion. Follow Action plan. Practice of Past papers and international competitive tests like
IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

Your essay is well developed, logical, even complex in collating references. Directed writing requires
equal expansion of bullet points. You can easily understand figurative language and determine meaning
of unfamiliar vocabulary words from context, even in linguistically complex academic texts; however
spellings need to be focused. Practice of Past papers and international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT
will contribute in refining all language skills.

You have demonstrated the use of varied sentence structure with the skill of using different lengths and
types of sentences for particular effects; however Directed writing requires equal expansion of bullet
points. Spellings need to be focused. Practice of Past papers and international competitive tests like
IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.
Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with patches of clear, accurate language;
however you have the capability to bolt from the blue with little concentration. Practice of Past papers
and international competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

Your essay is well developed, logical, even complex in collating references. Directed writing requires
clear understanding of statement as well as rubric. Your composition is complex, sophisticated, possibly
tense. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended.

You have tried to establish communication, although weight of error caused some blurring. Most of your
sentences are simple and repetitive in structure. Frequent errors in verb forms and haphazard changes
of tense confuse meaning. Vocabulary conveys meaning but too simple and imprecise. . Directed writing
requires clear understanding of statement as well as rubric. Practice of Past papers and international
competitive tests like IELTS , SAT will contribute in refining all language skills.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Paragraphs do show some unity, although
links are sometimes absent or inappropriate. Utilize time by reading good books and visit websites for
the analysis and synopsis of the books. Rigorous practice of Past papers is also recommended

Igcse remarks
Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. Tense atmosphere and
dangerous scene is well portrayed and accurately related to the passage. Sufficient range of vocabulary
is used to express ideas with subtlety and precision. Selected words , phrases and effects are identified
and imagery is tackled with some precision and imagination. In Summary , content points are extracted
clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words. Writing paper demonstrated consistent
sense of audience with effective use of reading material to support the argument.

The response in Reading paper answers all three bullets, though perhaps not equally well. Some ideas
are developed but the ability to sustain them may not be consistent. Language is clear and vocabulary
used is sufficient. A satisfactory attempt is made to identify words and phrases and their effect is
explained in a very general way. In Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and
fluently , however frequent lifting of phrases is used in Summary. Sense of audience is mostly secure in
Writing paper. In Narrative plot is convincing with description, characterization, climax and with cogent
details.

The response in Reading paper answers all three bullets, though perhaps not equally well. Some ideas
are developed but the ability to sustain them may not be consistent. Language is clear and vocabulary
used is sufficient. Writing paper demonstrated little sense of audience with slight use of reading
material to support the argument. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended.
Opportunities for development in Reading paper are rarely taken with uneven focus on bullets.
Words and phrases are correctly identified but their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained.
Required content points in Summary are not extracted. Writing paper demonstrated little sense of
audience with slight use of reading material to support the argument Rigorous practice of Past
papers is recommended

The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but the response may not reflect the range
of complexity of ideas in the original. Supporting detail is used occasionally. Opportunities for
development are rarely taken with uneven focus on bullets. Words and phrases are correctly identified
but their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained. Content points are well extracted however Summary
included repetition and lifted phrases. Writing paper demonstrated little sense of audience with slight
use of reading material to support the argument. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended

1. Reading paper reveals lean references to the passage . Content is insubstantial and
language is too limited to express shades of meaning. Words are accurately identified
though their effect is not specifically explained. Please, respond comprehensibly,
punctuate and spell accurately and show unity of paragraphs.Rigorous practice of Past
papers is recommended.
2. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but the response may not
reflect the range of complexity of ideas in the original. Supporting detail is used
occasionally. Opportunities for development are rarely taken with uneven focus on
bullets. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended
3.
Reading paper reveals little reference to the passage. Content is insubstantial and language is too
limited to express shades of meaning. Writing paper demonstrated little sense of audience with slight
use of reading material to support the argument. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. Descriptive writing comprised of well-defined and developed images contributing
to the overall picture. However in Reading paper format of Interview is not followed. Words and
phrases are correctly identified but their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained. Content points are
well extracted however Summary included repetition and lifted phrases. Rigorous practice of Past
papers is recommended

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. . Descriptive writing comprised of well-defined and developed images
contributing to the overall picture. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but
supporting detail is used occasionally. Words and phrases are correctly identified however their effect
on Reader’s mind is not explained. In Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and
fluently and summarized in own words.
Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. Interview writing in Reading paper reveals misunderstanding of rubric. Selected
words , phrases and effects are identified and imagery is tackled with some precision and imagination.
In Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words.

Interview writing in Reading paper reveals misunderstanding of rubric. Selected words , phrases and
effects are identified and imagery is tackled with some precision and imagination. In Summary , content
points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently however cohesive devices were missing. Sense of
audience is mostly secure in Writing paper however supporting details to hold the argument require
detailed analysis of the passage.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is
sustained use of supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. However,
writer’s effect question is misunderstood and needs practice. Detailed analysis of Exam reports is
recommended.

The overall meaning is never in doubt, but errors are sufficiently frequent and serious to hamper
precision and distract reader from content. Please, respond comprehensibly, punctuate and spell
accurately and show unity of paragraphs.
You incorporate complex words into the sentences but need to keep them accordingly
You incorporate complex words into the sentences but need to keep them accordingly Your work
is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with patches of clear, accurate language. There
is sustained use of supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach.
Please, respond comprehensibly, punctuate and spell accurately and show unity of paragraphs.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. Tense atmosphere and
dangerous scene is well portrayed and accurately related to the passage. Words and phrases are
correctly identified however their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained. In Summary , content points
are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words. Writing paper
demonstrated little sense of audience with slight use of reading material to support the argument.
Descriptive writing comprised of well-defined and developed images contributing to the overall picture

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but format of
Interview is not followed. Words and phrases are correctly identified however their effect on Reader’s
mind is not explained. Content points are unfocused in Summary .Practice of Past papers along with

Detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. Tense atmosphere and
dangerous scene is well portrayed and accurately related to the passage .Words and phrases are
correctly identified however their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained. In Summary , content points
are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words. Writing paper
demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to support the
argument. Detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. In Narrative plot is convincing with description, characterization, climax and with
cogent details. Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. However
Comprehension and Summary need more practice.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. However Comprehension and
Summary need more practice . Sense of audience is mostly secure in Writing paper. Practice of Past
papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Response in Language Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. In Narrative plot is
convincing with description, characterization, climax and with cogent details. Your hard work
makes your assignments effective and reflects the time you spend on planning and developing.
Good job!

The response in Reading paper answers all three bullets, though perhaps not equally well. Some ideas
are developed but the ability to sustain them may not be consistent. Language is clear and vocabulary
used is sufficient. A satisfactory attempt is made to identify words and phrases and their effect is
explained in a very general way. In Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and
fluently and summarized in own words. . Sense of audience is mostly secure in Writing paper. In
Narrative plot is convincing with description, characterization, climax and with cogent details. . Practice
of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. In Narrative plot is convincing with description, characterization, climax and with
cogent details . Interview writing in Reading paper reveals misunderstanding of rubric. Opportunities for
development are rarely taken with uneven focus on bullets. Words and phrases are correctly identified
but their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained. . In Summary , content points are extracted clearly,
concisely and fluently and summarized in own words. Practice of Past papers along with detailed
analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. Tense atmosphere and
dangerous scene is well portrayed and accurately related to the passage. .Words and phrases are
correctly identified and imagery is tackled with some precision and imagination. In Summary , content
points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words. Sense of audience is
mostly secure in Writing paper. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is
recommended.

The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but the response does not reflect the range
of complexity of ideas in the original. Words and phrases are correctly identified but their effect on
Reader’s mind is not explained. Summary needs more focus and use of cohesive devices. Writing paper
employs some evidences of evaluation. . Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam
reports is recommended.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument.. In Narrative plot is convincing with description, characterization, climax and with
cogent details. Response in Reading Paper reveals sustained use of supporting detail , contributing to
strong sense of purpose and approach. Tense atmosphere and dangerous scene is well portrayed and
accurately related to the passage. Sufficient range of vocabulary is used to express ideas with subtlety
and precision. Selected words , phrases and effects are identified and imagery is tackled with some
precision and imagination. In Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and
summarized in own words

Your paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience. In Narrative plot is convincing with description,
characterization, climax and with cogent details. Sufficient range of vocabulary is used to express ideas
with subtlety and precision. Keep up your efforts!

Response in Reading Paper reveals sustained use of supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of
purpose and approach. Sufficient range of vocabulary is used to express ideas with subtlety and
precision. Descriptive essay had interesting images and a range of detail, helping to create effective
atmospheres. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended to
get high grades.

Article writing in Writing paper reveals misunderstanding of rubric and supporting details to hold the
argument require detailed analysis of the passage. Narrative lacks a strong plot. In Summary, content
points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently however cohesive devices were missing. In Reading
paper Journal Writing is almost not done. Words`Effect Question is missed out. Completion of class
assignments and rigorous practice of Past papers is desperately required.

Article writing in Writing paper reveals misunderstanding of tone and supporting details to hold the
argument require detailed analysis of the passage. Narrative lacks a strong plot. In Summary, content
points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently however cohesive devices were missing. The
response in Reading paper answers all three bullets, though perhaps not equally well. Some ideas are
developed but the ability to sustain them may not be consistent. A satisfactory attempt is made to
identify words and phrases.. Completion of class assignments and rigorous practice of Past papers is
desperately required.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. Narrative writing comprised of well-defined and developed images contributing
to the overall picture. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well .Words and phrases
are correctly identified however their effect on Reader’s mind needs more detailed explanation. In
Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words.
Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Writing paper demonstrated consistent sense of audience with effective use of reading material to
support the argument. Descriptive writing comprised of well-defined and developed images contributing
to the overall picture. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well .Words and phrases
are correctly identified however their effect on Reader’s mind needs more detailed explanation. In
Summary , content points are extracted clearly, concisely and fluently and summarized in own words.
Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach however Summary question is
missed out. Sense of audience is mostly secure in Writing paper . Narrative needs a lot of practice.
Completion of class assignments and rigorous practice of Past papers is desperately required.

CORE REMARKS

You tend to work too quickly, which results in many careless errors. You can help himself by managing
the time prudently and using the given information relevantly. Comprehension questions require
retrieving of relevant information. A note taking in Exercise3 is carelessly done. You need to observe
conventions of paragraphing, punctuation and spelling.

You have attempted to address Summary but stretches of concentrated lifting and lack of innovative
vocabulary marred its originality. Retrieval of relevant information in comprehension questions was
well managed. You need to observe conventions of paragraphing, punctuation and spelling. Practice of
Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Sense of audience is mostly secure in the
paper however Narrative needs a lot of practice.

You have extracted content points accurately however Summary lacked cohesive devices and
vocabulary. Information is well-retrieved in comprehension questions. However last question of writing
a magazine article is not attempted. .

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning. Comprehension questions require retrieving
of relevant information. A note taking in Exercise3 is carelessly done. You need to observe conventions
of paragraphing, punctuation and spelling. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam
reports is recommended. Completion of class assignments and rigorous practice of Past papers is
desperately required.

You incorporate complex words into the sentences but need to keep them accordingly. There is
sustained use of supporting detail, contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. On line
exercises and websites like grammar bytes can help in improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-
verb agreement techniques. Rigorous practice of Past papers is recommended.

Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough reading of the passage. There is sustained use of
supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of purpose and approach. However indiscriminate
selection of ideas in Summary shows limited focus. Ideas in Writing paper are assimilated from the text
however there is evidence of some evaluation of ideas and opinions, both explicit and implicit. Practice
of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well but the response does not reflect the range
of complexity of ideas in the original. Words and phrases are correctly identified but their effect on
Reader’s mind is not explained. Indiscriminate selection of ideas in Summary shows limited focus. Sense
of audience is mostly secure in Writing paper. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of
Exam reports is recommended.

The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably well. Words and phrases are correctly identified
however their effect on Reader’s mind needs more detailed explanation . Indiscriminate selection of
ideas in Summary shows limited focus. Writing paper is missed out. Practice of Past papers along with
detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Opportunities for development in Reading paper are rarely taken with uneven focus on bullets. Words
and phrases are identified but their effect on Reader’s mind is not explained . Indiscriminate selection of
ideas in Summary shows limited focus. Ideas in Writing paper are assimilated from the text however
there is evidence of some evaluation of ideas and opinions, both explicit and implicit. . Practice of Past
papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Writing paper employs successfully assimilated and evaluated ideas and opinions, both explicit and
implicit to give a developed, sophisticated response. However opportunities for development in
Reading paper are rarely taken with uneven focus on bullets. Words and phrases are identified but their
effect on Reader’s mind is not explained . Indiscriminate selection of ideas in Summary shows limited
focus. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

Writing paper employs successfully assimilated and evaluated ideas and opinions, both explicit and
implicit to give a developed, sophisticated response. Response in Reading Paper reveals a thorough
reading of the passage. There is sustained use of supporting detail , contributing to strong sense of
purpose and approach. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is
recommended.

Ideas in Writing paper are assimilated from the text however there is evidence of some evaluation of
ideas and opinions, both explicit and implicit. The passage in Reading paper has been read reasonably
well but the response does not reflect the range of complexity of ideas in the original. Practice of Past
papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is recommended.

In Reading paper words and phrases are identified however their effect on Reader’s mind needs more
detailed explanation . Indiscriminate selection of ideas in Summary shows limited focus. Ideas in Writing
paper are assimilated from the text however there is evidence of some evaluation of ideas and opinions,
both explicit and implicit. Practice of Past papers along with detailed analysis of Exam reports is
recommended.

Grade VIII Remarks

identify relevant information and select correct details from a wide range of texts
respond to a written stimulus and show awareness of appropriate register and style

organise ideas into coherent paragraphs using a range of appropriate linking devices

produce written texts that show good control of punctuation and spelling

produce responses with a wide range of language structures (i.e. grammatical and lexical)

Your enthusiasm in English is evident in your class participation.

You demonstrate initiative by exhibiting good understanding of purpose and clear awareness of
situation and audience. However, Ingrained weakness of punctuation, i.e. the habitual comma replacing
the necessary full stop should be avoided. On line exercises and websites like grammar bytes can help in
improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement techniques.

You take pride in your work by communicating creatively, using a varied range of vocabulary, sentence
structures and linguistic devices.

Consistent exposure to quality reading material will be beneficial for further development of verbal and
written expression.

Momin

You take great pride in all of the work you do and always do a neat job. However assignments need to
be submitted on time. You exhibit some variety of sentence structures. You incorporate complex words
into the sentences but need to keep them accordingly. Both papers are managed enthusiastically.
Utilize vacation by reading good books and visit websites for the analysis and synopsis of the books.

Your work is sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with patches of clear, accurate
language. There is some variety of sentence length and structure in your work, though not
always for particular purpose. On line exercises and websites like scholastic.com can help in
improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement techniques.

2. You exhibit organizational skills by maintaining your written work highly accurate, apart from
very occasional slips and by writing varied sentence structures for particular effects.
Sufficient range of vocabulary is used to express ideas with subtlety and precision . Keep up
your efforts! You need to work on your spelling, punctuation and creative writing by
reading newspapers and other fictional/non-fictional material which will further develop
your understanding of the subject

Zayan! The overall meaning of your work is never in doubt, but timely submission of class
assignment is required. Errors do occur in irregular verb forms, but control of tense sequence is
 sufficient to sustain clear progression of events and ideas. On line exercises and websites like
grammar bytes can help in improving Spellings, Punctuation and Subject-verb agreement
techniques.

Ibrahim! You have shown some improvement but your growth is not where it should be at this
point. Analysis requires logical development of ideas with references. You need to observe
conventions of paragraphing, punctuation and spelling.

1. Izhan! You have shown some improvement in your written expression by engaging
interest of the reader through varied and interesting text; however, you need to work on
your analytical skills to improve evaluative questions. Please, punctuate and spell
accurately and show unity of paragraphs.
Noah! You take pride in your work by communicating creatively, using a varied range of
vocabulary, sentence structures and linguistic devices. You demonstrate initiative by exhibiting
good understanding of purpose and clear awareness of situation and audience. Utilize vacation by
reading “Forty rules of love” and visit websites for the analysis and synopsis of the books.

Rafay! The overall meaning of your work is never in doubt. Sufficient range of
vocabulary is used to express ideas with subtlety and precision. You need to work on
your spelling, punctuation and subject-verb agreement by practicing online exercises.
Websites like grammar bytes can help.

Umer! You exhibit organizational skills by maintaining your written work highly
accurate, apart from very occasional slips and by writing varied sentence structures for
particular effects. Utilize vacation by reading “Forty rules of love” and visit websites for
the analysis and synopsis of the books.

Rajeel! You have shown some improvement in your written expression by engaging
interest of the reader through varied and interesting text; however, you need to work on
your analytical skills to improve evaluative questions. Please, punctuate and spell
accurately and show unity of paragraphs. Utilize vacation by reading “Forty rules of
love” and visit E-Dawn for the analysis of the articles.

You have excellent linguistic skills; demonstrate an effect analysis supported by appropriate
references; exhibit a focused organization of ideas that is replete with a well thought out
structuring. Reading contemporary and classical novels will embellish your creative writing skills.
Zyan
Your performance is creditable. Sufficient range of vocabulary is used to express ideas
with subtlety and precision. Please, punctuate and spell accurately and show unity of
paragraphs. Utilize vacation by reading “Forty rules of love” and visit E-Dawn for the
analysis of the articles.