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AN EMBEDDED INTERVIEW
A Contented Being Resource
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AN EMBEDDED INTERVIEW: Prompt Task
Read the following prompt and then respond to the questions about text selection.
Your school likes to celebrate the success of its students. One student, in particular, recently received a major
environmental award for innovation: she had invented a device to help clean plastic pollution from local rivers.
Write a text in which you interview the recipient of this award about the invention she created, the inspiration
for the invention and circumstances leading to the award.
(450-600 words)
TEXT SELECTION
Answer these questions as briefly as possible.
Why is a BLOG not a suitable text type for the given prompt?
The prompt suggests an interview with a specific person, and while a blog can deal with this
satisfactorily, the prompt provides two clues: interview and do not write a transcribed interview which
seem to suggest that an embedded interview is more appropriate.
Why is a NEWS REPORT not a suitable text type for the given prompt?
A news report would also be a suitable response but the wording of the prompt and its focus on three
specific interview areas suggest that an embedded interview is the better option.
Why is AN EMBEDDED INTERVIEW the most suitable text type for the given prompt?
AN EMBEDDED INTERVIEW is ideal as it allows you to share the newsworthy award with a school
audience whilst encouraging a focus on the three interview areas /aspects. Also, as it asks you to not
write a transcribed interview (just questions and answers), the implication is that an embedded
interview is required.
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ANALYSIS TASK 1: Comprehension Questions
Answer the following questions as briefly as possible. Some do not follow the order of the text.
Find the words that complete the following sentences. (The words can be found between 23 and 35).
5. Although the students were just required to create a brochure … Jenny wanted to do more.
6. The local environmental agency invested in her invention … after witnessing its effectiveness over several
trials.
Which of the following statements are TRUE (T) or FALSE (F)? Provide a justification (quotation from the
text).
7. Jenny’s first machine was the one that worked the best. (T / F ) = The first of many prototypes/ after much
trial and error
8. The device needs a lot of time to do its job effectively (T / F ) = In just under an hour
9. To what does its refer in line 33? The device / Jenny’s invention/ Jenny’s machine
FOLLOW ON ANSWER 2ND MAIN QUESTION ANSWER INTERVIEWER 1ST MAIN QUESTION 1ST QUESTION ANSWER FOLLOW-ON ANSWER
RELEVANT CONCLUSION DEVELOPED DETAILS 3RD MAIN QUESTION 3RD QUESTION ANSWER
3. Little Place International School has a proud tradition of celebrating students who, inspired by the values of the IB
Learner Profiles, have gone on to become leaders inCONTEXTUAL
the field ofINTRODUCTION
innovation and invention. Such a student is Jenny
Flux who has recently won the prestigious County Environmental Innovation of the Year Award for her river cleaning
machine – a device that is already (if you’ll pardon the pun) making waves both locally and across the country. I
spoke with her shortly after she received her award at the Centre for Environmental Innovation last week.
1ST MAIN
8. I wanted to know more about her invention. “It’s a river cleaning device,” she said, “thatQUESTION
combines ANSWER
surface booms
INTERVIEWER 1 ST MAIN QUESTION
and suction pumps to collect and remove plastic waste from local rivers.” She went on to explain that the device can
remove both floating debris and other bits of pollution that might be stuck at the bottom of the river.
11. When asked about the danger of accidentally capturing fish and other lifeforms, she added: “Special sensors
attached to the device can detect the electrical impulses given off by living creatures; if they are identified, the
device turns itself off untilQUESTION
FOLLOW-ON they have moved away. Plus, I equipped the machine with
FOLLOW-ON tiny lasers that can recognise
ANSWER
the size and shape of specific garbage items made of plastic, metal, and paper. Once identified, they are then either
scooped from the surface or vacuumed from the riverbed.”
16. I wondered what would happen if the device were caught in the rapids near rocks and Jenny explained that the
FOLLOW-ON QUESTION
device could only work in parts of the river that were flowing slowly. “Most garbage gets carried along by strong
FOLLOW-ON
currents and then deposited in the still pools, so this is where the machine works best,” she said. ANSWER
19. So, what inspired her invention? INTERVIEWER 2ND MAIN QUESTION
20. “One of the IB English B themes is ‘Sharing the Planet’ and whilst learning about this theme, we were taken down
to two local rivers to see the impact of pollution first-hand.” What she saw saddened her greatly. “It was appalling,”
ND MAIN QUESTION ANSWER
she said. “I2couldn’t believe how such a pretty part of the county could be ruined by such thoughtlessness.”
23. Initially, the IB students were just supposed to write a brochure to educate people about the problem, but Jenny
wanted to do more. “Letting people know about the issue was just half of the problem. Something had to be done.”
25. Enlisting the expertise of her mother, an engineer, and the help of two students from
DEVELOPED Little Place University,
DETAIL
Jenny set about designing the first of many prototypes. “I spent many months researching what was already out
there. Some amazing inventions tackle plastic pollution in the oceans, but they are large and unsuitable for rivers.”
28. After much trial and error, Jenny’s machine was launched and all involved were very pleasantly surprised by its
effectiveness: in just under an hour, it had collected enough waste to fill a small canoe.
30. Inevitably, news of the device soon reached the local environmental agency which, after witnessing its
3RD MAIN QUESTION
effectiveness over several trials, subsequently decided to sponsor further development. I asked how she felt about
this.
33. “That’s when I got excited about its potential,” Jenny added. “Now we can make a differenceRDright across the
3 MAIN QUESTION
country.” ANSWER
35. Indeed, Jenny’s invention (which has yet to be named) will not just be effective on the waterways of our country
– it has the potential to positively impact river systems all across
RELEVANT the globe, too.
CONCLUSION
37. A well-deserved award, and inspirational proof that one individual really can change the world…
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ANALYSIS TASK 3: Grammar Focus
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ANALYSIS TASK 4: Vocabulary Inspection
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ANALYSIS TASK 5: Paragraph Development
Make notes to show how sentences 2-5 develop the idea in sentence 1.
I wanted to know more about her invention. “It’s a river cleaning device,” she said, “that combines surface booms
and suction pumps to collect and remove plastic waste from local rivers.” She went on to explain that the device can
remove both floating debris and other bits of pollution that might be stuck at the bottom of the river.
11. When asked about the danger of accidentally capturing fish and other lifeforms, she added: “Special sensors
attached to the device can detect the electrical impulses given off by living creatures; if they are identified, the
device turns itself off until they have moved away. Plus, I equipped the machine with tiny lasers that can recognise
the size and shape of specific garbage items made of plastic, metal, and paper. Once identified, they are then either
scooped from the surface or vacuumed from the riverbed.”
Make notes to show how sentences 2-7 develop the idea in sentence 1.
Enlisting the expertise of her mother, an engineer, and the help of two students from Little Place Shows how the
University, Jenny set about designing the first of many prototypes.
design took a long
time to research.
“I spent many months researching what was already out there.
Some amazing inventions tackle plastic pollution in the oceans, but they are large and unsuitable for Develops the findings
rivers.” of her research.
After much trial and error, Jenny’s machine was launched and all involved were very pleasantly
surprised by its effectiveness: in just under an hour, it had collected enough waste to fill a small Expands upon the many
canoe. prototypes idea mentioned
earlier and introduces the
Inevitably, news of the device soon reached the local environmental agency which, after witnessing effectiveness of the machine.
its effectiveness over several trials, subsequently decided to sponsor further development.
‘Inevitably’ shows the
I asked how she felt about this. consequence of the success.
“That’s when I got excited about its potential,” Jenny added. “Now we can make a difference right
across the country.”
Jenny ends by being excited
about the future prospects for
her invention.