dancing, public speaking and so forth so that their children become talented compared to other

people. In order to achieve this goal, parent will arranged extra class in child’s spare time. Eventually,
too much of class cause the children not have enough time to rest after 5 day of study in
school.Seriously, they even could not be more focus on academic. Next, parent tend to make
children to learn various language like French, Korean, Japanese and so on. Which candidate will be
chosen by the employer, a candidate who spoke 10 language or a candidate who just know to speak
their own mother tougue? Hence, a person who have capability to speak various language will
increase their employability in the future. Hence, a holistic and talented person mostly formed due to
the parental pressure.

Last but not emphatically least, parental pressure can help to form a well-behaved person. It is
essencial as a polite children will have good impression among the people. Hence,parent tend to
teach this child to become a polite person by become a role modal for children to emulate. As a
illustration, parent will teach them greeting with other people, give the seat to the olderly, not speak
loudly in public and show polite to everyone whoever a cleaner. As a result, children will be polite and
emulate what they see in house.

improving child’ academic performance, become a holistic person and become well-behaved child Are
the reason why the parent put too much pressure to children. I strongly agree the stand that
‘Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. However, moderation is the
key for children to succeed in every sector. Stress can be a motivation if it is in appropriate amount.
Too much of stress, however, will cause huge problem like mental problem among children. Thus,
parent also need to give their caring toward their child if the not pass with flying colour as they will
more motivated to score well in next exam.

SAMPLE ANSWER
Hook:
Bo Bennett once said that ‘Success is not in what you have but in who you are’
Stand: completely agree with the statement
Thesis Statement:
Of only parents would focus more on shaping their children’s character and moral development , as
well as the pursuit of knowledge and the development of skills, perhaps everything else will fall into
place.
Focus on the development of character and moral development
TS:
The first parenting skill that every parent should have is to focus on shaping their children;s character
and moral development
R:
Children with good moral compass will not have much difficulty in treading on the right path. Once
they are on the straight and narrow, success will come a plenty to them.
Examples;
It is so important to instill essential values such as respect for the elders, honesty, integrity ad also
love and care for those who are ill or underproviledged.
C:
Hence, focusing on the development of the character and moral values is essencial to success of
children

Encourage the pursuit of knowledge

TS: Furthermore, parents need to encourage the pursuit of knowledge instead of rote-learning
R: Parents should encourage their children to read as widely as possible. Children who are well read
tend to be well-bred as they will know how to differentiate right from wrong. They will gain wisdom and
develop discernment
E:Acquiring A’s in a public examination does not determine one’s intelligence
C:Instead, the ability to pursue knowledge in a broader spectrum will ensure wisdom and all-around
intellect
Holistic Development
TS: Besides, every parent should develop life skills to ensure their children are holistically developed
R:In addition to putting academic pressure on children, parents also tend to send them for drawing.
Dancing, martial arts and even swimming classes to ensurenthat tehir children will be accomplished
prodigies
E: Many of these children do not have time to learn other basic life skills such as making their own
beds, keeping their rooms tidy or even cooking as most homes tend to have house maids to do these
simple chores. These children tend to suffer when they leave their homes for college as they are
unable to look after themselves, It is pointless to have a master’s degree but one cannot cook to save
one’s own life.
C:Thus, parents need to instill life skills in their children so that they will learn to survive and excel on
their own

Summarise
In conclusion, parents should develop their children’s character, trigger their pursuit for knowledge
and life skills instead of focusing on academic success alone.
UN realistic expectations can cause unduly stress among children. Parents must be sensitive to this
problem. They must realize that children who are under tremendous pressure to perform are unlikely
to succeed in school or life.
It is recommended that parents do not put undue pressure on their children to perform but keep
encouraging them to do their best. After all, success is not final, failure is not fatal but it is the courage
to continue that counts.

Set 5
Task 1
Dear Shah,
Glad to hear from you. I feel sorry that you could not join with us. I heard you need to quarantine since
last Friday and I hope you can get well soon. For your information, the Financial Accounting class
very tough as there are a lot of theory new to me and somtime I even could catch up what lecture say
in class. However, thanks to my senior, Joyce, she did teach me until I completely understand what
taught in class.
You are right, there are many assignment as well as exam in mid July. I also get some study tip from
my senior. In order to get a excellent result, I plan to divide them into small task and set the dead line
for every task. In this process, I believe my time management will be improved.
In order to do our course presentation, all of our group need to be divided, I like it because we can
help each other and contribute to group because teamwork make dream work. Besides, it can really
enhance my presentation skill
That’s right. The talk related to public speaking and body language will be organise in conjuction of
English Month. I hope you able to go with me, And I still got a lot of thing want to share with you
Absolutely! It is my pleasure! Write back soon!
Eunice

SAMPLE ANSWER
Hi Shah,
Glad to finally hear from you. I heard you are under quarantine as you were a close contact of a
Covid-19 patient. I certainly hope you are in excellent health. Although we have just commenced the
new semester, the Financial Accounting course is rather tough. We have to complete 15 exercises
based on the first lecture during the first week.
There are a total of three assigments we need to complete. The first us a individual assignment on
Balance Sheets while for the sand third assignments, we are required to wor in grouos of 3-4 persons
respectively that involve various sub-tasks we need to complete before submitting a full report.
Besides the three assignments, we also need to prepare for an upcoming mid-term test next month
which will test our understanding of the first four topics. Despite a heavy workload, I plan to obtain a
distinction for this course. Thus, I will put in extra hours of study and be consistent with the tutorial
question answers. In that way, I will ensure tha I have a thourough understanding of all topics not only
for the mid-terms but also the finals.