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success.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Sample Answer 1:
Many people are successful in life, which can be explained not only by
their hard work. In this essay, I am going to consider that luck is as
important as the ability to dedicate our time and energy to work.
We must acknowledge that without a deep understanding of what we do
and how we do we can hardly achieve positive outcomes. There are
millions of employees who do not go beyond their duties, not moving
deeper to comprehend that the process is about. Consequently, they see
only a visible side of the iceberg. They are quite satisfied being paid a
decent salary and having some bonuses. Such people do not look for
challenges; they treasure stability and are not ready for changes. They
can spend a whole life doing one and the same work, even if it is
extremely boring and irritating,
On the other hand, there are absolutely different people who do not
only dedicate all their time to work but comprehend all the stages,
distinguish the bonds and even make efforts to improve these
processes. Needless to say, it takes a lot of time and inner strength.
These people are said to be "burning at work", as they cannot imagine
their existence without it. The job for them is not only a source of
wealth but something they are fond and proud of.
[ by - Helen Dmytriieva ]
Sample Answer 2:
At the present time, people believe that only hardworking people will
succeed and there's no place for luck. I totally disagree with the rubric
above due to the fact that people cannot earn money without luck and
with no luck people won't be able to get a job and it will be proven in
the following essay.
Firstly, since the dawn of time people believed to luck, for example,
people always carry some kind of talismans or chokers. In the Ireland,
people believe that green clover will bring them money and luck. And
the situation has not been changed at the present as well. You can hold
a questionnaire and ask strangers "do they believe in luck or not?" I'm
sure that 100% of people will say ‘yes’; because the luck is an
inalienable part of the life of human beings.
Secondly, without luck people won't be able to get even a job. For
instance, when people looking for a job, they are searching them on
newspapers and magazines and they don't know what expects them
there, they only rely on luck and trying to find a suitable job for
themselves. Furthermore, even at the school sometimes kids are getting
their marks by luck, which means that teachers sometimes can mix up
jobs and mark the student wrong. It's also a clear example of luck.
On the other hand, if people will rely on only luck they will not get
anything, truly luck is with us but it helps only when we work hard. For
example, in difficult situations when people cannot make a choice
between something, they are choosing only by their instincts and if they
work hard and learn a lot, they know which decision to make, it all
comes from experience.
After analysing both sides of this issue, I have concluded that despite
the hard work, people always need at least the grain of luck for the
successful life.
[ by - Akmal Sharipov ]
Sample Answer 3:
Every person wants to be successful in life. They have been trying their
best, studying or working hard to reach what they wish for. Some
people believe that success is about hard work. They argue that luck
does not have a part in this case. People succeed depend on how big
their effort to get what they want, not about fortune. But I disagree with
the opinion because I think that success is about effort, pray, and luck.
There are many things that people do for being successful in life,
especially in their careers. They spend the time to work as hard as they
can and as much as they are able. Success becomes their goal so they
push their selves to get that. Successful people in this world are them
who always are responsible, honest, hardworking, and lucky.
Sometimes people feel very confident and they just focus on their effort.
They are too busy trying their best to achieve something so they forget
that there is an important thing besides an effort: that is luck. I do not
want to say that hard work is not important, but I believe that luck
influences the result of our effort. For instance, occasionally people have
tried their best for doing something but in the end, they do not get what
they want.
Many people forget that the biggest power in this universe is God, not
themselves. Furthermore, thinking that hard work is the only thing to be
success sounds not wise. There were few people fail to reach their
dreams although they have worked hard for it. They have spent much of
their time to try their best. But who knows, they get something which is
not expecting. Is because of luck? Maybe yes because the effort is not
enough to be successful. We need luck and definitely, we need God.
In conclusion, I believe that success is not only about how hard we try
but also our luck. Every human has their own luck and their own fate
but they have to still try. People should respect the process, not just the
result. What happens in future will depend on our effort and the
blessing of the Almighty.
[ by - Farahdina Bachtiar ]
Sample Answer 4:
"Success is always a journey but not a destination". I feel that success
cannot be a place but it is a part and journey of one's own life. The
author of this topic says that people succeed in their lives only because
of the hard work but not the luck. According to me, both will play vital
roles in every individual person's life. In the below paragraphs I will
justify how both are important to succeed.
Firstly, I would like to say that without hard work even God will not help
you out in coming over the things in life. So, one should work hard to
earn anything. I say this because there are many people around the
world who tasted success because of their immense hard work. It is a
sheer illusion that one comes up in life without hard work. For instance,
everyone knows about the president of America. He was born in a poor
family in Kansas, his father somehow managed to send him to the
school for education. Then he really worked hard and secured seats in
Columbia University and then to his dedication, he completed his law
from Harvard Law University with scholarships and stipends.
Now I would like to put emphasis on the luck which is also a required
one in success. One may be really hard working but if the place where
he or she is residing is underdeveloped then it will be very difficult to
achieve the feat. Not only that when we read the stories of great
people, we can observe that, they had a coordinating family through
which they succeeded, they are not lucky here. One such example is the
legendary cricketer Sachin Tendulkar. He is a well-known cricketer in the
world. He was such a lucky person that he not only had a very good
coach and his parents' support but also got a chance to play
international cricket at the age of 16, which I feel is terrific. He used to
be busy with the cricket schedule and his wife use to take care of their
children, so he is lucky enough to have all this.
[ by - Ahmet Tekin ]
Sample Answer 6:
Success is the ultimate goal of everyone. All of us are doing our best to
achieve success in different fields of life as work and study.
People try to achieve success through many ways; some of them are
hard workers, they depend on their efforts to gain success. Others are
relying on their relations with important or authorised persons to reach
their goals. In addition to the previous, there is a category of lucky
people where luck plays important role in their lives and helps them very
much.
I tend to see that, hard working is the first step of success and it is a
mandatory thing, but also luck is very important. So, from my point of
view, I think they are complementing each other.
Last but not least, It should not be left unmentioned that success is the
normal result of working hard and one should not only depend on
his/her luck for a long time to achieve success because it may not work
for many times.
[ by - Waleed Hassanain ]
Sample Answer 7:
There has been a debate whether or not luck plays a part in success.
Some people argued that hard work is the only thing that helps people
to succeed, whereas others think that luck also contributes to success.
Personally, I agree with the latter.
Hard work is definitely crucial when it comes to success. Without any
hard work, it is highly unlikely that someone would succeed. For
instance, there might be a good opportunity for someone to establish a
cyber-security company given the current demand on that field, but if he
is unwilling to work hard on developing the firm, it might not flourish.
On the other hand, although some people might not believe in luck,
others feel that luck has affected their performances and achievements.
There are people who have standard working performances and could
not give significant contributions to their companies, but they are
promoted by their superior. In another case, there are several salesmen
who do not approach their potential customer aggressively, but their
sales performances are beyond the target. And for these groups of
people, they are convinced that luck has truly affected their careers.
[ by - Darwin Lesmana ]