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Ezaridho Ibnutama - Analytical Paper 1-Problem Identification (Reviewed Draft)
Ezaridho Ibnutama - Analytical Paper 1-Problem Identification (Reviewed Draft)
By Ezaridho Ibnutama
Declaration of Independence penned by Thomas Jefferson to lay out the reasons for the
separation between the British Empire and the American Colonies. The so-called Signers of
the Declaration of Independence are one end of a linked chain with no attachments on the
other end, at least that is the perspective set forth by Jacques Derrida. In his critique on
Jefferson’s Declaration, Derrida calls into question the contexts of the performative
utterances within The Founding Document. He points the limelight to the blank bodies
imbuing their coup de force to the independence from the good people and their
representatives to God. Based on that premise, Derrida’s main issue is that the foundational
authority the Founding Document draws upon for its validation as a declaration for the
an expert magician seeing through his peers’ tricks, reveals to the reader Jefferson’s smoke
screens with the Declaration’s smoke coming from the signers, God, and the writer.
The foremost point Derrida conjures into question is the document’s ‘real signers’ as
Jefferson is only The Declaration’s writer and the representatives do not sign as mere
individuals. At one instance, Derrida spotlights the unending chain link of representation:
“’good people’ who declare themselves free and independent by the relay of their
representatives to get to the ‘good people’ is an illustration to pull back the curtain on the
emptiness for who actually wants the declaration to be made. And this web of linked bodies
of people (real and spectral) throws the context of the whole Declaration into question of
whether it was intended to declare the “the good people have already freed themselves…
and are only stating the fact…[o]r…free themselves of and by…the signature of this
Declaration” (49). Through layers of representatives, it becomes unclear whether the good
people have or are freeing themselves. This “undecidability” shakes the Document’s “coup
independence is stated or produced by this utterance” (49) which shatters the illusion of the
Declaration’s once clear contextual stance on the surface to produce the “sought-after
effect” into an unambiguous one after dissecting deeper into each responsible signer;
because in this case “the signature invents the signer” (49), the signers, Derrida believes,
would find themselves affected by an ambiguous context that can render the Document
itself meaningless. The plausible meaninglessness of the Declaration with the absence for
any decidable context from the responsible party (‘the good people’) atrophies the strength
the Document holds, for the intentions of the responsible party is unclear, so the responsible
party must step forward, but ‘the good people’ do not exist—leaving the Document’s
credibility to crumble. Once finished inspecting all ‘real signers’ to be spectral, Derrida
realizes the officiator for this political disbandment is a mere shadow with the best name
any and all men can call upon for an excuse: God.
The next point Derrida pulls out is Jefferson’s forced inclusion of God to officiate the
disbandment of “political bands” and certify the freedom of the Colonies by right from The
Supreme Judge’s Natural Law. This is evidenced by his statement: “They [the good people]
sign in the name of the laws of nature and in the name of God. They pose or posit their
institutional laws on the foundation of natural laws and by the same ‘coup’…in the name of
God, creator of nature. He comes, in effect, to guarantee the rectitude of popular intentions,
the unity of goodness of the people.” (51) The mention of God within the Declaration,
according to Derrida, is to uphold the cause for the Colonies’ Independence as moral in
relation to “the laws of nature,” for the aim is to inexplicably link the ‘good’ being referred to
in ‘good people’ with the “name of God, creator of nature.” The reason for this link is to
elevate the moral grounds in which the Document stands into a near-religious
argumentation for “the rectitude of popular intentions, the unity of goodness of the
people.” In unity to this, Derrida describes the usage of God makes “this Declaration as a
vibrant act of faith” (52), and this act of faith is the essence of what he calls “the last
instance” to permanently stamp on the Declaration’s meaning and effect with God as the
“ultimate signature” ratifying the Document as if it were a Sacred Text. But one cannot seek
or ask for God’s approval; one can only use God’s name for his or her own purposes –
another form of a line of credit being used to form another line of credit. Derrida spoke of
this as “…God—who had nothing to do with any of this [The Declaration] and, having
could not care less—alone will have signed…Jefferson knew this.” Jefferson is being accused,
under a thin veil, of forging God’s signature to legitimize “those nice people[’s]” rights and
freedoms. The accusations set forth paradoxically legitimizes the claim that the document’s
authority on guaranteeing independence stems from a specter under the label of God
For a final point, Derrida focuses on the Declaration’s draftsman Thomas Jefferson as
a writer who is suffering not only from his work’s constant “mutilation” between
representatives of representatives but also from placing his own name as signature to the
Declaration. The proof is provided as follows: “It was very hard for him to see it, to see
himself corrected, emended, “improved,” shortened, especially by his colleagues. A feeling
of wounding and of mutilation should be inconceivable for someone who knows not to
know write his own name, his proper name, but simply by representation and in place of
another.” (p.52). Derrida assumes Jefferson has a “feeling of wounding and of mutilation”
from the self-knowledge to avoid giving his signature—in effect his approval and guarantee
representatives (“his colleagues”) to correct, emend, improve, and shorten the landmark
document, this calls into question the legitimacy of the real writer; behind Jefferson, there
are rows of representatives which fade into the background like specters. In context, the lack
of clarity is whose voice is the reader reading because Derrida does not think it is the
draftsman Jefferson speaking through the page after all. Derrida elaborates his thought by
telling a Benjamin Franklin’s story of a hatter named John Thompson (who has an inversion
of Thomas Jefferson’s initials) snipping out details of his shop’s signboard from the advice of
his friends; at the end, the hatter only shows the product on sale on top of the hatter’s
name. Interpreting “the story reflected [Jefferson’s] unhappiness but also his greatest
desire” to have America’s formation be the launchpad to “erect” his proper name, Derrida
views Thomas Jefferson as a self-centered man who wishes to have a ”total erasure of his
text…leaving in place under a map of the United States, only the nudity of his proper name”
because the text is secondary to Jefferson’s true self-aggrandizing goals. Therefore, Jefferson
motive to say all the grievances and has no real underlying authority to post such a
proclamation, so taking this as the context, the performative utterances of the Declaration at
the underlying surface holds neither ground nor merit as the writer himself takes orders
from a representative body detached from the good people being represented. The whispers
of specters “mutilated” Jefferson’s works but it was Jefferson’s ego that created an internal
compromise to publish the voices of these specters. The validity of The Declaration from its
Reviewing the above arguments, Derrida’s main issue with The Declaration originates
from a question he asks at the end regarding the ambiguousness of whether a State is made
or found itself. This is the crux of Derrida’s found problem with The Declaration due to the
fact that the Founding Document recruits a mirage of supporters and of a Supreme Judge to
cast their votes in favor of Independence. From the whole article in which Derrida speak of
the Declaration, he makes excuses for not having enough time to for The Declaration—
neither to elaborate on his thoughts nor to celebrate the Founding Document’s bicentennial;
Derrida’s dismissive tone to the Document as an unimportant piece reflects the vacuum of
importance which he sees beneath it. He would rather speak of Nietzsche and of his
signatures. While Nietzsche was a real person with real thoughts and real motives, the
Signers of the Declaration of Independence are one end of a linked chain with no
attachments on the other end, at least that is the perspective set forth by Jacques Derrida.
Dear Ezar,
Wow—I am so impressed by the depth and insight you bring to Derrida’s brief article.
Your writing shows a nuanced understanding of a truly complex argument. You have taught
me much about the article in the way you’ve unpacked it here. We had discussed, briefly,
that your essay could function mostly as an explication of the piece, with an “intervention”
of some sort near the end, which is what we get here (though, as you’ll see below, I think
For the final version, I would like you to focus on three issues related to key terms,
specter/spectrality. Whether you found this from research or knew it going in, the
specter/spectrality is a key concept in Derrida’s oeuvre (your title evokes his Spectres
[his translators use the British spelling] of Marx). For the final version, I would like
you to define this term, citing any outside sources you utilized when writing. I can
Thesis: Related to the above, if properly defined the “specter” can be a path toward
Derrida does not use this term here, so perhaps you can tell your reader that the
concept of the “specter” can help identify the nothingness at the center of the
Structure: Right now, the paper appears to move chronologically through Derrida’s
paper/ideas. An analytical paper should proceed according to its own inner logic—
usually, the number of steps needed to answer the question or resolve. I would like
you to think more about the ‘flow’ of ideas in the piece and how you might create
Please see my comments and suggestions above for more local, sentence-level issues. Again,
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