Opening: - Owing to the problem which ….

, some people think that the key to solving these issues

is to …
- I completely agree that this is the best way to tackle the issue of …

First para: - Firstly, dealing with the ….(problem)… is the best solved by taking a long term
approach and taking more …
- This method/way/approach will ensure that …
- Besides/However, by incorporating more … into ….as well as …, …

Second para: - Another point to consider is that ….

- In other words, …
- By both … and … , it will ensure that
- This is certainly a …natural/long lasting/effective/optimal/efficient… way to ….

Give ex: - At the moment, ….

- For example/instance …
- We could see in real life that, …
- Nowadays, there are/is …

End: - In conclusion, to deal with ….., changing the lifestyle of the coming generation by
introducing … in schools/daily life/… is the easiest and most effective method to
apply/use.

Phrases: - Little sports is not enough to counteract their otherwise sedentary lifestyle.
- It will ensure that children grow up to incorporate sports into their daily lives.
Do the advantages of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes
outweigh the disadvantages, compared to public transport (trains, buses and taxis)?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own
experience.
About the problems in means of transportations, an opinion has been stated that there are
more advantages in using private transport when compared with the public one. I
definitely agree that this is a right thinking due to some inconveniences of using public
transport.
Firstly, you can’t be proactive in your time when taking public transport, it is depending
on the arrival of the bus or taxi due to the driver’s timetable. However, this is sometimes
a very annoying problem to deal with when something suddenly happen during the
journey. For example, a sudden breakdown of the bus or a heavy traffic along the way,
would probably delay your time, you can’t control it and even can’t make a change. But
this would rarely happen when you are driving on your own, at least you would feel more
comfortable and be independent.

Another point to consider about is that the qualifications of public transport are not

guaranteed, such as safety, hygiene, drivers’ attitude, etc. We can’t deny the fact in our

daily lives that a numerous cases of traffic accidents have been happened with the

irresponsibility of some bus drivers due to their lack of attention and out of speed control.

Furthermore, public vehicles are not well controlled in terms of periodic inspection of

spare parts, leading to dangers when participating in traffic. Those are certainly the

reasons that make people refuse using public transport. So that, the government should

take in solutions for this issue, by introducing some revised policies and decrees for

means of transportations, to ensure that