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Climate change is an issue which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate, with

supporters claiming that it is vital in order to preserve our environment, whilst opposition stating
that there is a lack of real evidence.

One of the main arguments in favor of this topic is the presence of “Global Warming”. This
warming is being produced due to some bad habits or A lack of information about how to proceed
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in various cases. Throwing batteries to normal trash RATHER THAN instead of USING use a
special container, could pollute up to 3000 litres of water, whereas an inefficient way of driving
cars produces CO2 emissions that damage the environment. If we have the right information we ,
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can change our behavior to achieve a better use of our ecosystem and therefore preserve our
environment.

- DON’T USE “BEING” IN PASSIVE VOICE, IT IS NOT NATURAL; RATHER, JUST “TO BE+PAST
PARTICIPLE”
- USE A COMMA TO SEPARATE CONDITIONAL SENTENCES
- INSTEAD OF+OBJECT (I PREFER THIS INSTEAD OF THAT)
- RATHER THAN+ACTION

- REMEMBER SLP 2 PARAGRAPH MUST


BE SHORTER THAN THE OTHER 2
ANSWERING LEVEL 3
First, much of our electricity and heating runs on fossil fuels, consumption can be reduced by
purchasing LED bulbs or switching old appliances with energy efficient ones, washing clothes in
cold water or hanging out RATHER THAN instead of using THE dryer. Improving the energy
efficiency at home can reduce carbon footprint up to 1 ton of CO 2 per year.

On the OTHER second hand, roads are crowded with vehicles, most of which use diesel or
gasoline. Walking or cycling, rather than driving, reduces greenhouse gas emissions and has
health and fitness benefits. For longer distances, consider traveling by train or bus. And share cars
whenever is possible. Living car-free can reduce your carbon footprint up to 2 tons of CO 2
(equivalent) per year compared to a car-using lifestyle.

Rarely have there been so many worries about the climate CHANGE changes as in this time,
nevertheless, thanks to the tips offered in last paragraphs the reader has the opportunity to
improve not only his life but also improve (REPETITION)the life of the rest of the world.

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