The document provides advice on avoiding overusing phrases like "very + adjective" when describing things in a story, and instead recommends using more interesting alternatives. It gives examples of descriptions that could be improved by replacing the phrases in bold with alternatives from the provided box, such as describing a meeting as "totally pointless" instead of "not very useful", or an apartment as "absolutely fabulous" rather than "very nice".
The document provides advice on avoiding overusing phrases like "very + adjective" when describing things in a story, and instead recommends using more interesting alternatives. It gives examples of descriptions that could be improved by replacing the phrases in bold with alternatives from the provided box, such as describing a meeting as "totally pointless" instead of "not very useful", or an apartment as "absolutely fabulous" rather than "very nice".
The document provides advice on avoiding overusing phrases like "very + adjective" when describing things in a story, and instead recommends using more interesting alternatives. It gives examples of descriptions that could be improved by replacing the phrases in bold with alternatives from the provided box, such as describing a meeting as "totally pointless" instead of "not very useful", or an apartment as "absolutely fabulous" rather than "very nice".
When describing things in a story or anecdote, try to avoid overusing (not) very + adjective. Replace the descriptions in bold with more interesting alternatives from the box.
absolutely ancient absolutely hilarious
absolutely delighted quite inedible
absolutely fabulous really fascinating
absolutely filthy utterly astonished
utterly furious utterly miserable
1. The meeting was not very useful. totally pointless
2. It was a very interesting book. 3. They were very happy about the idea. 4. The food was not very good. 5. The weather was very bad. 6. Her apartment was very nice. 7. I was very surprised. 8. The whole thing was very funny. 9. The PCs they were using were very old. 10. He looked very angry. 11. The hotel was not very clean.