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A: What is Philosophy?
But what we care about for the purposes of a course like this one is the
methodology by which a philosopher gathers wisdom.
The key to gathering wisdom, for a philosopher (and hopefully anyone else)
is to ensure that their beliefs are well founded… that is, they have good
reasons that support their beliefs.
Note: ‘Good reasons’ do not imply that our beliefs are supported ‘with
certainty’… owing to the finite and fallible nature of human existence, the
best we can hope for is that our beliefs be supported by the best available
reasons.
While the burden of ‘accepting beliefs only when there are good reasons’ is
one that each individual philosopher accepts, the means by which knowledge
is acquired and developed by humans using arguments is a collective
undertaking.
The basic idea behind the collective enterprise can be traced at least as far
back as Plato… each of us presents our beliefs and the reasons that support
those beliefs, and if those reasons survive all possible criticism, then our
beliefs must be ‘true’.
A successful essay convinces all (or the majority of) readers that the position
taken (the thesis) is the position the reader should also take because the
reasons presented are rationally compelling/plausible.
CLARITY
If I am a reader of your work, and I cannot understand what you are trying to
convince me of, you cannot convince me of anything.
There will be two sorts of clarity that are relevant to writing an essay:
1. Clarity of Structure
2. Clarity of Expression
The thesis is one of the most important parts of any essay, because it is a
statement of the position the essay is designed to articulate and/or defend.
Notice that, if your thesis is the focal point of your essay, you shouldn’t start
writing until you have a working thesis… otherwise, how will you decide
what you should/should not include in the essay?
Why? Because essays are not mystery novels! You do not want to build
suspense. In other words, part of what it means to ‘be clear’ is being direct.
b. The Exegesis
I hope the following is obvious: If you are going to state and try to defend an
opinion about something as indicated in your thesis, there must be some
‘thing’ your opinion is about.
Step b. is the point at which you describe to your reader the issue your thesis
is about. In the case of every academic essay, this will involve some sort of
literature review.
Your exegesis will typically be divided into at least two parts… in the first
part, you’ll provide a general overview of the position you’re describing, and
the second part will be narrowly focused on the element of the piece you
intend to criticize.
Note: this is an important step on a practical level, because this is the point
at which you will be demonstrating your knowledge of the subject matter.
c. The Reasons, i.e., The Step that Does or Does not Make Your Essay
Convincing
Having stated your opinion, then described the issue and relevant literature
about which you have an opinion, you must now ‘defend’ your opinion, i.e.,
explain why that’s the opinion you took.
This is the most important part of any essay because this is the part that’s
going to make your thesis convincing.
The irony is that it’s the most difficult step to describe because there are a
myriad of possible ways to construct and/or present reasons in defence of a
thesis.
Two Broad Strategies for essays in which you criticize an author’s position:
2. Clarity of expression.
Use the simplest, most precise language possible (seriously, just forget the
Thesaurus exists).
Only make one (1) point per paragraph; the grammatical function of a
paragraph is to isolate distinct (but obviously related) points.
Reread outloud - that’s the single best way of catching grammatical errors.
Grading Scheme:
If you have a good exegesis (accurate and focused) and a convincing set of
reasons: A range (80 - 100).
If you have a good exegesis (accurate and focused) and a set of reasons that
aren't very convincing: B (70-79).
If you have a clear statement of your position and a good exegesis but no
reasons, or you have reasons but they’re based on a misinterpretation of the
argument you’re responding to: C range (60-69).
If you grossly misrepresent the position of the author you’re addressing,
and/or have no clear position of your own: F – D range (0 – 59).
Again, this is just a ROUGH standard so there will be some variance, but it
should give you a good idea of what the graders will be thinking when they
assign grades for your essays.
So the rules are normative statements and as such they imply the assertion of
some value, a value that justifies the norm. E.g., the moral norm ‘it is wrong
to lie’ reflects the value placed on truth telling.
Normative statements are not only ethical. There are for example, economic
norms, e.g., supplying more goods than the market demands can negatively
affect profits, or social norms, e.g., wear clothing in public.
The significance of this distinction is, at the very least, that it reminds us
when we’re reading an argument to be attentive to the character of the claim
being made… is the author merely asserting some fact, or are they asserting
a value?
For example: The mere fact that we always act a certain way (e.g., as a
matter of tradition) does not, on its own, entail that we should continue
acting that way.
Some value (e.g., the value in perpetuating traditions) must be asserted to
justify that claim.
Next Class:
What is ‘Business,’ and what are some preliminary reasons for thinking that
ethical rules apply to human behavior in a business context?