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Essay 1 Draft 1 Peer Review
Essay 1 Draft 1 Peer Review
Ezequiel Martinez
Ms. Briones
ENGL-1301-123
I (No first person, must be in third person, use they, they’re etc.) wonder if the
Laredo community has issues. If so, what are the issues? Do those are a big deal? I am quite
surprised that I learned the Laredo community has issues. Those are about issues (Use instead,
The issue of: ) of pollution, water supply crisis, medically underserved regions, and drug
trafficking. (you can add how it severely affects our community, or start a “introduction” to your
next paragraph)
Let's explain what each issue is and how the issue affects it. (Add what is
affected, ex. Laredo or community) The issue of pollution is caused by an industrial facility,
Midwest Sterilization Corporation, that emits ethylene oxide. What is ethylene oxide (?), and
why is it used? Ethylene oxide is a gas and is effective in killing harmful microorganisms that
can cause infection. How does it affect Laredo? According to a recent investigation by
ProPublica and Texas Tribune, “a plant in Laredo that sterilizes medical equipment has been
found to be spewing cancer-causing pollution on schoolchildren.”, From 2014 to 2018, that made
the estimated lifetime cancer risk (greater) for almost 130,000 Laredoans, including more than
37 thousand children. This is quite serious. We are anxious about that. Plus, I am glad about the
Laredo City Council and Webb County Commissioners Court support. They bought (City
Council has purchased) equipment, and air monitoring (for) five (local) schools that are nearest
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to the plant, and hired a full-time technician to oversee a new air monitoring program. According
to a recent article from The Texas Tribune, “Laredo is currently dealing with a water supply
crisis due to drought and low reservoir levels.” Once again, that is the issue of the water supply
crisis. When severe drought persists, Laredo will run out of water next season. 30% of Laredo’s
pipes are more than 40 years old. “We have grown so fast we didn't have the funding to replace
the old pipes,” said Riazul Mia, assistant city manager of Laredo and former utilities director.
Plus, some residents were unable to get water because it did not guarantee the water’s safety in
September 2019. Governments seek emergency state funds, and they create Laredo’s 50-year
plan for needing more water supply. However, all water budgets are slated for system repair to
improve infrastructure. I wonder how long Laredo is alive. That makes me worried. According to
Laredo Morning Time,” Laredo has been deemed medically underserved for decades.” The
Laredo population is 95.4% Hispanic, and they have been more susceptible to the virus’ serious
effects. The Laredo hospital can’t handle too many uninsured people. “The issue in Laredo, and
elsewhere, is not a lack of physical beds and hospital rooms,” DO Family Medicine Resident
Physician Dr. Tyler King said. “The issue is a lack of nursing and auxiliary staff to properly and
safely treat our patients.” I wonder why Hispanics go there. I don't know what they do. For
example, they are there in Laredo to explore the Republic of the Rio Grande Museum, the history
of the short-lived Republic of the Rio Grande. According to a recent article from The Texas
Tribune,” Laredo has been dealing with drug trafficking issues for years due to its location in the
U.S.-Mexico border.” That is about drug trafficking in Laredo. Laredo has been responsible for
violence and crime by drug trafficking organizations. Those impact the quality of life for many
residents.
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I researched four issues about what an issue is and how it affects Laredo. I put my
little opinion with a view. I notice Laredo City Council and Webb Country save us from issues,
but it is not enough to solve. I think we should support and try to know how to solve issues
together. We make sure to progress toward a smooth step and a better place in the future. We can
do it.
Finally, we can see the conclusion of the research. We learned about issues;
pollution, water supply crisis, medically underserved regions, and drug trafficking. That’s quite
crazy and hard to solve “decade” issues in Laredo. We should pray to be able to find solutions as
possible. Also, I wonder how we are alive with decade-old issues such as ancient and powerful
viruses. Anyway, that is all we want to know about issues from the Laredo community. Plus, my
favorite quote is “Let it be known that Laredo can’t be a sacrifice zone to serve the rest of the
Works Cited
How a Laredo plant spews pollution on Texas schoolchildren | The Texas Tribune
Laredo confronts drought and water shortage with minimal options | The Texas Tribune
Statement on concerns with medical device availability due to certain sterilization facility closures | FDA
5th and Final Man Admits Role in Laredo Cocaine Trafficking Conspiracy (dea.gov)