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Active and Passive Voic2
Active and Passive Voic2
Give
Active: He gave me the book / He gave the book to me.
You can choose either of the two objects to be the subject of the passive sentence.
Passive: I was given the book (by him)/ The book was given to me (by him).
Other verbs like this are: ask, offer, teach, tell, lend, promise, sell, throw.
The active voice is the "normal" voice - the one that we use
most of the time. In the active voice, the object receives
the action of the verb:
Mice are by
eaten cats.
Passiv Water is by
e drunk everybody.
Active Voice
Cats eat mice.
Subje verb
ct
Johnn laughe
y d.
In the active voice, the subject is the person or thing responsible for the action
of the verb.
All tenses are possible in the active voice, as well as all sentence types,
positive, negative or question.
Use of active
The active voice is the "default" voice in English. All intransitive verbs can
only be in the active voice, and all transitive verbs usually are active voice -
unless we deliberately make them passive.
In spoken English, we almost always use active voice. It is the natural choice,
more precise and generally shorter.
In written English, active voice is usually easier and more interesting for the
reader. Passive voice can sound dull and bureaucratic, and is typical of official
writing. In the interests of "plain English" that the average person can
understand, many governments now encourage civil servants to write in the
active voice.
optional
I Am employed b Apple.
y
Notice above↑:
auxiliary be can be conjugated for all persons and
tenses
main verb is invariable: past participle
if there is an agent (Apple, Head Office), it is
introduced by by
Agentless passive
infinitive to be sung
participle sung
Active passive
o This sentence structure puts the emphasis of the sentence on the subject, clarifying who
conducted the study.
Generally, in scholarly writing, with its emphasis on precision and clarity, the active voice is
preferred. However, the passive voice is acceptable in some instances, for example:
Also, much like for anthropomorphism, different writing styles have different preferences.
So, though you may see the passive voice used heavily in articles that you read for your
courses and study, it does not mean that APA style advocates the same usage.
Examples of Writing in the Active Voice
Here are some examples of scholarly writing in the active voice:
Example: I will present the results of this study at the Association for Supervision and
Curriculum Development conference.
o This is active voice because the subject in the sentence precedes the verb, clearly
indicating who (I) will take the action (present).
Example: Teachers conducted a pilot study addressing the validity of the TAKS exam.
o Similarly, teachers (subject) clearly took the action (conducted) in this sentence.
o Here, it is not clear who did the conducting. In this case, if the context of the
paragraph does not clarify who did the action, the writer should revise this sentence to
clarify who conducted the study.
o This revised sentence clearly indicates the action taker. Using “I” to identify the
writer’s role in the research process is often a solution to the passive voice and is
encouraged by APA style (see APA 7, Section 4.16).
Using the past tense of the verb “to be” and the past participle of a verb together is often an
indication of the passive voice. Here are some signs to look for in your paper:
Another indication of passive voice is when the verb precedes the actor in the sentence. Even
if the action taker is clearly identified in a passive voice construction, the sentence is usually
wordier. Making the actor the grammatical subject that comes before the verb helps to
streamline the sentence.
o Wordier passive voice example: The study on nursing and turnover was conducted by
Rogers (2016).
o Issue: Though the verb and the actor (action taker) are clearly identified here,
to improve clarity and word economy, the writer could place that actor,
Rogers, before the verb.
o More concise active voice revision: Rogers (2016) conducted a study on nursing and
turnover.
o Passive voice example: The survey instrument will be administered by the school
administrators.
o Issue: Here, the actor follows the verb, which reduces emphasis and clarity.
o Active voice revision: The school administrators will administer the survey
instrument.
o This revised sentence is in the active voice and makes the actor the subject of
the sentence.
o Here, all actors taking actions are identified, but this is in the passive voice as the
State’s Department of Education is the actor doing the placing, but this verb precedes
the actor. This may be an intentional use of the passive voice, to highlight schools not
meeting AYP.
o To write this in the active voice, it would be phrased: “The State’s Department of
Education will place schools not meeting AYP for 2 consecutive years on a “needs
improvement” list. This sentence places the focus on the State’s Department of
Education, not the schools.
Example: Participants in the study were incentivized with a $5 coffee gift card, which I gave
them upon completion of their interview.
o As the writer and researcher, I may want to vary my sentence structure in order to
avoid beginning several sentences with “I provided…” This example is written in the
passive voice, but the meaning is clear.