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Instructions: For each group poem, I would like to see you enhance the poem in the green box so we can
compare. Think about the cruel reality of war, what did the soldiers see, hear, think, feel?
1) Can you add any onomatopoeic words?
2) Can you add a simile or metaphor?
3) Can you add any alliteration?
Escape the deadly battlefield is not possible for fighting soldiers in the front line
Revenge on the enemy is the dream of every soldier who wanted to protect their country
Everyone should remember the horrible scream and wails in the war
Escape the deadly battlefield is not possible for fighting soldiers in the front line
Revenge on the enemy head is the dream of every soldier who wanted to protect their country
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Group 2 – Solider first draft
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Group 3 - Hero first draft:
H - Heroic peoples has been born from these horrible years of war.
O - Over this historic event wish there will be no more when the new offspring has come.
H - Heroic peoples has been born from these horrible years of war.
O - Over this historic event wish there will be no more when the new offspring has come.
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Group 4 - Thank you first draft:
Although the battlefield was full of unknown dangers, they never flinch from it.
Although the battlefield was full of unknown dangers, they never flinch from it.