“CRITIQUE”

Every child has his or her own unique personality and characteristics. There are some
children who are more intelligent than others. Some of these children may even be gifted in
certain areas, but that does not mean they will always do well in school. Some children have a
lot of potential but just don’t have the drive to achieve their goals. These are the students who
parents often feel need to improve their grades so they can fit in with their peers and be
successful like everyone else.

In her essay "A Now Beginning Start from Within," Maria Taye Moya portrays her life in
a persimmon-darkened nightmare world. My parents have great expectations for me and are
pressing me to perform below my potential because they believed I was talented in many
areas. As I became older, I understood I was unable to continue. I discovered how to reject all
of their directives and encourage myself to express what I truly desire in life.

It was a very depressing essay, but what do you expect from a piece on heartbreak? It is
beautiful and clear and free of grammatical errors. She does a really good job of organizing
everything and making sure the reader can relate to what she's been through.

The greatest blessing in life is familial love. Parents bear a heavy burden because they
are the ones who guarantee a child's safety, happiness, and protection. The most challenging
and gratifying thing you'll ever do is likely to be being a parent. It can be magical to hold your
brand-new baby and watch as he or she takes in the world for the first time. My opinion is that
having a child opens you up to feelings that are nearly difficult to anticipate beforehand.
Additionally, we should always keep in mind that our children are more likely to feel confident
and upbeat when we do.