Gallery

The given maps illustrate two different plans for a gallery, which include an existing plan and
a proposed plan. Vẫn phải tách đoạn ra There are four main changes in the area
arrangement of these two pictures. Có 2 câu trong đoạn O cơ mà, trong template viết maps
thầy không nghĩ nên có câu đếm thay đổi, ít nhất phải thêm 1 câu thay đổi most highlighted
nhất mới ra ý summarize được
Firstly, in the proposed plan, the gallery’s entrance will be relocated from the Eastern to the
Northern of the building, which will also lead to the unnecessary?? Sao cô biết là
unnecessary? Nên nhớ thầy bảo Máp được cho opinion vào, nhưng chỉ là những opinion có
lý thôi. use of the lobby in the current plan (câu này cũng khá confusing, đi từ phía north thì
phải vào thẳng permanent exhibition space chứ liên quan gì đến lobby ở đây?). Secondly,
bộ 6 thay vì bộ 10 thì phù hợp the temporary exhibition spaces will be flattened to make
room for the expansion of the permanent exhibition space, which will roughly double the size
of this area.. After being expanded, the permanent exhibition space will become the largest
area of the building and directly connect to the entrance. These two changes will facilitate
the activities of visitors to approach in the exhibition space.gallery. (đoạn nếu cô định chia
thì nên có câu topic sentence để gộp 2 cái changes vào.)

Next, đây không phải là process mà dùng liên từ bộ 11 the previous not-included-space of
the gallery in the West west will be made good use of(how can you know? to construct a
special exhibition space and an exhibition store. For the final change in the proposed plan,
the lobby and the office will be altered converted into by a storage space and an education
area, which will be put in a set of tables and chairs.this conversion will also include a total
renovation of the space, which includes the addition of 2 big tables and several chairs.

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