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Action Research - Group2
ACTION RESEARCH
FINAL ASSIGNMENT
May, 2022
TABLE OF CONTENT
PART A: INTRODUCTION
PART B: DEVELOPMENT
Chapter 1: Literature review
1. Writing skill
2. Writing approach in a second or foreign context
3. Challenges of EFL writing in Vietnamese high school contexts
4. Portfolios
5. Review of previous studies
Chapter 2: Research methodology
1. Research design
2. Intervention plan
3. Data collection methods
3.1. Questionnaire
3.2. Interview
3.3. Assessment: Pre - test and post - test
PART C: CONCLUSION
Appendix
References
PART A: INTRODUCTION
1. Rationale of the study:
Writing skill is a productive skill which plays a fundamental role in helping students express
their ideas in the target language. Furthermore, writing is the skill that most students are least
proficient in when acquiring a new language (Nesamalar, Saratha & Teh, 2001). In fact, students
need to spend a lot of time and effort in order to acquire the skills. It is known that the writing
process involves four distinct steps: prewriting, drafting, revising, and editing. During the writing
process, students tend to deal with a lot of challenges such as lack of vocabulary, poor grammar,
lack of coherence and cohesion. Meanwhile, teachers face some obstacles while teaching writing
skills to students in terms of time constraints, students' lack of motivation and diversity of
learners. Therefore, approaches and strategies to foster language students’ writing skills should
be developed in order to make the most of each stage in the writing process. The use of
Portfolios is a feasible approach to support students in enhancing their writing skills and solve
some common problems learners have to deal with in their writing process.
PART B: DEVELOPMENT
1. Definition of writing
In language teaching, reading and listening are regarded as receptive skills while
speaking and writing skills are productive skills since the learners have to produce their own
piece of writing and speech act. Among these skills, writing is often considered as one of the
most difficult skills to EFL learners. In terms of writing skills, there are a myriad of definitions
related to this. Chief among them is that Byrne (1979) stated writing as “an act of transforming
graphic symbols.” On the other hand, according to Clark (2007), writing is “an act of
communication between writer and audience”. In addition, some researchers have seen writing as
a complicated process. To illustrate, writing is seen as “a process of transforming the material
discovered by research inspiration, accidents, trial and error, or whatever a message with a
definite meaning.” (Lannon, 1989). Besides, writing is also assumed to “require a certain level of
linguistics knowledge, writing conventions, vocabulary and grammar” (Erkan & Saban, 2011).
Tribble (1996) defines writing “a language skill which is difficult to acquire” and “writing
normally requires some forms of instructions”. In brief, writing itself can be defined as an act,
social process or skill requiring constant practice and in the writing process, teachers and
learners should collaborate to enhance their language outcome.
4. Portfolios
4.1. Definitions
A portfolio is a collection of evidence that is gathered together to show a person’s
learning journey over time and to demonstrate their abilities. Many different kinds of evidence
can be used in a portfolio: samples of writing, both finished and unfinished; photographs; videos;
research projects; observations and evaluations of supervisors, and reflective thinking. It is the
reflections that are the key aspect to a portfolio (Abrami & Barrett, 2005; Klenowski, Askew, &
Carnell, 2006; Loughran & Corrigan, 1995; Smith & Tillema, 2003; Wade & Yarbrough, 1996).
In that way, those compiling portfolios are active participants in their own learning. Two other
key elements to portfolios are that they measure learning and development over time and that it
is the process of constructing a portfolio, rather than the end product, that is where the learning
takes place (Smith & Tillema, 2003).
Portfolios can be developed for many different purposes: for learning, for professional
development, for assessment, or for job applications and promotions; and many different
audiences: for lecturers, for mentors, for employers, or for the creator him or herself. In tertiary
education, portfolios provide an alternative form of assessment (Smith & Tillema, 2003) that
moves away from summative assessments to charting the development of students’ thinking over
their course of study.
Portfolios “encourage student teachers and teachers to think more deeply about their
teaching and about subject matter content, to become more conscious of the theories and
assumptions that guide their practices, and to develop a greater desire to engage in collaborative
dialogues about teaching” (Zeichner & Wray, 2001, p. 614) with a goal to developing confident
and capable teachers. Portfolios document the shift “from seeing oneself as student to
recognizing oneself as teacher” (Darling, 2001, p. 107), and allow students of teacher education
to develop their teaching philosophy and dispositions (Ma & Rada, 2005). In order to facilitate
the more specific focus of portfolios in teacher education, additional pieces of evidence that
might be included are: “narrative statements of teaching goals and philosophies, lesson and unit
plans, pupil work samples…excerpts from student teaching journals, communications with
parents…video-taped teaching samples, action research projects, and sample pupil assessments”
(Zeichner & Wray, 2001, p. 617). It is by reflecting on the evidence collected in their portfolios
that student teachers are able to uncover their strengths and weaknesses, develop an awareness of
their teaching and learning achievements, assume responsibility for their own learning, and begin
to anticipate their learning needs. In order to be successful, reflection must move beyond simple
description.
Zeichner and Wray (2001) emphasize three different types of portfolio as discussed in the
literature. These are a ‘learning portfolio’, which documents a student’s learning over time; a
‘credential portfolio’, which is used for registration or certification purposes; and a ‘showcase
portfolio’, which students can use when applying for employment positions. While a learning or
a credential portfolio contains examples of ‘less than perfect’ work as well as the finished
product, a showcase portfolio serves only to display a student’s best pieces of work. Similarly,
Abrami and Barrett (2005) catalog three different types of portfolio, though the purposes of each
are slightly different from those described by Zeichner and Wray. For Abrami and Barrett, the
portfolio types are a ‘process portfolio’, or a collection of work showing a learning journey;
‘showcase portfolio’, which is used to show achievements either at study or in the workplace;
and an ‘assessment portfolio’ prepared specifically for assessment or evaluative purposes. In
comparing the purpose of a portfolio with the setting of its use, Smith and Tillema (2003) come
up with four different types of portfolio. A portfolio used for job selection or promotion purposes
and for which the content is mandated is a ‘dossier portfolio’. A mandated portfolio used for
learning and development is a ‘training portfolio’. A selection or promotion portfolio that leaves
the choice of content up to the portfolio creator (or is ‘self-directed’) is a ‘reflective portfolio’.
Finally, a self-directed learning and development portfolio is a ‘personal development portfolio’.
The varying ways of classifying a portfolio all serve to emphasize the importance of deciding
upon the purpose and audience of the portfolio. A portfolio developed to show change and
progress in a student’s learning will not be appropriate for use when applying for a job, just as a
portfolio displaying only exemplary pieces of work will not be useful for assessing reflective
learning.
From consideration of the above problems and issues, a number of criteria for the
successful use of portfolios have been put forward (Smith & Tillema, 2003; Wade & Yarbrough,
1996). In summary, the success criteria are:
• Familiarity with the portfolio concept, including an understanding of both the process
and the product of portfolio construction;
• Understanding of the value of the portfolio for future use, such as employment;
• Making connections between the portfolio content and the outside life of the student;
5. Previous studies
A variety of problems and issues arise with the use of portfolios as an assessment
exercise in academic settings, some of which are mitigated by the shift to an electronic
environment, and some of which are exacerbated. A lack of well-defined guidelines and a clear
structure (Smith & Tillema, 2003) and a lack of examples of past portfolios can lead to student
confusion and anxiety about the scope, nature and value of the task (Wade & Yarbrough, 1996).
Finding a balance between student-driven construction that can lead to superficial reflections and
limited evidence, and over-prescribed guidelines that can lead to students lacking ownership and
therefore resenting their portfolios, is difficult (Zeichner & Wray, 2001). Students need a lot of
guidance and support throughout the portfolio process (Smith & Tillema, 2003), which involves
a lot of time on the part of tutors or supervisors (Wade & Yarbrough, 1996). Students often have
little academic experience with writing reflective pieces, so that again needs to be nurtured by
their supervisors. There is often a conflict between the goals of students and the goals of their
supervisors in constructing portfolios. Students “are understandably most concerned about the
uses of their portfolios as aids in gaining employment while educators are most concerned about
using portfolios to promote professional development and to make assessments” (Zeichner &
Wray, 2001, p. 618).
Concerns are also expressed over the difficulty of assessing portfolios. Smith and Tillema
(2003) see a lack of match between assessment criteria and the goals of the programme of study,
or what competencies students are expected to develop. They also see a tension between the
measurement of standards and capturing development and reflection. The danger is that learning
and reflection will get lost in the drive to measure competency.
Many studies exploiting the impact of portfolio assessment on EFL writing found a
positive effect on students’ writing (Fahed-Al-Serhani,2007; Elahinia, 2004; Ghoorchaei,
Tavakoli & Ansari, 2010; Yurdabakan & Erdogan,2009), Fahed Al-Serhani (2007)’s study
shows that the group that uses portfolio assessment significantly surpasses their counterpart in
terms of four writing processes of planning, drafting, revising, and editing. In Yurdabhakan and
Erdogan (2009)’s experiment with the Turkish students on reading, listening, and writing skills,
they found significant improvement only on writing skills but not on reading and listening skills.
The findings of Ghoorchaei, Tavakoli and Ansari (2010)’s investigation of the effect of portfolio
assessment on Iranian EFL students showed that portfolio assessment empowers students’
learning more than the group without the use of portfolio. It is also advised that portfolio can
considerably improve autonomy of learners and inspire them to become active and engage in
language learning.
As portfolio assessment has achieved importance in language learning, more and more
attention on method of assessment in terms of writing skills and researchers have started to
contemplate on the effectiveness of this method of writing assessment in the last few decades.
Especially in the EFL context, many studies have conducted research to investigate the
effectiveness of portfolios. For example, the study of Aly (2002) conducted in the Cairo context
using pretest and posttest design revealed that a group with portfolio technique had higher
writing performance compared to their peer counterpart.
1. Research method
The study aims to discover the problems students encounter when learning writing,
finding out how to apply writing portfolios in a high school and explore its effects on students’
writing performance. Thus, action research was applied by the teacher. Below, action research is
clarified specifically to explain the selection of the methodology.
2. Action research
In terms of definition, according to Burns (2009), action research (AR) is “related to the
ideas of ‘reflective practice’ and ‘the teacher as researcher’, AR involves taking a self -
reflective, critical, and systematic approach to exploring your own teaching contexts.”
With respect to its model, there are different models of action research, but in general it
consists of four main stages, namely Planning, Acting, Observing, and Reflecting.
Kemmis and Mc Taggart (1998) propose AR involving four broad phases in a cycle of
research: Planning, Action, Observation and Reflection.
Planning: identifying a problem or issue and developing a plan of action in order
to bring about improvements in a specific area of research context.
Action: The plan is carefully considered one which involves some deliberate
interventions into the teaching situation that the teacher puts into action over an
agreed period of time.
Observation: This phase involves the teacher in observing systematically the
effects of the action and documenting the context, actions and opinions of those
involved. It is the data collection phase where the researcher uses different tools
to collect information.
Reflection: At this point, the teacher reflects on, evaluates and describes the
effects of the action in order to make sense of what has happened and to
understand the issue more clearly. He may decide to do further cycles of AR to
improve the situation more.
(Adapted from Kemmis & Mc Taggart, 1998)
In this study, action research was chosen because it is conducted with a view of a teacher rather
than a researcher; therefore, real solutions and evaluations are adopted. Moreover, action
research was applied in more than one circle so it can be revised, re - planned, and re - done to
improve the process.
3. Intervention plan
The research was developed and carried out during 17 weeks of the first semester of the
academic year 2021 – 2022. X students from class …….participated in the study. To be more
specific, the action research procedure is presented as follows.
Week 1 (Identifying - Giving students a diagnostic test on their writing skill to measure
the problems) students’ writing ability and identify their problems
- Giving students pre – treatment questionnaire to find out the
causes of students’ problems and to provide knowledge about
the participants which helps the teacher design a suitable
portfolio project
The table below illustrates the schedule for the requirement tasks.
Writing Week Task
assignment
1 1 Diagnostic test:
Students are required to write a short letter to reply to a request for help.
2 4 Unit 1:
Students are required to write a letter to tell their friend about how people in
their family share the housework.
3 7 Unit 2:
Students are required to write a letter to tell about their diet (what to eat or not
to eat).
4 10 Unit 3:
Students are required to write a letter to tell their friend about one of the most
famous artists in Vietnam or in the world.
5 14 Unit 4:
Students are required to write a formal letter applying for volunteer work.
6 17 Achievement test:
Students are required to write a letter to tell their friend what modern device
(smartphone, digital camera) they want to have and why.
The participants in the questionnaire will be Grade 10 students. At the beginning, a letter
stating the questionnaire purpose and requesting information will be sent to the principal and the
teachers. The questionnaire contains Likert-type questions and open-ended questions. The Likert
questions attempt to evaluate teacher attitudes and knowledge regarding portfolios. The open-
ended questions deal with problems using portfolios and such. The questionnaire will be
delivered to teachers and retrieved by the researcher. Data will be processed by frequency
distribution and by measures of central tendency using Excel tool. Data analysis will be
presented in the findings.
Pre-intervention questionnaire for students
Please indicate your level of agreement or disagreement with each of the following statements by
marking an X in the box of your answer:
Benefits of Portfolios
Help me to become an
independent writer.
Challenges of Portfolios
Additional comments on the using of portfolios you would like to share with us:
o Yes
o No
o Vocabulary range
o Vocabulary accuracy
o Grammar range
o Grammar accuracy
o Idea development
o Writing
o Positive.
o Negative
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
6. Name the most significant reason why you have not applied portfolios in teaching:
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
…………………………………………………………………………………………………
4.2. Semi-structured interview
Beside questionnaires, semi-structured interviews will also be conducted in this research. The
purpose of the interviews is to make up for what they lack in breadth, William C. Adams (2015).
Moreover, the interviews will help us identify the candid thoughts and attitude toward
portfolios.
The interviews will be conducted after the research with some participants randomly chosen
from the 45 participants of the focus group. The set of specific questions are prepared but the
responses would be flexible. Since the aim of the interview is to investigate students’ impression
of the portfolio and their willingness to continue using the portfolio in future, the questions will
focus on these two themes. To increase the validity of the interviews, the questions would be
tried out beforehand.
Before conducting interviews, we explain to participants the reason why they are being
interviewed and gain their permission for recording the interviews for further investigation.
Students will also be given assurances of confidentiality and anonymity.
The interviews will be started with warm up questions and follow up with some close questions
for confirming participants’ attitude and some open questions for participant’s genuine opinions.
The interview then will be ended with the closing questions for provoking participants
suggestions. During the interview, participants would be asked as naturally as possible to make
sure the responses are candid.
4.3. Assessment
a. Pre-test:
Diagnostic test and pre – treatment questionnaire will be used to assess students' writing ability
and some challenges students are facing during their writing process before the course.
Diagnostic test
Students will need to write a paragraph about a familiar topic.
Topic: Choose 1 invention (Computer, smartphone, electricity,…) and write a paragraph about
its benefits.
1.Which difficulties do you face up with while writing a paragraph/ an essay/ a letter etc
Grammar
Vocabulary
Ideas
Others
Agree
Strongly Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly Disagree
Agree
Strongly Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly Disagree
Agree
Strongly Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly Disagree
6. It is necessary for language learners to check and edit their work after the writing process.
Agree
Strongly Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly Disagree
7. It is necessary for language learners to write drafts before writing the final version.
Agree
Strongly Agree
Neutral
Disagree
Strongly Disagree
b. Post-test:
In order to evaluate students’ performance after treatment, we administer an achievement test
which requires students to write a letter to tell their friend what modern device (smartphone,
digital camera) they want to have and why . The essay then will be marked by a group of
evaluators that are not involved in the process. The T test then will be run to compare the
differences in the score of students in the diagnostic test and achievement test.
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