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    The feedback recommends adding more horror, tension, context and description to the story. It suggests providing background on the clown uncle's history and relationship with the characters, including his reasons for becoming a clown. The feedback also recommends showing the story from the clown's perspective, expanding on character relationships, and adding tension to dialogues and during a suggested chase scene to reveal the clown's identity. More context and horror elements are advised to be incorporated throughout.

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    The feedback recommends adding more horror, tension, context and description to the story. It suggests providing background on the clown uncle's history and relationship with the characters, including his reasons for becoming a clown. The feedback also recommends showing the story from the clown's perspective, expanding on character relationships, and adding tension to dialogues and during a suggested chase scene to reveal the clown's identity. More context and horror elements are advised to be incorporated throughout.

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    Feedback Killer Clown 1

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    The feedback recommends adding more horror, tension, context and description to the story. It suggests providing background on the clown uncle's history and relationship with the characters, including his reasons for becoming a clown. The feedback also recommends showing the story from the clown's perspective, expanding on character relationships, and adding tension to dialogues and during a suggested chase scene to reveal the clown's identity. More context and horror elements are advised to be incorporated throughout.

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    Add more horror and tension when necessary


    Add context on clown sightings and why the uncle was a clown and context in the relationship between Luke and Daniel
    Remove comedy
    Why uncle started being a clown
    More description about the setting
    Clown’s POV
    Add more context
    Add more tension when catching the clown, maybe adding a chase scene
    Maybe remove a little bit of comedy to add more tension and horror
    Extra context
    Expand the relationship between Luke and Daniel
    Add more tension between dialogues
    Add more horror
    More action and more details to the scene
    Clown’s POV
    Add more tension and horror
    Give more background around clowns sightings
    Add more tension before revealing who’s the clown

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