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Analysis
By
Dr. Sonya Macon
Consider the title and make a prediction about
what the poem is about.
The “title” of the sonnet compares a woman’s eyes to the sun, which would
normally mean that her eyes are bright and shiny. However, the mistress’ eyes
are not like the sun. Based on the “title,” this sonnet is about a woman that a
man does not like.
Paraphrase – Write what the poem is about, literally, in your own
words. Look for complete thoughts (sentences may be inverted) and look up
unfamiliar words.
SONNET 130 PARAPHRASE
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; My mistress's eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red; Coral is far more red than her lips;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If snow is white, then her breasts are a brownish gray;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. If hairs are like wires, hers are black and not golden.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, I have seen damask roses, red and white [streaked],
But no such roses see I in her cheeks; But I do not see such colors in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight And some perfumes give more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. Than the horrid breath of my mistress.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know I love to hear her speak, but I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound; That music has a more pleasing sound.
I grant I never saw a goddess go; I've never seen a goddess walk;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: But I know that my mistress walks only on the ground.
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare And yet I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare. As any woman who has been misrepresented by
ridiculous comparisons
For your paraphrase, read the modern
translation and then write a paragraph about
telling what this sonnet is about.
The speaker of the sonnet describes the woman he loves. He makes multiple
comparisons of her to things like the sun, coral, and roses. She does not
compare to those beautiful things. She is not as pretty. He also says she does
not have pretty skin or hair, and she has bad breath. He says she is not a
goddess but a real woman walking on earth. In the last two lines, he says he
loves her and doesn’t try to falsely compare her to things that she is not like.
Examine the poem for meaning beyond
the literal. Look for literary elements such as figurative
language, imagery, and sound devices.
You are required to analyze the structure of the sonnet as
one of your examples AND then choose TWO other literary
elements.
Simile
Structure
Imagery
Metaphor
Personification
Allusion
Diction (use diction to determine tone)
Sonnet Structure
The rhyme scheme (or end rhyme pattern) is abab cdcd efef gg.
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;(a) Quatrain 1 – The first quatrain compares the
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;(b) woman’s physical appearance to the sun,
If snow be white, why then her breasts are coral, snow, and wires (golden wires used for
dun;(a) hair nets). None of the woman’s physical
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her attributes are as lovely.
head(b). Quatrain 2- The second quatrain again
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,(c) compares the woman’s cheeks to roses and
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;(d) her breath to perfume, but they do not
And in some perfumes is there more delight(c) measure up. Her cheeks are pale and her
Than in the breath that from my mistress breath smells.
reeks.(d) Quatrain 3 – The woman’s voice does not
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know(e) sound like beautiful music. The woman is no
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;(f) goddess.
I grant I never saw a goddess go;(e) Couplet – The three quatrains show that the
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the speaker does not love the woman or like the
ground:(f) way she looks. However, the twist in the
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare(g) couplet is that the man sees that his love has
As any she belied with false compare.(g) faults but he loves her anyway.
Simile
“My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;” (line 1)
The shift is indicated by the indented lines, the change in rhyme scheme,
and the change in tone.
The first twelve lines compare the mistress unfavorably with nature’s beauties, but
the concluding couplet swerves in a different direction. The tone changes from
mocking to genuine and sincere. The couplet indicates that the speaker actually
does love his mistress in spite of her ordinary appearance or her flaws.
What is the poem saying about the
human experience, motivation, or condition?
People should love one another for who they are, not for
the way the look.