ENVIRONMENT

It is a natural process (30) for animal species to become extinct (e.g.

Dinosaurs, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent (70)
this from happening.
Do you agree or disagree?

INTRO
- Lead-in Topic
- Paraphrase
- Opinion

NATURE >< HUMANS

NATURE (70) >< HUMANS (30)

HUMANS (30) NATURE (70)

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- GLOBAL WARMING -
(INDUSTRY, AGRICULTURE, -
HUNTING) -
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HOWEVER, THIS CANNOT BE -
CHANGED -
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- STOP INDUSTRY -> -
- AGRICULTURE -
- HUNTING -

NATURE = HUMANS
 NATURE HUMANS
- - REASON
- - REASON
- - REASON
- - SOLUTION
- - SOLUTION

NATURE (30) >< HUMANS (70)

- KEYWORD
Natural process, no reason to try to prevent

- OPINION
I never accept this thought. -> I DISAGREE WITH THIS IDEA/ STATEMENT.

I absolutely stand opposed to this opinion on the following grounds.

it is my personal belief that in fact ANIMALS should be preserved due to 2 principal reasons,
including their importance on maintaining the balance of nature and theirs intrinsic value.

IN MY OPINION, WHILE THE NATURAL SELECTION PLAYS A MINIMAL ROLE IN ANIMAL

EXTINCTION, HUMANS TAKE THE MAIN RESPONSIBILITY FOR THIS PROBLEM, WHICH
MUST BE SOLVED PROMPTLY.

From my point of view, human actions are the most major contributor to make animal species
disappear.

- OUTLINE

NATURAL SELECTION (30) PREVENTION (70)

THEREFORE, humans must try to find as

many solutions as possible.
 - Evolution - Law
-> some animals cannot adapt to this process + Heavy punishment for illegal hunters
(their genetic structures are not appropriate) -> control/ minimize wildlife crime
-> they are removed + Require factories to set up waste
treatment systems
- Global warming + climate change + Organic farming
-> ice melts
- Restore habitats
-> sea level rises + Zoos
+ Sanctuaries to take care neglected
-> wipe out habitats of some species animals

>< HOWEVER, humans must be to blame for - Change awareness

animal destruction.

- Global warming is mainly caused by

human activities.

- Chief among the causes of global

warming are human activities.

+ Industrial activities
(factories emit/ release emissions/ exhaust
fumes)

+ Agricultural activities
(the use of pesticides/ fertilizers)

+ Illegal hunting/ rampant poaching/

trafficking

CONCLUSION

- RESTATE OPINION:
- SUGGESTION/ ADVICE/ PREDICTION (EXTRA THOUGHT)

By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that protecting environment is the key discipline to
help animal preservation. (natural/ humans)
Besides, improving people perception as to benefit of wild animal with human that is very
essential.

By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that nature just plays a small role, while humans are
the primary contributors to animal disappearance. Therefore, humans should join hands to
preserve animals as soon as possible.
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