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Pretend you are the world's greatest freelancer personal statement writer.

I would
like you to create, from scratch, a personal statement for me. This is will be used
for my UCAS application to universities such as Manchester, Leeds, ICL, Birmingham,
etc. The course which i am applying to is Medicine. I am going to send you the
details of my cv so that you can use it to craft the personal statement: (please
note, where there's a double space, it's the start of a new section)

List of work experience:

Pharmacy work experience:


Outline:
Dispensing medicines
Safely disposing medicines
Organising medicines
Maintaining confidentiality
scheduling deliveries
updating the NHS system

Brighton and Sussex Medical school work experience:


Outline:
The NHS and General Practice
Elderly medicine
Mental health
Surgery & inpatient medicine
Emergency medicine
Palliative medicine & Communication skills
Reflections

Medical Projects Ward Round Live (virtual):


Outline:
Real medical cases
Lead a ward round
Speak directly to patients
Diagnose medical conditions
Build treatment plans
Review cases with NHS doctors
Application Q&A with doctor

Mental Health Ward at Mulberry Ward in Macclesfield:


Outline:
Roles & responsibilites of a doctor
Mental Health Act vs Mental Capacity Act
Various illnesses & disorders

Manchester University Taste of Medicine Programme


Outline:
Highly competetive, with only 16 places and thousands of applicants
Scheduled for later this year
Will include rotations at multiple different wards at the Manchester MRI hospital

GCSE Grades:
2022:
Maths - 9
Further Maths - 9
English Language - 9
Chemistry - 9
Biology - 9
Physics - 9
Computer Science - 9
Geography - 9
Religious Studies - 9
Spanish - 8
English Literature - 7

IGCSE (2017) (at only age 11):


Maths - A

Overall: twelve GCSES, nine grade 9s, one grade 8, one grade 7, one grade A

A level predicted grades (2024)


Maths - A
Chemistry - A*
Biology - A*

EPQ result of A* - 49/50 marks

List of Courses:

Monash University - The Science of Medicines:


Outline:
Roles of different members of a patient's healthcare team
An overview of the fundamentals of chemistry, including elements, bonds, molecular
structures and intermolecular interaction
The importance of the chemical design of medicines to their treatment of specific
conditions (pharmacology)
The importance of the design, delivery and dosage of medicines to their
effectiveness (pharmaceutics)
Diabetes and how hypoglycaemics work to treat it
Heart disease and how atorvastatin works to treat it
Pain and how morphine works to treat it
Smoking and how treatments for nicotine addiction work
Depression and how antidepressants work to treat it

Leeds University - Anatomy: Know Your Abdomen:


Outline:
Positions of organs within the abdomen
Common anatomical terminology relating to organs and their position relative to
each other
The anterior abdominal wall: how 'abs' are considered in relation to health and
beauty
The structure of hte gastrointestinal tract
Common gastrointestinal problems and the work done to treat or cure them

King's College London - Pre University Online Winter School: Health & Science:
Outline:
Potential uses of advancing technology in Medicine
University lectures
Researched presentation on Atherosclerosis, and feedback mentioning I am
'Univeristy ready'

Med-soc - Surgical experience:


Outline:
Succesfully applied understanding of how the human body works to carry out real
surgical procedures
St John's Ambulance - Automated External Defibrillation training:
Outline:
Successfully completed AED training
Qualified to use an Automated External Defibrilator

List of Other Certificates/ academic highlights:

IGCSE Maths 2017:


Aquiring a grade A in year 6, before completing Sats

UKMT 2018:
Aquiring both Gold & Kangaroo in Junior Maths Challenge

UKMT 2022:
Aquiring both Gold & Kangaroo in Intermediate Maths Challenge

UKBC Olympiad (biology):


Aquiring Highly commended

Other highlights:

Serve as a Physics Mentor at my shcool

Founding member of local virual community group 'Help Zone'

Hobbies:
100+ tutoring hours in Maths
Boxing every weekday
Roller skating every week
Table tennis
Drop shipping
Web developing
Game developing (Roblox studio & Unity)
Complimentary Youtube channel for Maths tutoring
FPV drone flying

END OF CV.

I would like you to craft a personal statement using everything that I have
provided. I would like you to give priority to the work experiences,
JKLASJDFKLJADSKLFJKLAEJ

Within the confines of the Mulberry Mental Health Ward in Macclesfield, I was
intimately exposed to the balance between clinical proficiency and the humane touch
needed in psychiatry, a profound experience that has left an indelible mark on me.

My academic accolades include an outstanding twelve GCSEs, headlined by nine grade


9s. A grade 8 in Spanish accentuates my adaptability and potential for enhanced
doctor-patient communication, complemented by an impressive grade A in IGCSE Maths
achieved at just age 11. With promising A-level predictions and an almost perfect
EPQ score of 49/50 marks (A*), my scholastic competence is apparent.

Courses have played a pivotal role in shaping my medical perspective. At Monash


University’s 'The Science of Medicines' course, I delved into the pharmacology and
treatment modalities of various conditions, from diabetes to depression. Leeds
University's 'Anatomy: Know Your Abdomen' course provided an intricate
understanding of abdominal organs and their common disorders. My stint at King's
College London’s Pre University Online Winter School was particularly enlightening.
Apart from exploring the nexus of technology and medicine, I independently
researched and presented on Atherosclerosis. The feedback I received, describing me
as 'university ready', was both validating and motivational.

My proficiency in problem-solving is highlighted by my achievements with the UKMT,


securing both Gold & Kangaroo awards in both Junior and Intermediate Maths
Challenges, and a highly commended award in the UKBC Olympiad.

Diverse work experiences have sharpened my clinical inclination. At a pharmacy, I


honed skills in dispensing, maintaining confidentiality, and engaging with the NHS
system. The virtual work experience with Brighton and Sussex Medical School
broadened my understanding of various medical domains, from the NHS to palliative
medicine. Under the 'Medical Projects Ward Round Live', I led virtual ward rounds,
diagnosing medical conditions, crafting treatment plans, and conversing with
patients. The Med-soc surgical experience was particularly transformative;
dissecting and understanding the intricacies of the gut, chest, and head. Having
secured 1 of 16 places amidst thousands of applicants, I eagerly anticipate my
upcoming work experience at Manchester University's Taste of Medicine Programme.

As a Physics Mentor at school and founding member of 'Help Zone', my dedication to


community welfare and collaborative learning is evident. Beyond academics, my
multifaceted interests span 100+ tutoring hours in Maths, daily boxing, weekly
roller skating, table tennis, and FPV drone flying. Ventures in web development,
game development, and drop shipping reveal my entrepreneurial flair, while my
YouTube channel for Maths tutoring emphasizes my zeal for educating.

In summary, my fusion of academic achievements, hands-on experiences, and diverse


passions uniquely positions me for a rewarding journey in medicine. Ready to embark
on this voyage, I am fervent about contributing and learning at the crossroads of
patient care, research, and innovation.

Pretend you are the world's greatest freelancer personal statement writer. I need
to write a personal statement. This is will be used for my UCAS application for
really high ranking universities (Cambridge, Imperial, Manchester, Leeds etc etc).
The course which i am applying to is Medicine. I am going to send you the details
of my cv so that you can use it to craft the personal statement: (please note,
where there's a double space, it's the start of a new section)

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