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Yesterday when we was driving through (a) ………… …………

a forest we saw a deer on a right side of the road. (b) ………… …………

My friend brings out his Camera (c) ………… …………

but the deer quickly jumped at (d) ………… …………

a pit. We stopped to help the (e) ………… …………

deer get into of the pit.

A man tied a rope to its waist and (f) ………… …………

go into the pit and lifted it out. (g) ………… …………

It ran away as faster as it could. (h) ………… …………

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One winter the farmer found a e.g. the a

snake stiff and froze with cold. (a) ……… ………

He had compassion in it, and (b) ……… ………

taking it up, place it on his (c) ……… ………

bosom. The snake was quick (d) ……… ………

revived by a warmth, and (e) ……… ………

resuming its naturally instinct, (f) ……… ………

bit its benefactor. “Oh” cry the (g) ……… ………

farmer with his latest breath, (h) ……… ………

 “I am rightly served for pitying a scoundrel”.

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Legend tells us that for about three thousand e.g.

years B.C. a Chinese Empress, while taking his (a) ……… ………

tea, out of curious, dipped the cocoon (b) ……… ………

of silkworm into it and learn to unwind the (c) ……… ………

Fine thread of silk. It was nearly ve thousand years

later that the Frenchman, experimenting with the crushed (d) ……… ………
leaves of the mulberry trees

, in which the silkworm feeds, (e) ……… ………

nd out how to produce (f) ……… ………

a ne silk like lament which we now calls arti cial silk. (g) ……… ………

It is only in the last twenty- ve years that men (h) ……… ………

has succeeded on synthesizing new bres from (i) ……… ………

inorganic material.

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One of the greatest problem facing e.g. Problem problems

the world today is the rapid increasing (a) ………… …………

pressure of populations on land (b) ………… …………

and land resources. Each second three babies (c) ………… …………
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 are born somewhere on the world. (d) ………… …………

Why is this enormous increase in population taken (e) ………… …………

place?

Medical care help people to live longer. (f) ………… …………

People live longest and fewer children are dying, (g) ………… …………

so population of the world is shooting upon.

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Rudyard Kipling was born on 1865 e.g on in

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in Bombay where his father was the Director for the (a) ……… ………
Bombay School of Art.

Rudyard Kipling was send to (b) ……… ………

England in the age of six to begin his (c) ……… ………

serious schooling. He stayed their for (d) ……… ………

ten years.Then he was brought back at Lahore (e) ……… ………

where his father was working as a curator (f) ……… ………

of a city museum. (g) ……… ………

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The name ‘Bombay’ is deriving from e.g. deriving derived

the goddess ‘Mumba’, the patron deity for (a) ……… ………
 the Kolis, the sherman of Bombay and the (b) ……… ………

originally inhabitants of the place. Even today (c) ……… ………

Koli villages exists all along the (d) ……… ………

sea-coast of Bombay. It is belief (e) ……… ………

that Mazagaon owes his name to Machchgaon, (f) ……… ………

meaning sh-village and Kolaha mean Koli estate. (g) ……… ………

There are numerous places worth visit in (h) ……… ………

Bombay. There are Marine Drive, Gateway for (i) ……… ………

India, Elephanta Caves, etc.

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