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1. Yes, how to borrow it! I was 15 years old and I hadn´t gone out my village before.

I Commented [nj1]: It’s not clear what you mean here and
visited Madrid and it was a wonderful experience. how it is relevant to the question.
Commented [nj2]: Good use of the past perfect
2. In Spain I often visit Andalucía because I love to see flamenco´s concerts. The best Commented [nj3]: Good vocabulary
place to do it is Sevilla. I hope that you can travel there someday. Commented [nj4]: Just develop a little more by saying why.
Commented [nj5]: Good, but just a little short.
3. I remember my first time on a plane. I was reading a book when toke seat near to Commented [nj6]: Not clear
me Cristiano Ronaldo, my favorite football player.

Your responses are generally quite good. They just need more development. Try to
give information & reasons in your responses. This will help you meet the word
requirement for Part 3 which is 30 – 40 words.

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