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Task 1 – Writing Test 1 Cam 14

The pie charts below illustrate the amount  number of nutrients including sodium, saturated fat and
added sugar eaten in American people’s meals. These types of substances can do harm to people’s
health if they are consumed uncontrollably.

Overall, sodium and saturated fat are eaten mostly in dinner whereas snacks have more of  X added
sugar than any other meal.

Firstly, sodium and saturated fat, both of them are added in dinner with 43% and 37% respectively.
While in lunch, the proportions of them takes the second place with 29% and 26%. Secondly, sodium
makes up 14% for both snacks and breakfast. Saturated fat provides with 21% in supper and 16% in
breakfast.

Finally, added sugar has the highest percentage in light meals, at about 42%, which doubles the
proportion of dinner, at 23%. The figure for snacks makes up at a lower rate, 16% for breakfast and 19%
for lunch.

Task 2 – Writing Test 1 Cam 14

Many people believe that it is importance  important to accept some negative situations when occur
 when occuring whereas others argue that it is better to try to seek some solutions to deal with hard
times in life. I will discuss both views in the essay below.

On the one hand, there are several reasons supporting why people believe that we have to accept the
bad conditions. First of all, people can not avoid all of bad events  the bad events which happen
around us and make us feel exhausted and depressed. Accepting a bad situation make  makes people
realize and acknowledge their mistakes. For instance, failures in business are opportunities for the
leaders to know which strategies are comfortable for the company or acknowledge the defects in
leading a company and improve them in the future. +Moreover/Also If we are accepting our
circumstances, this can allow us to maintain a positive mood and to continue enjoying our life despite
some difficulties.

On the other hand, other  others argue that we should have a good attitude and find ways to solve
problem  problems of bad situations instead of accepting them. When struggling with negative
events, it gives us motivation  the motivation to face with  X and find solutions. In this way, we
optimistically challenge ourselves and have a great impact on our life. Furthermore, when we strive and
seek solutions, we could also broaden our limits and widen our horizons related to opportunities for bad
situations. For example, if we lose our job, we will focus on finding a new job not only to solve the
problem of being unemployed but also to improve the quality of living standard.

In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have benefits. However, it seems to me that we had
better try to deal with problems and enhance the situations instead of accepting them.

OVERALL : (TASK 2*2 + TASK 1)/3=(6*2+4)/3 = 5.5 (làm tròn từ 5.3333333)

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