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Module # Slide # Comments Category Comments ImpoComments (Content Developer) Instructional Soundness 3
1 10 Rathina Instructional In slide 10, The topic of slide is “What is The topic talks about how ASP.NET Modify but do not remove completely
Soundness ASP.NET?” and the 4th point is “XML Web services supports Web services so the bullet point
let you create distributed Web applications” which is probably valid but I think it should be
is an description to XML WEBSERVICE and not to reworded.
ASP.NET
2 Kavitha The demos seem to be a repeat of the lab Effectively they are but this can't really be Makes sense that demos are here, but emphasise
exercises. Please check this globally as discussed avoided. This might be the first time some in the inotes that the instructor should be demoing
in the alpha teach students will have seen the IDE and seen this.
how to create a Web application so I think
some kind of demo is valid. It is likely that
the instructor would carry out the demo at
the same time as they talk about the
topics in the lessons.

3 5 Kavitha While talking about slide 5, will the instructor show It could be suggested that they do so in Should be in the inotes, no demo needed
Visual Studio 2008? the Inotes but an official demo shouldn't
be required.
3 11 Kavitha Slide 11 talks about upgrading to HTML Controls to This is the order in the current course - Keep under review during development
HTML Server controls, whereas the topic on HTML HTML server controls have been
Server control is covered in slide 12. Please check mentioned briefly before this. We should
the placement of the topics. check the flow during development and
amend if necessary.
3 14 Kavitha Slide 14 can be a discussion topic where you can Agreed Should be a discussion
have a question on the situations where they might
use HTML or Web server controls and at the end of
the discussion display the current slide with the
table.
4 Kavitha The demonstration screens should have a bullet These slides come from the previous Will be amended during development
point that states the task that will be demonstrated. version of the course. Will check and
This is not done consistently. Please check this amend during development
globally
9/Global The first lesson contains ‘how to’ type topics, and Agreed Will update inotes during development
there is a demo at the end… how do the topics
interlink? – The ‘how to’ type topics could contain
suggested demos in the instructor notes. If the
suggested demos cover the content in the demo at
the end, we can put a comment in instructor notes
to skip the demo. Depending on the topic and
student knowledge, we can add comments to the
instructor notes to explain the concept in detail or
use suggested demos

11 6 Kavitha Instructional Can this be a build slide? 2 Yes Will be incorporated Technical Accuracy
Soundness
11 8 Kavitha Content Flow The text does not flow from the lead in. 3 Amend during development Will update during development

11 11 Emma Comment on slide asks if the content is too Check during development but keep if Will update during development
advanced – This was regarded as a valid comment possible.
by Rathina, we will look into this during
development
11 12 Kavitha Instructional This can be a demo where you talk about the 1 Agreed Will be incorporated
Soundness configuration options rather than showing them the
how to part of creating an ASP.NET application to
ASP.NET AJAX
11 12 Rathina Include mention of security Agreed Will be incorporated
11 15 and Kavitha Instructional How different are these two slides? 3 One is about setting up the toolkit and the All ok
16 Soundness other about using it - hopefully should be
ok.
12 6 Kavitha Instructional build slide again? 1 Yes Will be a build slide
Soundness
12 Emma Should the lab use an existing Silverlight example – Check during development Will try to create our own sample. If not will use
We will look into this during development something currently available.

12 Emma If Exercise 3 is too long, we can split this lesson
into two lessons – We will look into this during
development
12 Geoff Will you mention dynamic VB (and DLR) in this
module? – We will look into this during
development
12 9 & 11 The content in slides 9 and 11 might not be
sufficient for the students to complete the lab –
During development of the lab, we can find out
what is possible, and then change slides 9 and 11
accordingly
12 9 Geoff Slide 9 (and/or the lab) could use a Silverlight
application that plays a video clip – We will look into
this during development
12 Lab The lab could use a Silverlight application that
plays a video clip – We could create a third
exercise, will look into this during development
12 9 Kavitha This can be a feature demo. Please change the
topic to a demo topic.
12 9 Is slide 9 a demo topic? – The slide lists high-level
tasks. The instructor notes could contain a
suggestion for a demo. Other topics could also
contain suggestions for demos [GLOBAL]. Also,
successive topics could contain suggested demos
in the instructor notes that build on each other
Check during development Will check during development
This should be mentioned but probably Will be mentioned
not demonstrated. Could be added to Key
Features topic in lesson 1 or added as a
new topic in lesson 1.
Check during development and amend Will check during development
content where necessary.
Check during development - should be Dependant on the availability of video. Will
possible as long as a suitable video clip incorporate if possible
can be sourced.
Silverlight lab will need to stay a bit fluid Dependant on the availability of video. Will
until development - we will try to create incorporate if possible
something that is compelling but does not
take too long to create.
2 Agreed inotes will be amended
As above - demonstrations in the course inotes will be amended
will be a combination of actual demo
topics and demos that are suggested in
the Inotes.

12 10 Kavitha Little more content needs to be added? 2 Agreed - update during development. Will be added during development
16 8 Kavitha The slide lists all the steps which is not the Amend during development - current slide Will be updated during development
standard for demonstrations comes from previous version of course.

Global Kavitha Instructional Can add more discussions wherever possible. 1 Agreed Agreed
Soundness
Global Kavitha Are the topics covering all the content required to 1 Check during development Will check during development
perform the labs? Please check.
Global Kavitha capitalize "is" and "are" in all the titles and 3 Check during development Will check during development
headings.
Global Kavitha Make sure the bullet points flow from the lead in Check during development Will check during development
sentence on all slides.
Global There should not be too many 'How to' topics - We Agreed Agreed
can use high-level demonstrations also/instead

Global Emma Can we use a link for code examples? – Placing Should be ok to link to a text file. Up to developer
code examples on the CD is the best option, but to decide where best to place sample code. Will
Kavitha will check and get back to us. For lengthy definitely be on the CD
code examples, linking to a text files is a good idea.
You can use build slides to display VB code, then
CS code

Global Kavitha All slides that contain a sequence of tasks should
contain numbered steps if possible
Global Kavitha The Reviews and Takeaways section has
questions that are too trivial. These should be more
realistic and scenario driven, if possible, and should
enable the students to apply the knowledge and
skills they have acquired through the module. Refer
to 6429A for samples
Check during development.
Current review questions come from the
previous version of the course. Will
amend and upgrade them as required
during development
Will check during development
Will amend during development. Keep what is
relevant and add additional content where too
light

Global Kavitha Most of the demonstrations do not have any high-
level steps in the instructor notes section. Is this
because you think that demos are easy for the
instructor to perform without any support
In some cases yes, in others it is just Where demos are very simple no steps are
because the steps have not been provided. Others need updating and will be
developed yet. Where the demo comes included when developed.
from the previous version of the course
the steps do exist but they have not been
put into the Inotes yet because they need
to be tested and amended as required.

Global Kavitha The tables and some of the graphic elements seem Agreed. There are several comments in Will amend during development. Based on the
to be old. You need to change them as per the the ppts to this effect currently. This will new KonaH templates
KonaH PPT templates and the new object library be done during development.

Global Kavitha Check that demos are not a repeat of lab exercises Check during development and amend Will amend during development
demos where required.
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