Essay e review or letter

Giallo: introduzione. Verde: opinion. Celeste: main paragraph. Rosa: conclusione.

Essay.

A lot of schools give the possibility to earn a scholarship, which can help a student to apply for important
universities. In my point of view, the one who tries harder in order to obtain what they want should always
be rewarded, due to the fact that it teaches also how important is putting all your effort in something that
you believe with all yourself.

There are different ideas regard who should receive scholarship, but it is up to the school’s policy. Usually
this policy regards a specific kind of students that fit specifics qualities, but sometimes these qualities are
discussed because is really hard to understand who should be rewarded. On one hand there are these
bright and excellent students, who prefer spending their day on the books instead of going out for a walk or
meeting a friend. While, on the other, there are some(other) students that would like to apply for an
expensive university, but their parents have not enough money to pay the school’s rent.

All in all, decided(deciding)who has more right to earn a scholarship is challenging, because(since) it is well-

known that both of these behaviours should (both) be rewarded. And, although can seem the school’s
policy the bad one who does not give the possibility to everyone for winning a scholarship, it is not its fault
but instead is the government’s fault because(on the account of) it does not increase the money for these
school projects.

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Review.

I’m going to write a review about my favourite book that can also be seen online as a film. I really keen on
romantic stories and, the one that will (always) be always in my heart is “After”. I know every details of this
book since (considering that) I read it at least ten times.

I personally prefer the book version because is more detailed that the film, but that’s not all. The film, that
seems really long, just shows(just) the last 100 pages of my precious book. In fact, most of my friends that
have only seen the movie, don’t know a lot of important things, such as, how they met and what Tessa felt
the first time that she saw Marcus. It’s unfair because the spectator, who doesn’t read the book and sees
only the film doesn’t know what have brought these two teenagers to fall in love, and he or she might think
that between them there is just a physical relationship, while they are rooted(tie) by a deeper connection.
Another thing that makes me understand how much films are overrated is the representation of Marcus,
his character is brighter and charmer in the book, whereas the film shows him like a simple teenager boy
that sees girls just as a toy.

At the end, what I really suggest is to read the book because you will be able to understand them feeling
and thought so well that, you will start to hope of living the same love story.

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Essay

Nowadays most of the developed countries offer the possibility to go abroad in order to work or study, this
is happening because life has changed and, as well, our living approach. I believe that spending time in
another county is one of the most important experience in order to become a better person.

Obviously, this possibility gives several positive impacts for both travellers and the county. Surerly (Surely),
for the travellers is a memorable experience, but it brings a lot of fame to the county too. Firstly, if
someone decide living for some mounths(months) in another country, he or she, needs to spend a lot of
money in order to realize this wish, such as for: buying specific clothes, paying an agency and taking the
plane. For a country means more money income (of money) that can be useful for the implementation of
new things. Secondly, if this is a work motivation, and it is made by a lot of employees. It can lead to new
business plans between these two countries that increases the possibilities to live and go there, and this
can, with some years, mixes them culture together.

To sum up, flying around the world is always a pleasant choice, but it should be done carefully and being
conscious(consciously). Despite the expensive price it worth the effort since this is not just a life time
change (of place) but can also be the point of a mental growth.

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Letter

Dear Manager,
I am really sorry to take your time, but I would like to report the several problems that I am dealing with
one of yours best-seller, a television.

I am writing to you in order to highligh (highlight) some problems that cannot be understimated
(underestimated). Two weeks ago, I bought this television on your website and it arrived (to) me just
yesterday morning, despite the fact that perhaps two weeks of spedition(expedition) is(are)a lot of time,
that(this) is not the main problem. There are much more serious problems. For example, the fact that I
chose it completelly (completely) black and, when I opened it, I found a red and grey television, but that is
not all. After, when I tried to bring it back and called the shop assistant,(but) he was very rude and had an
inappropried (inappropriate) behaviour, he screamed and said that I should keep it due to the fact that it is
not possible change something onces (once) it is open. But the main problem is that the television has a
large scratch alonge(along) the frame, this starch (scratch) makes impossible to see anything because it has
ruin(ruined) most of the television’s pixels, so if you try to watch the televition (television) you can see
nothing clearly.

Thank you for your time, I am very sorry to interrupt your work, but I hope that a solution can be found.
I am waiting for your answer.

Yours sincerelly(sincerely),

Sofia

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Essay

Nowadays immigration can be caused by several motivations, from political reasons to the need of finding a
job. Every country has more then(than) one policy in order to regulate these new people into the country.
According to me, if a country has the possibility to help the others, why it should decides(decide) not to do
it ?

Despite ignorant thoughts, there are several positive impacts for a country that helps immigrants to
integrate and find a job. First of all,(for a country) new people means(mean) new possible employees that
can work and take part in the econimic(economic) growth of that country. Futhermore(Furthermore) most
of immigrants are between the eighteens and twenties, so(this means that) they can both learn
easly(easily) and be suitable for the hardest jobs. Secondly, having people that are originated of other
countries can improve the culture of that place, since these new people bring them culture and try to tie it
with the local one. Moreover, recent studies have shown that, when people with different origins live
together, tend to be more patient and collaborative with everyone.

To sum up, being helpful will always brings(bring) its good points, wheter(whether) for personal growth and
convenience. As far as(Therefore), if you were(have been) availables(available) with the(to) others and you
will ever need some help, there will always be someone for you. While being selfish does not bring nether
satisfaction or a better income.

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Email

Dear travel agent,

I am very sorry to interrup(interrupt) you during the holidays, but there are some problems that cannot be
understimated(underestimated), that I would like reporting to you.

My family and I have paid for an apartment with a huge pool, which actually there is but its condition is not
the same that we have seen in photos. It is quite dirty and full of insects, we tried to call a plumber but
none of your recapitals(delivery address) has responded. Moreover, the air conditioning is broken and, in
order to let the air pass in our apartment, we have to leave our windows open. This has caused several
problems, that was(were) not highlight on the webside(web site) in the description of this house. The
garden is full of flowers and bumblebees too, but not only, in fact there are also ants. The last insects that I
have mentioned have no worries regard entering and staying in the kitchen, and we have discovered that
they made a little place for them inside the cupboard. Another thing that is unacceptable are the very noisy
neighbours, that spend all night shouting and making every kind of rumors(rumours), and we cannot close
the windows because it is to hot inside to sleep without air conditioning or open windows.

Thank you for your attention, I am waiting for your respond(I look forward to your reply and I thank you in
advance for your consideration) hoping that together we will find a solution that can bring peace to our
holidays.

Yours sincerelly(sincerely),
Sofia

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Essay

Nowadays cities are bigger and full of new infrastructures. Although this might improve the citizen lifestyle,
it can be really stressful to handle for the local government too. I believe that, in order to keep this(these)
new buildings, the citizen should also get some liability so that the authorities will feel relief(relieved) and
can be more helpful with these ones(structures).

Another thing that is fundamental is the menagement (management) of the funds. Obviously, there will
never be enough money for everything but, some priorities can be made. It is hard to choose where is
better to use the public funds, but surely, they should be used in order to make museums and public
gardens look better. Firstly, since they are both public properties, the public authorities should look after
these two items. Secondly, these two public structures are the most visited by the tourist, this means that it
is in our concering (concerning) to let them appriciate (appreciate) these things, in order to increase the
visitors and improve the economic growth.

All in all, everyone should be responsable (responsible) for them own city, due to the fact that is satisfing
(satisficing) having and living in a marvellously new place. So, probably the income of money should be on
the eye of the public authorities, but the attention to keep buildings clean and neat should be on the
citizen.

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Review

I’m going to write a review, suggesting which colleges’ facilities should be improved. I’ll try to tie both social
an academic needs when I’ll show which areas should be more included.

There are several types of colleges, but each of them are missing (misses) of one thing, curiosity. Think
about it, each student have(has) to get up every day at 8 a.m., should go to school and listen to a lesson
because, at the end of the explanation, there will be a test. Probably, if the lesson would be only for self-
growth and have fun, it will(would) be more funcional(functional). Despite that, I know this could be hard
to realize but if the school (also) implements also some courses for the teachers, maybe, they will(would)
be more patient, creative, and able to set up new teaching methods. Another thing that is underestimated
is teaching outside. This can be deangerous(dangerous)and challenging but, maybe, with the right
instruments, like radio, maps and elettronical(electronical) devices, teachers can have(do) a
pratical(practical) explaination(explanation).Moving around the city might keep the students’ attention and
can create more inquisive(inquisitive) minds, because students will always be wondering what’s going to
happen tomorrow.

All in all, if I ever be a princial(principal) I’ll introduce all these things. Because I believe in interactive
teaching and that movement can, also, be a way to keep fit the toddlers.

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Nowadays cities are getting bigger and multicultural, this means that there is a huge number of buildings,
as a why(way) to cover as much needs as possible. I believe that, in order to keep this(these) facilities neat,
we should all be careful thereby preserves it(them).

One thing that should be keep in mind is that there will never be enough money for anything(everything),
but, with a proper management, the local authorities might be able to sustain as many infrastructures as
possible. Another important thing is giving priorities, expecially(especially)to the one who will be more
useful for the country. An example could be museums and public gardens. Firstly, they are both tourism
attractions, due to that, if the government gives enough funds, perhaps, the tourists will increase as well as
the money revenue. Secondly, both of them do not ensure(endure) only with some public donations, so, if
a country want to keep its historical areas it should invest its money on these facilities. In addition, these
two structures are government’s properties, so it is up to them the concerning of those.

All in all, it is not only important the destination of the money but also how the citizen keep and control
these areas. In fact, if the citizen do not put all them effort in order to keep public facilities clean and
marvelous(marvellous), there will never be enough money for keep these(this) forever.

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Review

I’m going to write a review about a book that has always been an enlightment(enlightenment) for me. I will
include things wheter on the writer and why he become so important too.

The most inspirational book that I’ve ever read is “uno,nessuno e centomila” by Pirandello, a famous
Italian writer. Let just say that, despite the Italian title it’s a masterpiece for mainkind(mankind). I read it
last summer and I’ve never thought that It’s so catchty(catchy). I read it all in two days. This book is about
Pirandello’s life, and for some pathways, how he become mad. In his book he try to explain that we are
made by more than one face, so we are more that(then) one person, and this means that doesn’t exist one
“real” us. So, all the book tells how he realize this and become completelly(completely) crazy. This book
discloses me who he really was and why he become so important. Despite what ours school’s book says, he
was really out of the ordinary and a deep thinker. Maybe he was considered crazy just because he did all
the things that passed throughout his mind, like every impulsive person, but his personality is quirky
because he could also write what he felt and thought clearly. And for all of this, he’s memorable and
unforgettable.

To sum up, I suggest to read(reading) this book, because, despite its controvertial(controversial) story, it’s
short and quite easy to read. Moreover, it’s a good way to make full of your friends telling them all of his
claims.

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Essay

Nowadays one of the most discussed problem is: How these new students can be suitable for a future
working experience after all them years of theorical studies. As far as I can see, the solution might be the
introduction of working elements at school.

There are several types of methods that can be used in order to make more contious(conscious) students,
but perhaps, the most functional are the ones who include work-related subjects at school and the visits
from employers, so as to illustrate how different the working lifestyle is. However, adding new subjects
could be risky, owing to the students’ reaction. They may underestimate these new ones or, on the other
hand, put all them efforts on these instead of the theorical subjects. On the ground of these informations,
probably (the idea of) including some days dedicated to the workers could be a(the) greatester idea.
Moreover, these people can be the (students’ parents) parents’ students, since most of them do not even
know what them parents do. Furthermore, this can be both useful for learing (learning )and improving the
relationship between(into) each family.

To sum up, trying to make a school a place for either pratical(practical) and theorical learning could be the
key of making better and brighter people. Although it can be quite challenging for the teachers, it might
become a new and easly(easily) way for them too.

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E-mail

Good morning sister,

How are you? I hope that everything is fine and you are safe. I’m quite nervous to see you and my niece,
also I’m really excited for you, because she’s your first child.

Talking about this new sweety, I would like to make her a gift, but not just and obvious one, I will be glad to
buy something that can be both useful for you and appriciated (appreciated) by her. What about a new
night toy? Or a puppet ? Maybe she would enjoy more a barbie, that can be a perfect company when
you’re busy. If there are some others options that she’ll adore let me know. Whereas, I don’t want to
disturb you so maybe it’s better that you write me the best time to come, I have some days off, so I’m
always available. However, I will have to stay(come) home by Friday. Another problem could be the
(accommodation)accomodation, I know that your house it’s not so big and that it migh (might) be a mess,
but if you need me to stay there and help you with the baby don’t hesitate to ask. On the other hand, if you
rather have some privacy, I will booked a room at the hotel in front of your house.

Don’t forget to look after yourself too.

Write to me soon.
Your sincerely,
Sofia.

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Essay

During the old days people used to spend all their life in the same place where they were born. Travelling
was something that only the seafarers done, but nowadays, life has changed so as to improve our lifestyle.
As far as I can see, migration could only brings benefits for every countryies.

In the country point of view emmigration brings several positive effects. First of all, if people are more likely
to travel and visit other places, they surely are open-minded. Moreover, once they are back, these people
are able to share and teach what they have learnt and saw. In this way, the country will have a cultural
growth that will put at ease all the future turists (tourists). In addition, spending time abroad, both for
studying or working, might increase the revenue of money for a country. Due to the fact that people need a
lot of items for traveling, such as a specific dress code, a plane’s ticket and some books or specific
electronical things. As a result, emmigration is useful for the development of a country.

To sum up, spending time abroad is not only a way to bring some benefits to a country, but also one
unforgettable experience. In fact, most of the people who get hook on travelling say that once you start,
you will never stop to see what there is around you.

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Letter

Dear holiday.it company,

I am sorry to disturb you but I have been to the most unpleasant holiday in all my life. Due to that fact I
cannot unreported what I have been throught, so as to help you to improve your selling.

I spent three weeks in what you called a “villa”, which had the same space of a little flat. But that is not all,
there were plenty of bees and bumblebees. So many that two rooms of this “villa” were impossible to live
in two rooms of this “villa”. Another thing that was completelly different from what I have paid is the
transport. I thought that there was a mini train that would give you a short cut ride to the beach, but there
was nothing. In addition of that, most of the facilities were broken, from the fridge to the bed. Moreover,
there was neither the wifi nor enough connection for use our phone, so it was impossible for me to write
you during my holiday. At the end, all the restaurants near to us were always full of people, so we had to go
to the nearest supermarket, which was 3.4km away.

I hope that there is something you can do. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
I will look forward to your reply in order to get at least an explaination (explanation).

Your sincerely,
Sofia.

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Essay

Nowadays immigration is one of the main issues on the earth. There are several discussion regard what
consideration should be done by the government (government), which there were reported in that
documentary too. In this essay will be highlight the communication and working problems.

Since most of the expats do not know the language of the place they live in, they are more likely to live in
groups and isolated from the rest of the population. Perhaps, with the aid of the government, some
courses could be prepared so as to teach them the language and some current idioms. So that, they are not
only able to communicate what they need but also make some friends and, consequently, they will feel
integrated into the local community.

In addition, most of the foreigners moved in order to find a better job. Thus, if the government enhance the
possibility for them to apply one, they will be glad to take part in it and, that will also increase the revenue
of money. As a result, immigrants will get a job and the nation will be more developed. In fact, if this
situation was true, everyone would benefits from that.

To sum up, maybe it is more easily to say than do it. But, as far as I can see, with a little of will and
consciousness every country might be able to implement this kind of structures.

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Review

I’m going to write a review about a book that I’ve read recently, where the main character’s life changed by
a decision he made during his life. This book is well-known everywhere, it’s Beauty and the Beast.

This book is also rappresented(represented) in both films and cartoons, probably that’s why it’s so famous.
Basically, the main character is a prince that, owing to his arrogance with a little old lady, which is a witch
too; become a beast. This woman takes this decision because she wants to make him more kind and gentle
(kinder and gentler). In fact, she says that: If he doesn’t find his true love until the rose will lose all of its
petals, he will remain a beast forever.

Later that, he decide not to meet anyone forever. But one day, he meet a girl randomly and, after some
fight, he fall in love with her and she fall too. So, at the end he comes back to be a prince and the two of
them will live happy together and forever. I believe that the aim of this story shouldn’t be underestimated,
because it teaches us to be less rude. Also, at the end of the book, when he return to be a prince, you will
finally understand that, without his arrogance he’s would never learn to be a better man.

At the end, I will suggest this book if you are a romantic person, otherwise maybe you will find that too
obviuous (obvious) and silly.

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Essay

Nowadays technology has wispread(widespread) everywhere around the world and between mankind. In
this essay I will discuss about how this innovation has change our relationship and the way we
communicate with each other.

Talking about relationship, during the old days people were used to make friends face to face. Whereas,
today people are more likely to meet online by the use of social media. Virtual instead of real conversation
has its positive points, you can have more than one conversation simultaneously and If you are shy, you can
avoid eyes contact. On the other hand, you cannot fully understand emotion or have a completely
connection, owing to it might be a fake account.

However, technology has also influence our way to keep in contact with someone. Early, people used to
write letters or did short calls with the cabins. While in these days, people have several ways to express
themselves. Such as typing, making videos or audios. Obviously, there are prons(pros) and cons in both.
Whereas with the cabins you could not be always available and theyre were hard to find , the mobile phone
gives you the possibility to be connected every-time you want. But, these facilities have brought us to stay
always at the phone, instead of seeing what is near to us.

To sum up, technology is a gift if it is used with consciousness, otherwise it is just a waste of time. I believe
that the phone should be used only in case of emergencies.

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Review

I’m going to write a review about the most useful technological device that I’ve ever had. Describing its best
utility and what can be done to improve it. At the end of this writing there are my the recommendation.

Probably, the phone is the most technological thing used around between mankind. But, I believe that
what’s really important in my daily life is my laptop. Whereas the phone is too little or fragile easily to
break, the laptop is bigger and multifunctional. That is to say, it offers several servicies, such as chatting
with friends, seeing films on streaming or on Netflix and, it has also the programs you need for working.

On the other hand, most of the laptops are really expensive. So, maybe they should cost less or, at least,
with it might be given also a cover. Furthermore, they are not waterproof so it impossible to bring them
during sea holidays. In addition, if the laptop is too thin it’ll get warm too easily and, you can do nothing
with it. This means that it’s impossible to use for more than 3 hours and, consequently, for long trips.

All in all, I suggest to buy at least one laptop per family. Not only because it’s useful, but also because it
keeps you busy and some company. Besides its cost, I believe that it worth the effort but there is also the
possibility to buy one used.

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Essay
Which facilities should receive money from local authorities? -museums;-sports centres;-public gardens.
Write an essay discussing two of the facilities in your notes. You should explain which facility is more important for local authorities to give money to, giving reasons
in support of your answer.

Nowadays most of the cities have several infrastructures so as to enhance the servicies (services) for all the
population. Consequentely (Consequently), they have not enough money in order to keep developed each
of these new buildings. My essay will highlight the reasons of why the local authorities should invest most
of them money in public gardens and museums.

Talking about museums, they are the heart of the city. This means that most of the tourists desire visiting
museums, for soaking up as many knowledge as possible regarding the history of that place. Therefore, if
these historical monuments are not available or look-like a ruins, the tourists will be less insterested
(interested) to see that city. As a result, the city would lose both its aim and some revenue of money.

Whereas, concerning public gardens. They are like the breath of the city. Specially during these days, where
the atmosphere is full of carbon dioxide. Those gardens will provvide a huge amount of oxigen(oxygen),
which is vital for living. Moreover, green areas might be a gathering place both for youth and older. So, it
would stimulate people to stop using them phone and live the open spaces that are around them.

To sum up, these structures should be a priority for the government for all the reasons that I have given. As
far as I am concern, perhaps these two can be also be used by the citizen to earn some money too. So, it
would be a rewarded victory for mankind.

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Review
A college which you attended in the past has written to you asking to what extent its facilities met the needs of the students academically and socially.
Suggest areas where the college could improve facilities .

I’m going to write a review about a collage that I’ve attended last year. In this writing there are highlight
which facilities can be the coziest for the students academically and socially speaking. Moreover, at the end
there are some suggestion about what can be done to improve some facilities.

First of all, this collage is in London. So, thanks to its weather, there’s a huge green area around the school,
where people hang out during the pause. There, it is possible to know new people or staying with your
friends. So, it’s basically impossible don’t have fun or don’t enjoy your time there. In addition, some
teachers prefer have(to have) outside lessons and those are the most interesting ones.

Instead, talking about its academically skills. The college offers several courses and, all of them have its own
space with its items too. Furthermore, you learn in both practical and theorical path. That is really helpful
because you don’t have homework. In fact, in the morning you have to listen the explaination and, in
afternoon, you do what you’ve learn during the previous lessons.

All in all, that’s a really unique college. But, I believe that maybe there should be included some sport clubs.
Not only to improve your phisical (physical) skill but also because, after five o’clock, all the lessons end and
there is nothing to do.

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Essay
Which methods governments should use to prepare young people for working life?— visits from employers— apprentice schemes— work-related subjects at school

Nowadays one important skill that more and more companies are looking for is some working (experience)
esperience. Probably, this quality is not so easy to find, due to the fact that the youth spend most of their
time studying. In my essay I will suggest how the government might prepare young people for working life,
introducing work-related subject at school and having some visits from employers.

As it has already done for civics, the local authorities should add one more subject. This new one should
introduce puppils to the working life. However, in order to avoid problems, this new materia (theme) must
be done only in practical ways and without giving homework to do. Besides it seems a reckless idea, it is
not. As matter of fact, on this path students would understand that success depents (depends) completely
on yourself.

Moreover, another thing that would be encouraging between the schools are the visits from people who
enjoy what they do. Althought, for most of the younger can be a day off from studying, it may be
enlightenment for them. A little show with some laugh can enhance them work-related knowledge and
increase them curiosity regarding a specific job.

To sum up, there are several ideas that could be taken by. What really matter is the will of an truthfully
change. As far as I can see, I will be glad to take part in something that will help me to apply the job of my
dreams. Thus, I hope that in the future some of these idea will be considered.

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Letter
You recently read an article in an English newspaper asking for money-saving tips for young people who are just starting college. Write a letter to the newspaper,
outlining ways that students can look after their money.

Dear Newspaper,

I’m sorry for interrupt your precious time. But, I’ve found quite interesting your last article about “money-
saving tips” so I’d like to suggest you some other ideas that can be useful for future publication.

One little idea that came up to my mind, it’s selling your own old clothes. During these days, people are
looking forward vintage, because it’s a new trend. So, you can catch this moment and give for some
reasonable money your clothes, that are in good conditions but you don’t wear anymore.

Another point may be making some jewellery. It doesn’t matter if you are male or a female, what matter is
that you know how to do it. In fact, buying some materials for jewellery is really cheap. Moreover, you can
do several things such as: rings, bracelets and earrings. In addition, that can be a great gift for your friends
too.

Last but not least, if you’re a cook lover you could sell something. People have always liked cupcakes,
muffins and cakes along the street or next to a beach. Furthermore, there are some courses available and
not expensive. In fact, there are also online ones that can be easily followed by home.

Thank you in advance for your consideration, I look forward to your reply to know if these ideas are as
bright as I’ve thought.

Yours sincerely,
Sofia

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Essay
What are the benefits to a country from people spending time abroad? – business– culture– understanding

By and large, people have always enjoyed travelling. This is one of the most bright way to invest your
money. Due to the fact that seeing new places increases your knowledge. Obviously, going abroad benefits
the country too, especially economically and culturally speaking.

On one hand, when tourists decide to visit another place, if they use local companies they will enhance
them revenue of money. As a result, they take part in the economic growth of them country. Moreover,
people should also buy whatever they need in order to avoid future problems, consequently, they will
provide another host of money. With the aid of these travellers, the country will be able to develop.

On the other hand, travelling might gives you the possibility to see things from another point of view. This
may seems useless but, time to time, it will lead to more conscious people. So, owing to open-minded
people, peace and patient will be spread in country. Setting up a better system to live for mankind, based
on collaboration and kindness.

To sum up, unfortunatelly during these days is basically impossible to travel. It is a pity but with hindsight
we will be able to do that again and it will be marvellous. As far as I am concerned, I fall over myself to do
travelling again, on the ground of there are a lot of place that I want to see still.

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Letter
You have read an article in your college magazine about the effects of the internet on studying. The article focuses on the negative
effects, in particular the influence of social-networking sites and email. You feel the article has too negative a view of the way
students use the internet, and decide to write a letter to the editor explaining your opinion.

Dear Editor,

I am truthly sorry for disturbing your precious time. This letter regards your article on “the effects on the
internet on studying”. Although, I have found it quite clear and well-written, as far as I am concerned, it
seems to show only the negative points. So, I wonder if it might passes the wrong message.

The article highlights the bad influence that social-networking has on teenagers, it is true that most of the
youth are distracted by the use of these apps. But, that is not the point. The aim of these applications are
being helpful. As the matter of fact, some years ago there were not these facilities, so instead of studying,
people spent most of the days looking forward information between several books. At least, during these
days there is the possibility to get information quickly and then to spend spent more time for studying.

Moreover, it is true that nowadays the younger use the email a lot, perhaps they do that in order to
communicate school issues. Even if they do not, probably suggesting this activity could be more helpful
instead of outlining the “email” as a useless app. Furthermore, email is used in working settor(sector) too.
Consequentely, maybe could have been interesting if in the article there were some information about this
kind of usage.

Thank you in advance for your consideration, I look forward to your reply so as to let me know if my letter
was useful for you.
Yours Sincerely,
Sofia.

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Essay
Your class has watched a television documentary about the benefits of helping immigrants to integrate into their local communities.
Notes:
-Language
-Culture
-Work Choose two of the areas in your notes. You should explain
why the areas are important and provide reasons in support of your answer.

Since the oldest days, people used to travel around the world looking for a job. While, these days are born
a lot of problems regarding these movements, which could only be beneficial for all the countries. This
essay will discuss on the benefits of helping the foreingners to integrate, highlighting the language and
working aspects.

Obviously, the most essential thing of living in a different country is knowing the language. Immigrants, so
as to succeed in this scope and fell(feel) at ease, must take part in courses that should be organized by the
government. As matter of fact, if they pass these courses they will be able to make new friends. So, socially
speaking, improve these kind of lessons will be an investment for the country’s happiness.

Moreover, there are several pros of enhance the number of workers. Especially when the country has a low
birth rate, due to the fact that it does not have enough employers, so with the aid of immigrants it will
develop easier. But, in order to persude(pursued) this aim, the local authorities should prepare specific
programmes that will point out what they have to do.

To sum up, diversity is what makes the earth so unique and splendid. Perhaps, what needs to be improved
for everyone is a little bit of more respect for each other. Consequently, without it everything will always be
impossible no matter how many courses will ever be prepared.

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Review
THE MOST UPLIFTING AND THE BIGGEST DOWNER. It’s sometimes hard to choose a film that fits your mood purely on the basis of the poster or the description on
the cover of the DVD. That’s why we want to publish reviews of the most uplifting and the most depressing films our readers have seen, so that others know what to
watch and what to avoid. Send in a review which describes the most uplifting film you’ve ever seen and the one you found the biggest downer. Make sure you give
reasons for your choices.

The Ying and Yang of films

I’m going to write a review about the most exciting and tragic films that I’ve ever seen. The most uplifting
one is probably Fast and Furious, my favourite is the second but there are so many that you are free to see
whatever you enjoy more. While, the best “cry maker” is definitively All the Bright Places.

If you looking for some laugh and marvellous cars Fast and Furious is made for you. In this collection
adventure is the key, the main characters are a family that pass through a lot of illegal cars races. They are
charming and full of vitality, but always unlucky, so there are a lot of scene of escaping and comic
escamotage(trick), in order to distract the police.

Wheareas, If you are searching for some tears the most suitable movie is All the Bright Places. The plot is
about a teenager who has several daddy issues, but despite that, he helps his girlfriends because she lost
her sister. They both were depressed, but once together everything seems better. Unfortunately, one day
he had some of his issues and die inaspectably(unexpectedly).

All in all, there are an infinitive number of films. So if you like none of these two don’t panic or feel atypical,
especially because these two are proposed on the ground of one point of view, in fact, it’s normal if you
prefer other kind of films. Anyway, give them a shot.

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Essay
What are the benefits to a country from people spending time abroad? – business– culture– understanding

Nowadays travelling is changed and developed as a resurlt (result) of new modern technologies.
Consequently, people are more likely to travel long distance and take some days off for visiting new places.
This might be beneficial for the country too. In this essay there will be outline how can be beneficial, under
the business and culture aspects, to a country from people spending time abroad.

Although people are moving to another country, what they do before it, cannot be underestimated. As a
matter of fact, they will buy a host of things in order to be utter prepared for every circumstances. This
means that, citizen will enhance the revenue of local shops so as to buy what they need. So, if the local
shops have more income, the country will be able to develop.

Moreover, once they are back again, they will tell to their friends what they did and how them holiday has
been. Sharing these type of things will increase consciousness between the population. It may seems
useless but, once citizen are aware of what surround them, they will be automatically homely (more
generous) to everyone. Especially with the expats, that will be able to feel more (comfortable)confortable.

To sum up, travelling could only bring benefits for everyone but, as everything, it should be done (carefully)
carfully and in respect of everybody. As far as I am (concerned) concerne, seeing new (environment)
envoiroment is marvellous. I hope that, after this covid situation, we can do it again and with the same
(constancy) constance.

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Review
You have seen this announcement on your favourite music website. Have you ever been to an amazing concert
venue? Write a review of the best music venue in your local area and tell us about what makes it so special. Say
who you would recommend it for a why? The best entries will be published on our website.

The Music’s Park

Have you ever heard of Music’s Park in your life? I hope you’re nodding because it’s a quite unique place.
I’ve been there more that (than) ten times in all my life, for more than one concert, both alone and with my
friends. Despite my several visits, this place has always overstated(overcome=superato) my expectations.

It seems like every theatre that are placed here in Rome but, once you’re inside, it will leave you without
breath. Its marvellousness (awesomeness= grandiosità) depends on its structure. Basically, it was made by
the roman more than 300 years ago. Firstly, it was used for gladiators’ fight but then it became a concert
venue.

This wood structure is full of secret doors and staircases, which are usually used by the singer in order to
make an unespected (unexpected) entrance. Lately, it’s a bit rusted because none gives some funds to keep
it well and clean, only at the last concert, the 30% of the earns was for the restauration of this (spectacular)
spectacual theatre.

All in all, if you fall over yourself to do something new and seeing vintage buildings, this place is made for
you. Not only for its magnificent structure but also because it will surely be a concert of your favourite
singer. If I were you I would definitively give it a shot. Trust me, you won’t regret it!

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Essay
Which methods governments should use to prepare young people for working life?— visits from employers — apprentice schemes — work-related subjects at school

Nowadays, pupils prefer getting a degree instead of working and leaving early the school, as had happened
during the old days. Consequently, the local authorities should introduce new themes to prepare young
people for working life. In my essay I will cover how these items could be done by the visits from worker or
doing work-related subjects at school.

Talking about days for employers interviews, it might be usefull (useful) despite the fact that students will
lose a day of school. Obviously, this must be done outlining the difference between the two lifestyle.
Moreover, it has to be catchy and not too serious, as a matter of fact, the youth tend to pay more attention
on something more intriguing like ted’s talk, than the basic speech.

Whereas, the idea of adding new subject at school may be risky. Due to the fact that it could cannot be
taken consciously, so, some changes are required. If the government will ever decided to introduce this
new hour at school, it would be organized differently. Firstly, it will be done only in practical way, as the
working lifestyle, and there should not be given any homework, so as to let them be more focus in(on)
class.

To sum up, giving the possibility to soak up knowledge related to working experience would be great, not
only for the preparation that will be given, but also in order to grow and understand that the adult life is
much more demanding and everything it is up to you.

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Review
Send us a review of a book or a film focusses on somebody who has made an important contribution to society. Did you learn anything new about the person’s life
from the book or film? Did the book or film help you understand why this person made their important contribution?

An unique person

I’m going to write a review about a person that made an important contribution to the society. I know
about him by the book he wrote “se questo è un uomo”, and the person I’m talikg(talking) about is Primo
Levi. He tried to show how the life was during the days of holocaust.

I’ve already heard about his life while I was in middle school, but this book show me a different person.
Probably, this small and well-written masterpiece gives me the possibility to see him under a different
aspect, more a human one. In fact, I got how kind and bright he was, how he was resilent(resilient) in front
of this atrocity. I really feel like I learnt about a person and not just a name for future interrogation.

Moreover, thanks to this explicative book, I understand why he’s still so fundamental for mankind. The
answer is given by his writings. He’s unique, the only one how gave a perfect (description)descripion, about
what happened, and also the possibility to reflect about it, to explore his and your own ideas. This “little
piece of him” shows how people respond to this unfair situation, like a focus on mankind habits.

All in all, I suggest to read it, even though you’ve already hear it at school, because it worth the effort.
Despite the theme is a little bit heavy, this book may eventually change your life and your point of view of
those days. Give it a shot!

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Essay
Your class has watched a television documentary about the benefits of helping immigrants to integrate into their local communities. Notes: -Language -Culture -Work

Nowadays, immigration is one of the most discussed topic for mankind. There are several and alike
considerations that lead people to have their own point of view. In my essay I will highlight the pros of
beeing(being) kind and gentle with expats, linguistically and economically speaking.

As it is commonly believed, it is fundamental learn not only the language but also the idioms of the place
you live in. So as to be helpful and able to receive help. Moreover, speaking the local language make the
expats able to hang out with new people and, who knows, enhance the happiness of the city. Since,
perhaps, some of the local people feel lonely and these new entries might be the perfect match.

Furthermore, another amusing point is that, foreigners means new potential workers. Especially in the
countries where the old population overstate the numbre(number) of employees, new people are required.
Consequently, if the government organize courses for immigrants that introduce them to a specific work,
the country will be able to develop easily.

To sum up, it seems that giving a hand to someone can be a rewarding too. As far as I am concerned, I hope
that in the future everybody will understand the importance of being selfishless(generous) and that,
making new friends is always the best way to spend your time.

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Letter
Read part of an email from a friend who is planning on spending their Erasmus year in your country. It goes without saying that I will need to learn Spanish, or at
least have a good base before I come, but this is easier said than done. Are their any ways that I could save time doing this? Could you give me any useful tips to
improve quickly?

Dear Charlotte,

How’re you and your family? I hope you’re okay because I’ve read your email and I’m so excited that finally
I’ll see you soon. It goes without saying that I’m grateful that you’ve choosen(chosen) me as your adviser,
let’s see what I can do.

If I remembre(remember) well you don’t do any sports so you have some free time to spend in some
Spanish courses. I strongly suggest to take part in one of it, because they last for a specific time giving you
the possibility to orginize(organize) your homework too. Another way can be making new Spanish friends
to hang out with, so that you won’t feel too stressed and take some fresh air.

By the way, an efficient and quickly method to learn a language is both seeing and reading something in the
language you want to learn. I suggest you some easy tv series that you’ve already seen, and to do the same
with the books. In addition, you can make some schemes or maps about the grammar structures and call
me if you want to do some Spanish conversation.

All in all, of course is important to know at least the basis of the language, but it’s just because these key
words will help you to espress(express) your feeling and needs. In fact, what real matter is that you’re
mentally ready for this huge change.

Write me soon and let me know if this was helpful.

Forever yours,
Sofia.

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What are the benefits to a country from people spending time abroad? – business– culture– understanding

Nowadays, travelling is one of the most favourite path to spend some personal time. It is also truth that,
this pleasure has born with the possibility of enjoying the trip itself. It might bring some benefits also to the
country. In my essay I will highlight these pros, focusing on the economic and cultural aspects.

It might seems that, if you leave your country it will have a lessen business, but it is false. As a matter of
fact, the shops does not lessen its(them) revenue of money, due to the fact that this person buys a host of
things before leaving. That is to say, the country will have a little economic growth. Moreover, going abroad
might be a way to meet new friends that will come and take part in this process too.

Whereas, when travellers come back to a specific trip, they will spread them cultural knowledge on what
they have seen. This may be useful in order to improve the facilities of the country. On the ground of these
new needs, the country could develop specific servicies(services) in order to make feel everyone at ease
and enhance the number of tourists.

To sum up, seeing new places is both marvellous for you and helpful for the country. As far as I am
concerned, exploring is my biggest passion. Despite the fact that I am only seventeen years old, I am
grateful that I have got the opportunity to visit so many places.

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Review
Have you ever been to an amazing concert venue? Write a review of the best music venue in your local area and tell
us about what makes it so special. Say who you would recommend it for a why?

Best concert venue: Music’s Park

I believe that everyone once in a lifetime has been to a concert venue. I’ve been to more than one during
my last two years and every time was special on its own way. So, I’m going to write a review about the best
music venue that I’ve ever seen. This place is called “ Music’s park”.

Its location is in the centre of my city, Rome, and it’s accessible to everyone. In fact, it’s next to the
underground. This place in particular is the best because of its infrastructures. I’m usually not so interested
on architecture but this one leaves you withouth(without) breath. This huge building has the perfect
(acoustic) acustic and design. Basically, it looks like a massive cathedral.

What’s making this venue really special is its roof. It’s full of windows that together show the
costellation(constellation) of (Torus)Torous. It goes without saying that, once you see that, you can’t focus
on anything else. It’s also curios the shape of this windows, they seem to be made of plastic but I’m not
sure. Anyway, each of them has a shape of one spefici(specific) animal, from frog to lemming.

All in all, this is the perfect venue for couples, and if you bring yours there be sure that he or she will fall for
you in less than a moment. I can’t tell if it’s right for babies too, because its loud and crowded. At the end, I
hope that my review can be helpful and that you will give a shot to this marvellous place.

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Essay
Which aspect of our life has been effected most by technology?– Communication– Relationship– Working Life

Nowadays life has change so do our lives, things have became quicker and easier owing to new useful
discoveries; like technology. In my essay I will highlight how it has effected more deeply our ways of
communication and working life.

During the old days people used to write letters or call with cabins. Whereas, today people use phones,
which offer several services. Despite the pros and cons these new facilities have drastically changed our life,
maybe improved. Now if you feel out of the edge you can call a friend, or if you would like to hang out with
a distance friend, you can video-call they. Even if you do not want to argue with your mum you can simply
message to her.

Furthermore, these inventions are used in working life too. It goes without saying that, during these covid
days, without technologies employees were nevere(never) able to work. Moreover, there are more and
more multinational offices that are due to technology connection. As a matter of fact, technology gives
them the possibility to expand them bounderies(boundaries) and to be in contact anyway. Consequently,
people are able to work everywhere and at all hours.

To sum up, who invented technology was probably a genius; since mainkind(mankind) live of it. As far as I
am concerned, internet and elettronical (electronical) things are comfortable but perhaps they will never
be able to give the same bliss that is given by another human being.

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Review
Send in a review which describes the most uplifting film you’ve ever seen and the one you found the biggest downer. Make sure
you give reasons for your choices.

To cry or to laugh?

I believe that nowadays there are plenty of films. From trashy one to the most known, but, despite the plot
is given, usually you never understand if the film is made for you. So, I’m writing a review about two films,
the most spectacular and emotional that I’ve never seen.

The one that worth to be mentioned first is “A trip in the heart of the earth”. It goes without saying that,
this is the most adventure and funny film in the whole world. It talks about two relatives that, following an
old book, arrive in the centre of the earth. What make unique this movie are the sensations that you’ll feel,
from anxiosness(anxiousness) to bliss ness. Moreover, you will never stop laughing.

Whereas, the best “cry-maker” film is the “Notebook”. It’ a masterpiece and it’s full of romanticism that
can seriously stomach(disgust). By the way, it’s about two teenagers, during the 19(90)s, that fall in love.
Where is the sadness? They both die at the end of the film. Sorry for the spoiler. So, it’s more unhappy than
“Titanic” but I enjoy see it anyway. The reason is that it makes me believe in truth love, and when it ends
you can’t stop your tears.

All in all, these two films are suitable for youth like me. So, if you’re sweet and have an inquisitive mind,
you can’t miss these two marvellous productions. While, if you feel like they are too obvious or fuss I
suggest, at least, to give it a shot.

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Essay
Your class has watched a television documentary about the benefits of helping immigrants to integrate into their local communities.Notes:-Language-Culture-Work

Nowadays immigration is one of the most discussed topic. There are several reasons for these movements,
from job application to war escaping. In my essay I will highlight the pros of helping these people to feel at
ease into a their new home, linguistically and culturally speaking.

First of all, teaching them the language is fundamental. Both to avoid unpleasant situations and for a better
introduction into social life. As a matter of fact, if the government sets up these courses, they will have a
wider range of vocabulary, and that will give them the possibility to be more useful into their local
community. Consequently, these expats might become, under all point of view, a citizens like everyone
else.

Furthermore, giving them some tips on how to behave or what are the inappropriate actions, may be
helpful too. So as to avoid future fights and give them the possibility to make new friends. That is to say,
most of these expats have other cultural rules that might be seen unethical for the new country. Due to this
fact, giving these kind of suggestion is of vital importance for a peaceful life.

To sum up, helping has always been one of the most rewarded(rewarding) way to spend some free time. As
far as I am concerned, foreigners are seen too badly for no reasons. Everyone once in a lifetime has been
“the new guy” so maybe we should start to be less critical.

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Letter

Dear Chris,

I can’t believe to your words! I’m so glad that finally you’ll see what a wonderful place my town is. By the
way, I hope that you and your family are okay and let me say that I’m grateful to be your left hand in your
little trip.

Let me see what I can suggest you. Since you’ll stay here for only I week, I suggest you to see the best and
unforgettable monuments that are built here. Of coure(course) there are also some interesting museums
but, if you’d to come back I’ll be an honor(honour) to go there with you. It goes without saying that, the
most precious one are: the Colosseum, Pantheon and Trevi’s fountain. Moreover, if you visit them in order
you’ll pass throught(through) some square that it’ll leave you without breath.

Whereas, about the evenings, the best way to spend your time is going to the crowded streets of
Trastevere. It’s full of bars or restaurants, but more important, nightlife! I know you’ve a wife but there’s
nothing bad(wrong) of making some new friends. So, I believe that this schedule is the best one because it’s
a kind of simulation of how local people spend their time here. In other words, it’s a way to re-invent
yourself as a roman citizen.

All in all, if you need more information don’t hesitate to contact or call me. Furthermore, if you have some
other free time and you’d like to come to my place for a visit, it will be a pleasure.
Write me soon.
Sofia

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Essay
Which methods governments should use to prepare young people for working life?— visits from employers— apprentice schemes— work-
related subjects at school

Today the possibility to get a degree is higher. Although this is a great news, most of the new potential
workers do not have enough preparation or knowledge regard working life. In my essay I will give some
suggestion, like introducing work-related subject at school and having some visits from employers, that
might be introduce by the government into the school to avoid these situations.

School is the place where people grown up, so, it should prepare for working life too. This may happen with
the introduction of new courses. This new subject, in order to be seen as important as the other, should be
structurated(structured) differently. For example, this theme should be teached(taught) in practical way
and without giving homework to do, due to the fact that pupils must learn that making a great job is only
up to you(them).

Another useful point might be a meeting with other workers. It seems as a basic day off but, perhaps, it will
be useful. They might do like a Ted’s talk and explain their working experience. Consequently, this might be
stimulating and enlightenment for the students, that may lead them to do further resech(research) and
have a clearer idea on what kind of job is more suitable for them.

To sum up, the idea of giving some information on the working life at school, is a sign of social
development. As far as I am concerned, this may be also a way to have a mental growth, on the ground of
that gives you the possibility to do greater dreams.

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REVIEWS WANTED Send us a review of a book or a film focusses on somebody who has made an important contribution to society.Did you learn
anything new about the person’s life from the book or film? Did the book or film help you understand why this person made their important
contribution?

A person out of the edge

Nowadays school teaches you about a lot of great men and woman, but sometime these knowledge don’t
last. So, to bear them in mind, what’s best for you is seen(seeing) or reading something about it. I’m going
to do a review on one of the best book ever. It’s about Pirandello, a famous italian(Italian) poet that
changed many minds.

This book is “uno, nessuno e centomila” it worth keep the original title so as to avoid misunderstanding. By
reading this enlightenment piece of paper you’ll find something about him that usually the school’s books
don’t mention. For example, his crazy relationship with his wife and friends, or, that he was too emotional
sometimes. Probably these informations(information) are useless for an interrogation, but it helps you to
get what really went on in his mind.

Moreover, if you follow the lines you’re able to fully understand the reason of why he’s so famous. The
answer is truthly(truly) on his little book. Basically, he, probably unwittingly, was the first one who finally
talk about deep-thinking, the difficulties of taking part in a society and the enormous difference between
who you think you are and what the others think about you.

All in all, this is a marvellous book, full of unaspected (unexpected) reaction and curious thinking. If you’ve a
quite inquisitive mind I strongly advice(advise) you to give it a shot. Otherwise, if you prefer an easier
reading probably you’re looking for something different from this.

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Essay

Nowadays cities offer several infrastructures so as to satisfy the population. Unfortunately, not every cities
have enough money to keep all these buildings clean. In my essay I will highlight how, museums and public
gardens, should be a priority and receive money from the local authorities.

The most essential structure is the museum, a place where is shown the heart of the city. This is the reason
why every museum should always receive some fund, but that is not all. They offer a service to many
people. For example, they are what a tourist is looking for, or, a different approach of learning for mankind,
and also, for most of the grown-old, a way for remember their past days.

The second most important thing is the breath of the city: The public gardens. These green areas are always
crowded. Consequently, they need to be always neat. Moreover, during these days where the atmosphere
is full of carbon dioxide, these spaces could introduce more oxygen. Furthermore, they are still a place
where pupils go to spend their leisure.

To sum up, these two are the ones that should receive the money first. But, it is also truth that, in order to
keep these jewellery tidy, since the government cannot keep them on track each second. The citizen
should also feel responsible for his/her own wastage.

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Letter

Hi Chris,

I don’t know what to say, I can’t believe that you’re finally coming! How’s you and your family? I’m glad
that soon I’m going to see one of my dearest friend. Surely, I’m grateful to be your little guide for your
travel.

First of all, let me say that one week is enough time to see the most important things that are here. But
only if we stay focus and set up the right schedule. Starting with the evenings, you must, at least once,
come to my apartment and eat my famous spaghetti! While the others, you have to eat along the
restaurants of Trastevere and enjoy its nightlife, of course I know that you’ve a wife but it’s not a sinc(sin)
making some new friends.

Whereas, during the weekend, you ought to visit all the jewellery of the city. I’m going to prepare a long
walk, so bring some gym-shoes with you. We’ll start with the one that will be the nearest to your hotel and
so on, for that I need to know precisely where is your accommodation. This is what I’d like to do with you,
since it’s both practical, that is to say that you’ll able to see everything, and also it’s a way to have some
free time to talk about everything you did since we met the last time.

P.s.
I hope that this is what you were thinking about. If you have other ideas or request, you can write or call
me when you want. And remember to give me all the information that I ask for, I don’t want to do like the
last time !!

Yours,
Sofia.

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