Transscript of the speaking Part 2

Describe an important invention that you think has positively

influenced the human race.
You should say:
 What the invention is
 Who invented it
 What changes it brought
and explain how it has positively influenced the human race.

I would like to say something about the compass it is considered as one of the
greatest inventions in the old China and actually it was invented in the Chinchu
Dynasty in the ancient China and it was invented for the need of war cause it was
very useful for navigation it is work it worked it works through the magnetic
gravity of the globe it has a small pin in it and the pin always points to the souths
direction so that you can navigated navigates through it and I think it had an
breakthrough effect in human history cause when it was brought to the Europe it
helped to begin a new era of ???? I believe that it help Colombo to sailed across
the whole Antarctic ocean and then eventually find American continents and since
then the humans' history of connection has began and the whole world changed.
That's all thank you
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Fluency and Coherence

1. YOU SPEAK FLUENTLY partially, you can speak a little fluent, but basic
1. YOU USE COMPLEX SPEECH FLUENTLY no, you use basic language to
express yourself
2. YOU USE SIMPLE SPEECH FLUENTLY partially, you can talk about
something simple with some form of fluency
3. YOU DON’T SPEAK TOO SLOW no, you can speak a bit faster
2. YOU AVOID REPETITIONS no, there are still some repetions
1. YOUR REPETITIONS ARE CONTENT BASED AND NOT LANGUAGE
BASED No, the repetions are language based as you are searching to use
the correct tense forms
3. YOU AVOID PAUSES: no, there are still a lot of pauses
4. YOU DO NOT USE AUTO CORRECTIONS no, you still use some auto
correction
5. YOU USE DISCOURSE MARKERS AND COHESIVE DEVICES WELL partially,
you use some discourse markers and cohesive devices, but you could use more
6. YOU CAN SPEAK AT LENGTH partially, you can fill the 2 minutes but there
are still a lot of pauses and repetions, plus you use basic language to try to
speak at lenght

1. YOU CAN SPEAK AT LENGTH ABOUT ANY TOPIC, not

applicable as you only spoke about 1 topic

Lexical Resource
1. YOU USE A WIDE RANGE OF VOCABULARY partially, you use mostly basic
expression to talk about the topic apart from some more advanced ones here
and there
1. YOU USE YOUR VOCABULARY FLEXIBLY partially you still struggle
here and there to say exacly what you mean
2. YOU CAN CONVEY PRECISE MEANING partially the words you use can
convay precise meaning but you can use more complex vocabulary to
talk about the topic
3. YOU USE LESS COMMON IDIOMATIC LANGUAGE no, you use here
and there some more complex language but not really idiomatic
4. YOU CAN TALK ABOUT ANY TOPIC AT LENGTH not applicable as you
 only talked about 1 topic
2. YOUR VOCABULARY CHOICES DO NOT CAUSE COMPRESSION ISSUES
1. YOU HAVE GOOD AWARENESS OF STYLE partially, cause is a bit too
informal in this case
2. YOU HAVE GOOD AWARENESS OF COLLOCATIONS partially, you
have some awareness, but still make some mistakes. You also use some
basic language here and there without too many collocations
3. YOUR WORD CHOICES ARE CORRECT mostly, most of your choices
are correct but you still make some mistakes here and there
4. YOU HAVE NO PROBLEMS WITH WORD FORMATION yes, no issues
of word formation
3. YOU PARAPHRASE CORRECTLY WHEN NEEDED yes

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

1. YOU USE A WIDE RANGE OF GRAMMAR STRUCTURES partially, you

use some different tenses, you use the passive. But most grammar is still
simple use

1. YOU CAN USE THESE STRUCTURES FLEXIBLY mostly, the

structures that you use you seem to be able to use felxibly, tough some
mistakes occure

2. YOU PRODUCE ERROR FREE SENTENCES no, all sentences have some
form of mistake pressent

1. YOU DON’T HAVE ANY SYSTEMATIC ERRORS no, some of the

errors are styematic as when looking for the corrct tense

3. YOUR GRAMMAR USE DOES NOT CAUSE COMPREHENSION ISSUES

yes, eventhough there are some mistakes one can understand what is said and
meant
Pronunciation
1. YOU DON’T HAVE ISSUES WITH INDIVIDUAL SOUNDS no, you have some
systematic errors with individual sounds
1. INDIVIDUAL SOUNDS DO NOT CAUSE COMPREHENSION ISSUES
mostly, here and there there is some strain and one time a word is not
understandable
2. YOU DON’T HAVE ISSUES WITH WORDSTRESS partially, there are some
issues with word stress
1. WORD STRESS DOES NOT CAUSE COMPREHENSION ISSUES yes
3. YOU CAN USE DIFFERENT FEATURES OF CONNECTED SPEECH no, you are
not really using many feartures of connected speach and some are used
wrongly
4. YOU HAVE NO ISSUES WITH INTONATION mostly intonation is good
5. YOUR L1 ACCENT DOES NOT CAUSE ANY COMPREHENSION ISSUES
mostly, on one occasion there was an issue in understanding a word
 General feedback on target score
GOAL 6.5+ :

FLUENCY AND COHESION: more work needed

You have some issues with fluency. For this you need more practice speaking and
dealing with different topics as well as expanding your lexical resources

LEXICAL RESOURCES: more work needed

Though you use some more complex vocabulary you should go more toward idiomatic
language and more use of collocations. You also have to be a bit more careful with
your word choices. This means you need to expand your vocabulary more

GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY: more work needed

You make some systematic errors with articles and tenses. You need some more work
on this. You can auto correct most of your mistakes, the next step would be using
them correctly so autocorrect is no longer needed. You will need some more work on
the correct use of articles and this should be firstly done by more gap fill exercises
and trying to use it correctly in speech

PRONUNCIATION: more work needed

You have some typical Asian pronunciation issues, but most of the time they do not
cause any problems for comprehension.