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TREASURES…continued
.
A competitive bid means that the purchaser
specifies the discount rate she is willing to
accept and the number of Bills she wants to
A monthly column by Raymond P.
purchase. Her bid will be accepted in full if the
Gogolewski, Ph.D (also writes
rate offered is less than the discount rate set by
fiction as Ray Grant)
auction, accepted in full or less than the full
amount if her bid equals the discount rate, or
rejected if her bid is higher than the discount
Treasures at the Treasury! rate. To place a competitive bid, a bidder must
use a bank or brokerage firm. By bidding
competitively, one risks either not receiving any
Bills or only a fraction of the number requested.
The Department of the Treasury of the United States of America (Treasury
The easiest way to purchase U.S. debt is to
Department) offers Federal debt securities for purchase. This means that
establish an account at Treasury Direct and
individuals, corporations, and the governments of other countries have an
purchase your securities directly from the
opportunity to lend the U.S. government monies for specific periods and
Treasury Department. There is no mark up, or
receive interest on the amount loaned (the principal) for doing so. Including
charge for purchasing U.S. debt securities this
Treasury debt instruments in one’s portfolio is a very low risk way to
way. As stated above, one receives the yield
diversify.
determined by the auction process. Treasury
When you visit Treasury Direct, the website of the Treasury Department, Bills are issued and held electronically. If one
you will find detailed information about U.S. Treasury bills, notes, and bonds has an account with Treasury Direct, one can
– the subjects of this article. The information below is extracted from withhold, for Federal tax purposes, up to fifty
information found at Treasury Direct. percent of earned interest. The account holder
http://www.treasurydirect.gov/indiv/products/ receives a Form 1099-INT early in the new
calendar year and her annual withholdings and
Interest earned from the purchase of U.S. government debt is subject to accumulated interest are reported directly to
Federal income taxation and is exempt from state and local taxation. The the Internal Revenue Service.
latter is important if one lives in a state with high tax rates, e.g. California or
New York . Since the duration of Treasury Bills is short, I
recommend that that they be purchased at
Let’s start our discussion with Treasury Bills. These are short-term auction and held to maturity. If one intends to
government debt securities with maturities with 4, 13, and 26 weeks. The sell their Bills before maturity, the primary risk
Treasury Department auctions these debt instruments on a regular is that interest rates may rise which would
schedule. Bills are sold at a discount from face value, and the discount rate lower the value of a Bill. However, if held to
is determined through the auction process. For example, one might pay maturity, one receives the face value of the Bill
$975 for a $1,000 Bill. When the Bill matures, one receives the face value, as discussed above. Since Bills are short-term
$1,000. The difference between the face value and the purchase price (in debt instruments, the interest rate risk while
our example, $25) is the interest earned over the duration that the Bill is holding these for one to six months is relatively
held, i.e. typically from the auction date to the date of maturity. low. The other risk to principal is the risk of full
The minimum purchase is one Bill with a face value of $1,000. Individuals repayment. However, Bills are backed by the
may purchase any number of Bills, non-competitively, in one thousand taxing power of the Federal government. The
dollar increments, to a maximum of five million dollars. A non-competitive probability that the Federal government would
bid means that the purchaser agrees to accept the discount (interest) rate go bankrupt is lower than that of any state or
determined at auction. With a non-competitive bid, a bidder is guaranteed local government, corporation, or individual and
to receive the number of Bills requested. To place a non-competitive bid, is viewed as extremely remote.
the purchaser may use Treasury Direct, a bank, or a brokerage firm. Continued page 4
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Page 8 NUMBERS…continued
4. In fiction, the rule for spelling out numbers (1) is used to describe
By Ray Grant physical quantities.
Writing by the Numbers The answer to (4) is twenty-six miles.
“Let’s take a short quiz,” Fractions are spelled out also. Quantities consisting of numbers and
fractions are expressed by numerals.
he said..
For example,
“Oh no, anything but a
…three-quarters of the members…
quiz!” they responded. In
…she ran 7½ miles in preparation for…
writing:
Note: 7½ is correct. 71/2 is not correct.
1. Is it twenty-six or 26?
5. If a unit of measure is abbreviated, the quantity is expressed by a
2. Is it 26,000, twenty-six thousand, or 26 thousand? numeral.
3. 126 years ago, the country… or One hundred and twenty-six The answer to (5) is 26 yd.
years ago, the
6. In fiction, the word percent is used rather than the symbol, %, to
country…? express percentage. Furthermore, percentage is expressed by a
4. Is it twenty-six miles or 26 miles? numeral.
5. Twenty-six yds or 26 yds?
The answer to (6) is
6. 26%, twenty-six percent, or 26 percent?
26 percent.
7. $26 or twenty-six dollars?
8. Is it 0.26 or .26? 7. When describing an
amount of US
9. 26 April 2007 or April 26, 2007 ?
currency, the writer
th
10. Is it the 26 or the twenty-sixth? has a choice: a) spell
These are ten common uses of numbers in writing. It’s good to out the amount and
know the rules, and easy to make a mistake. The latter might just the unit of currency, or
stop your submission cold, particularly, if a top- notch editor or (b) use a numeral and
publisher is doing the reading. a symbol.
1. You spell out whole numbers from one to one hundred. For The answers to (7) are
almost all other numbers, numerals are used. Remember to $26 and twenty-six
hyphenate numbers like twenty-one, twenty-two…, thirty-one, dollars. Both are
thirty-two, …, etc. correct. However,
The answer to (1) is twenty-six. choose one and be
consistent thereafter.
2. You spell out any whole number followed by hundred,
thousand, hundred thousand, million, etc.
8. In fiction, write a
The answer to (2) is twenty-six thousand. decimal
The answerfraction
to (8) is .26.
However, 26,001 is correct – because it’s greater than one without an initial zero.
hundred (1) and doesn’t fall into the exception (2).
9. Write an exact date
On consistency: Treat numbers in the same category consistently
within the same paragraph or paragraphs. You can treat numbers either in the sequence
in different categories within the same context differently. day-month-year without internal punctuation or month-day-year with
For example, the year set off by commas (before and after) unless the date is
immediately followed by other punctuation, e.g. a period or question
Alice has 107 red candies. Fred has 145 yellow candies, and mark. A writer can choose either, but must remain consistent with
Chuck has only 3 green candies. [For consistency, three isn’t the choice throughout the story.
spelled out.]
The answers to (9) are 26 April 2007 and April 26, 2007. Both are
Alice liked to save bubble gum wrappers. In three years, she correct.
accumulated 112 wrappers. [Years and wrappers are in different
categories, therefore each follows the rules. No inconsistency.] However, choose one and be consistent thereafter.
3. Spell out any number that would normally be set in numerals if 10. Rule (1) is used for ordinal numbers as well as cardinal
it begins a sentence. numbers.
The answer to (3) is: One hundred and twenty-six years ago, she The answer to (10) is twenty-sixth.
visited… The ten rules above have been taken from The Chicago Manual of
If spelling out the number at the beginning of the sentence feels Style, which states that the rules satisfy the conventions observed
cumbersome to you, place the number in a position further into by The University of Chicago Press. I have picked a few of the more
the sentence. common ones for this article. For a more extensive treatment of the
“Rules for Writing Numbers,” you may want to visit The Chicago
She visited … 126 years ago. Manual of Style, the University of Minnesota Style Manual, or
Sparknotes – Ultimate Style – The Rules of Writing – Numbers. I
continued next column hope you find this article helpful in your writing; I know I learned a lot
doing the research for it.
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Page10 MYSTERY MEETS MODERN…continued
Mystery Meets Modern Oil Industry Here is an author who knows about the inner-workings of
Bittersweet Crude by Jay Bern crude and the way it is inextricably braided into politics.
He takes those truths and weaves them into a story that
Reviewed by Carolyn Howard-Johnson, award-winning requires no effort from the reader to suspend disbelief.
author of This is the Place and Harkening: A Collection of
Stories Remembered, Tracings and The Frugal Book Promoter: Chris Horn is not the average quirky detective but a
How to Do What Your Publisher Won't rather earnest youth who finds himself thrown into the
It is rare that a novel is released in time to run head-on into intrigue of big business and Mid-Eastern politics. After he
the political traumas it portrays. After all, it takes some time to finds a body in the hold of a freighter that has
craft a novel and current events tend to be fickle. It turns out experienced what could be the oil-world's equivalent of a
Bittersweet Crude by Jay Bern is ahead of its time. nuclear meltdown, he is jockeyed into positions no young
Released last year by a subsidy house, this novel didn't find man should have to endure. In spite of his dealings with
its groove easily. Given the oil-induced headaches men (yes, a world of men -- for, after all, that's the way it
governments are experiencing, that may be about to change. apparently is) dealing with their
continued next column demons to say nothing of cultural
differences, politics and more, while
their Texas wives mostly plan
cocktail parties and pine for better .
things. Yes, there is some romance
in this novel -- a lovely thread I
Adhere to the six elements of State what type of set is required. A simple set is best. When
playwrighting as outlined by Aristotle writing for Broadway you can build the Titanic and sink it, but
over 2,000 years ago. If you are not for markets that will consider your first efforts there will
familiar with them, it would be worth probably be a cash flow problem, so keep the set simple. In
your time to buy or borrow a book that an off-off Broadway play in which I appeared, we had to cut a
explains them, since they are as viable today as they were in scene that required squirting a can of beer because the group
Aristotle’s time. They provide a road map for writing a good could not afford a fresh can of beer for each performance, so
play, whether comedy or drama. you see that funds sometimes determine which plays will be
produced.
When you’ve completed your play, do a walk-through. Read it
aloud and smooth out any rough areas. Does the dialogue In the third paragraph of your query letter, list any and all
reveal character or advance the plot? Is it effortless? Are there credentials you have, including teaching, productions and
adequate pauses for breathing? Do your characters have awards. If these are too numerous to be included here, attach
distinctive personalities and voices? Have you allowed enough a bio. If you have no credentials, tell them how much you look
time for entrances and exits? Revise, rewrite and polish your forward to working with them.
play before submitting it.
continued page 12
Format your play properly. If you have a computer you can get
a formatting program. If you aren’t using a computer, the
correct formatting can be obtained from books such as those A PROMISE TO KEEP
offered by Writer’s Digest or by contacting Samuel French & BY ANN DURAND
Company.
A Suspense with Romantic
Use white paper with three holes, a fresh ribbon, and send only Elements
Zerox copies that are clear and sharp. Be sure to keep a copy
of your play. The tidy world of schoolteacher
Karen Hudson turns upside down
Place the play in a plain paper binder like those used on as she embarks on a reckless
company reports or by students. On the cover place a sticker chase from a small town in California to a jungle in
with the name of the play, by (your name), and the copyright Mexico, searching for the truth about Michael Browning,
date (the date you wrote it.) Nothing else. the man who has captured her heart. Stunned when he
disappears without a word, she soon learns that he’s
If you want your play returned, enclose a SASE the same size been charged with murder. Her quest to locate him and
unravel the mystery surrounding the charge makes her
as the one in which it was submitted, and attach the same
the next target for murder.
amount of postage that was required to send it. If yours is a
short play, it may be cheaper and less trouble to say, “SASE
Michael Borbeau, alias Michael Browning, never
(stamped #10 envelope for them to notify you if your play has intended to mislead Karen, or to fall in love for that
been accepted or rejected) enclosed, please recycle the script.” matter. Only the need to protect his daughter forced him
Since scripts are often not returned even when you have to choose a new town and a new name. Now, the whole
enclosed the correct envelopes and postage, and since they mess is threatening to surface, and he must flee to keep
often come back stained and dog-eared, I find it cheaper and his daughter safe.
easier to request recycling and save the return postage.
Will he ever see his beloved Karen again? Will she
Don’t be impatient. It usually takes six months to a year to get a discover the truth before the killer strikes again? Will
response from a theatre or contest. I was advised of two of my she succeed in reuniting with the only man to ever
awards over a year after the stated deadline for notification. unlock her heart?
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In the fourth paragraph, state that you are enclosing a SASPC schedule speakers who are plugging books or seeking
(self-addressed, stamped, post card) for their convenience in publicity and they usually don’t pay.
replying. On the back of the post card type:
When you do schedule a talk or production, send a press
___________(name of your play) received and under release to all the local newspapers at least six-weeks in
consideration. advance, stating subject, time, date and place. List a phone
___________Send more material. number to call for more information.
Comments:
If you follow these guidelines and work diligently at your craft,
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scribble such things as: “Need more 90 min.comedies,” or come your way.
“Accept material June to Sept. only.”
Write, submit and succeed. I wish you well!
At the bottom of the post card type: Signed, please print.
SIDEBAR:
On the front of the SASPC place their name above your
address in the upper left hand corner, then address the post The Dramatist’s Sourcebook (Theatre Communications
card to yourself. This will insure that the postcard comes to you, Group)
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obliterated, and it will tell you who is responding. only lists most of the theatres that might use your work, but it
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If they request additional material stamp (or write) Hispanic, Jewish, Gay, Native American, Black, Women,
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and productions are impressive on your resume, so try for both.
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Local theatres, dinner theatres, and cabarets will often produce Barbara Anton is a playwright and Sarasota
the work of local playwrights if they think it has merit. Ask them resident. She began writing first for the love of
to review your plays. writing and later as a professional. Ms. Anton
has written nine winning plays for FST's Florida
To add to your credentials it is valuable to speak at libraries,
clubs, and bookstores. When you are successful they will seek Shorts contest and had nine off-Broadway
you out, but neophytes may arrange speaking dates by productions on Theatre Row. Currently, she
contacting the program chairman of clubs and libraries, or the produces a playwriting column with writers'
scheduling manager at bookstores. You may receive an guidelines and news, which is published locally
honorarium from clubs and libraries, but bookstores usually and distributed internationally.
http://www.fst2000.org/ANTON.HTM
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page 13 MYSTERY MEETS MODERN…continued DON’T BE IMPATIENT…continued
I wouldn't want to have seen omitted, but it feels a little
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