Grade 12 Level 5 Writing Sample © Back to Writing Samples index. {2f1s 3 commen theme inlkerature that the worse of dines Brings out not only the worst but aso Use the checkboxes below to dleplay the the best m peopl, Individuals faced with natural disasters, conficts, overwhelming cds, cormesparading benchinark txt unboarsbie proscure and monstrous oui aa capable of oxtracrcinary acts of courage ard kanahnoss. Who co you think is sly courageous? Why? Bonchmark Ratings Linguistic vocabulary 5 a a Ti He a a a ‘student veriting sample: come from country Ht ESIGN n ES tor IRIBERE, hundreds of years. The country has had worst of times many years. you count the yoars t would load you ta view about the past and less of hape tor the future. a Linguistic Grammar 5 Linguistic syntax 5 svateaic 5 a Sose-Linguistic 5 a Discourse 5 a Editing 5 (€ibe). MERROW females in our conservative ‘cansidered second class. Or x wastom 2 (tnbe), she was eoidemned ts times. Gut she (wide) woman to get degree in macicine. she aracticed medicine in cacital cy fit MESSHSEEEREESUR 293) for her safety, IESESRESEsinseeHEs'SOHSAbGE. =r husband was arrested and fil@SSREISQ.Dr. anc her in this new courtry she ozened children fied ta another country. |WORBAL P2cple in home courtry [SUGHEDSROEMEE fore'g cccusation for years, AES Geo InMaeeS IO, 2 ‘took power of the country. Dr X had been gone a decade, ‘She worked towards making things Lottor for worton. SHO WASHOE resign she Was threatened with cesth ard KRESS for challenging (tribe) Lav. The conservatives called her = criminal in ou countryT come from country that haz been involved in conflict For decades, in fact, hundreds of years. The country has had worst of times many years. If you count tthe yeors it would lead you to pessimistic view about the past and loss of hope for the future. The individuals what have acted with evil meanness for the citizens of my country are enemies from inside the country and there are some enemies from outside the country. Nothing can crush the strong spirit of my people, particularly women, and most specifically my hero Dr. X. When I lived back home there was conflict between different groups of ethnic minorities. The group who was persecuted the most were (tribe). Moreover, females in our conservative society were conzidered second class. Dr. X was born a female (tribe). She waz condemned two times. But she became first (tribe) woman to get a degree in medicine. She practiced medicine in capital city but was forced to run away for her safety. The country was invaded by a super power. Her husband was arrested and never seen again. De. X and her shildran fled to ancther country. In this now eauntry che epaned a clinic te help refugees who lived in terrible misery, particularly women. People in home country fought back against foreign eccupation for years, however once invaders left, a radical extremist group took power of the country. Dr. X had been gone a decade. Onee the redical extremists had been overthrown an interim government was set up. br. X returned from her place of safety to take cabinet past in an Interim Administration. She worked towards making things better for women. She was forced to resign because she was threatened with death and harassed for challenging (tribe) Law. The conservatives colled her a criminal in our country. Dr. X is not only my hero but she is recognized internationally for her courage and commitment, She has received mony awards for her work with the human rights ‘ond democracy. A few years ago, she received a very prestigious international ‘ward. T can only hope to face adversity with bravery she has shown during her life. T follow her life and her work because it is inspiration for me when T read about darkness disasters ceross the world.