S Criteria First Draft Final Draft

No.
1. Has a clear introduction that establishes the 1.5
topic. Ends with a thesis statement

(02)

2. Paper is organized into paragraphs that follow 1 (paragraphs

logical structure and transition, avoids are there but
repetition transition words
are weak)
(02)

3. Thesis is sufficiently supported by evidence 3 (The evidence

and reasoning, using paraphrases and quotes is loosely
from sources. Arguments are persuasive and arranged and
convincing, are able to prove the thesis could be framed
statement better, the
quotes take up
(05) space which
could be
paraphrased)
4. MLA format and Thesis Statement (02) 2

5. Conclusion is clear and effective at drawing the 1.5 (the choice

paper together of words could
be improved)
(02)

6. Standard English is used (correct grammar and 2

conventions)

(02)

11/15
TOTAL/15

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