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Trying To Write A Short Story
Trying To Write A Short Story
I once saw a girl named Maria Magdalena in what I thought was a meaningless
summer afternoon where not even the wind felt like it was worth blowing. My parents weren’t
home, and I decided to take a very unusual stroll around the neighborhood, waiting for
something, anything to happen. I can only remember the quite vivid demonstration of
eternal damnation in hell as the sun caused my pale skin to turn crimson. Is it because the
blood is beginning to boil inside your body that your skin turns red when sunburnt? As one
does when boiling, I started to scurry around in search for the protection of a solid wall. The
house nearest was my first choice, and I rested on the shadow of the house’s second floor roof,
walk in plain summer, a girl’s voice came from the window in a soft, motherly tone.
“Are you alright? Do you want me to bring you a canteen?” I could barely see the girl
through the window due to the reflection of the sunlight, and she also covered most of her
face with the curtain. What I could see, however, was the girl’s beautiful black doe eyes. I
could not take my eyes from hers, while the sweat dripped through my hair. I was so smitten
that I forgot to even answer, and she must’ve got scared, because she shrieked and hid her
whole face with the curtain. I suddenly snapped back to unbearable heat and stupidity, as I
“Yes! Please bring me a… canteen?” My eyebrows raised, my face locking itself into
an expression of perpetual confusion. Why not bring me a water bottle, like a normal person?
I wondered why she would bring the water in a canteen, which meant I couldn’t see the water
and see whether there was something inside or if it even was water. What was she scheming?
Is this some elaborate trap, where the man drops his guard near the young woman and she
takes advantage? Suddenly, her black doe eyes became the dark eyes of a femme fatale within
a moment. Describing the situation now, I think that the unbearable heat must have kicked
in my survival instincts from my time in the Sahara Desert two hundred thousand years ago,
but the possibility of a drug or poison being placed in the water seemed like a true possibility
She showed her dark eyes again slowly, and they seemed almost harsher this time. She
looked away from my eyes, clearing her throat. “I can’t fit a water bottle through the hole in
the window, but I have a smaller canteen that I think will fit through. But don’t worry, it’s
still sanitary.” She spoke assertively, her eyes darting to mine as she awaited my reply. She
had now shown her mouth to reveal a nice, albeit clearly fake smile.
At this point, I didn’t know what to think. Her fake smile didn’t alarm me to malice,
more like a lack of practice. She seemed honest, and her black eyes had been transformed due
to the presence of her nose and mouth, definitely for the better. I think she had sensed some
hesitation and distrust from me in my previous question, and tried to seem assertive in order
to alleviate my fears. However, her comment about the sanitation of the canteen caused a
great pit to form in my stomach, and I was afraid that I was being played the fool. I could
not ask her to drink it before me, because if she was just being helpful, I’d seem like a
distrustful boy who cannot even trust the word of a woman. I had started to believe that
murder was the only possible explanation for planting the poison. I decided to at least learn
the name of my murderer, to damn her to take a stroll in the neighborhood as I did and then
said softly, almost embarrassed. Try as I might, I could not picture a woman with that name
as a dastardly villain, but perhaps a kind, wealthy but humble woman, an honest witness. A
name like Catalina would have sufficed for the riveting plot of the motion picture that I was
producing in my mind, but not Magdalena. “And yours?” She asked while I remained
dumbfounded. Why was she asking me my name if she would kill me? Does it get her off on
the fact that her victims are people and she is taking away their personhood? Maybe I should
I hesitated. “Mateo.” I lied to her, as that was the only form of revenge I could muster
up at that moment. That damned Catalina, I thought, robbing an honorable woman’s name!
I was actually the one who had robbed an honorable man’s name that same moment, but the
hypocrisy was lost on me that day. “I will bring you the canteen now with refreshing cold
water, is that alright?” Magdalena asked concisely and gently. She spoke with great care and
politeness, clearly not the essence of a name-taker. I had lost myself completely. My blood
boiled from an overwhelming heat within, and I was effectively going mad.
“Alright.” Nothing was alright. The sweat was dripping even more, the stupidity had
perhaps gone to levels never seen before, not even Lucifer himself could emit the heat one
feels in the psychological fires of imminent death, and the afternoon vengefully struck me
with all it had for my past criticism. I looked through the window, but she had already gone.
I pressed my forehead against the window, my eyes closed and gasping for air, wondering
what to do. My parents would be proud of my alertness, I thought, but would probably scold
smiled halfheartedly, in what I interpreted at the time as a threat from the femme fatale
persona. “Well, Mateo,” Her smile faded, “here’s your water. I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t let
you in, but the door is locked and I don’t have the key.” She pushed the window enough for a
space to open up that fit the canteen almost perfectly. I, now a young death row inmate
named Mateo to be boiled alive by the lethal Catalina, grabbed the canteen slowly. I
wondered to myself, when does the saying ‘Hell hath frozen over’ apply? Why can’t the wind
blow so unbearably cold that I no longer need to drink this? If she was truly the honest Maria
The canteen was already open, all that was left for me was to drink it. Yes, I only had
to drink it. I half-expected it to be boiling hot. As you can imagine, thinking you’re going to
drink poison willingly is perhaps the most confounding thing one can do. Time speeds up and
your otherwise reliable body strength completely falters, and the body starts reverberating,
as if it is waiting to shut down and this is the final thunderous drum solo to an otherwise
repetitive musical performance. It was perhaps the most violence I have ever experienced in
one moment. I could no longer bear a second more of this terrible suffering. I resolved to
And I did. I drank the whole canteen bottoms-up. “Does it taste good? Refreshing?”
The honest, soft Maria Magdalena asked, waiting for my reaction. It is possible she said
something before, but I had disappeared in the world for a time. It probably was not more
than a few seconds. “Yes. Thank you, Maria.” I gave her the canteen back and I looked
around after that, to find the way home and then never come out again. “No problem! Hope
to see you around, Mateo.” I sincerely hope to never see you around, Catalina.