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Hi, Pedro.
I´m writing to ask your opinion.
We´ve just received the e-mail from de english academy. What do you think about pay Commented [nj1]: Spelling ‘the’
the material now? I know that it´s little money, but I´ll try to give them less than 20€. Commented [nj2]: ‘English’ - capital letter
Bye for now. Commented [nj3]: ‘about paying for’ verb should be in the
Kiss. gerund form after the preposition.
Commented [nj4]: ‘not much’
You also need to say how you feel. Remember to answer both parts of the question.

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Dear Sir/Madam:
I am Paloma Cadenas, an user of aptis web. Commented [nj5]: ‘a’
I have just received your email where you say that this website won´t be free any Commented [nj6]: ‘will not’ - remember not to use
more. I personally believe that we use your material because it is free. However, if it contractions with formal writing.
costs money, most of the students couldn´t afford it. Commented [nj7]: ‘will not be able to’
It strikes me that you could add some advertising. Or maybe, you could ask for young Commented [nj8]: Very good structure.
volunteers that offer their work while they found other job. Commented [nj9]: ‘find’
Even so, if you prefer to earn money of your students, I think that it is better to open a Commented [nj10]: ‘another’
page of donations and each one of us will pay that we can. Also, you could be surprised
Commented [nj11]: ‘from’
with bigger revenue than 20€!
Commented [nj12]: Good content / development
Your faithfully.
Paloma

Some good language in places but you need to state your feelings more clearly and
say what you intend to do. Remember to explicitly answer both parts of the question
as this is an important requirement of the exam. This will also allow you to write a
more complete response.