Writing reference (Paper 2)
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Write your article
Model answer
(00 use language that
is appropriate for
your autience and
Topic, and ty te
rake i interesting
and engaging forthe
reader
1 finish your article
in an interesting,
way.
‘You read the following announcement in an international travel magazine.
To tour or not to tour ...? A good que:
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‘Tourism is the fast-growing industry of our age, and as travel
becomes even easier it will continue to expand. But is this,
really the best thing for us all? It's a good question.
Personally, | live in a small town where tourists are few and.
far between. In one way, having tourists around would bring @
breath of fresh air into the town, and people would open up.
‘more interesting shops that could benefit everyone. If hotels.
‘were opened and new leisure activities set up, there would be
‘greater job opportunities and young people would be more
likely to stay in the town instead of moving to the city to find
‘work as they do at present. There would also be more for
local people to do in their spare time. So there are certainly.
‘edvantages that come with tourism, but what about the other.
side of the coin?
‘Travel increases pollution and damage to the environment in
general. On a local level, too many tourists can upset the
balance of a town and with the inevitable increase in traffic
‘there is likely to be congestion in small cantres like mine. This
‘can be seen in small ski resorts in winter, when lerge numbers
of enthusiastic skiors clog up narrow roads leading to the
slopes causing problems for locals going about their normal
lives.
So what's the answer? On balance, | think there should be
‘more tourism where | live because the advantages outweigh
the disadvantages - though I think it should be regulated. On
‘@ personal note, I'd love to have a cinema in the town!
Do involve the
reader by using
‘hetorical
auestions,
especially atthe
beginning of a
pereareph ~but
BONT use too
many rhetorical
{questions in one
nse as they lose
‘thar impact and
become repetitive
DON'T forget 10
cover all aspects of
the task,
DON forget to
express yout opinion
{and to support it
with evidence or
examples.