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Writing 1 (Katiana)
Writing 1 (Katiana)
Katiana Serrano
Intermediate 4
Feedback: Good content and reflexible. You need to work a little bit on editing your
first paragraph. Avoid excessive commas. Try using shorter sentences for your
conclusions. The second paragraph needs a bit of vocabulary editing as well. Check
suggestions in [brackets]. Score: 15