To improve fiction writing, the document recommends using more complex and descriptive vocabulary. It suggests replacing simple verbs like "said" with more advanced conjunctions to combine sentences. Adverbs are recommended to start sentences to describe actions. Adverbial phrases showing time can also strengthen writing. Beginning sentences with "ing" verbs provides vivid details. Conjunctions and adverbs can effectively start sentences when varied writing is the goal.
To improve fiction writing, the document recommends using more complex and descriptive vocabulary. It suggests replacing simple verbs like "said" with more advanced conjunctions to combine sentences. Adverbs are recommended to start sentences to describe actions. Adverbial phrases showing time can also strengthen writing. Beginning sentences with "ing" verbs provides vivid details. Conjunctions and adverbs can effectively start sentences when varied writing is the goal.
To improve fiction writing, the document recommends using more complex and descriptive vocabulary. It suggests replacing simple verbs like "said" with more advanced conjunctions to combine sentences. Adverbs are recommended to start sentences to describe actions. Adverbial phrases showing time can also strengthen writing. Beginning sentences with "ing" verbs provides vivid details. Conjunctions and adverbs can effectively start sentences when varied writing is the goal.
To replace said Subordinate conjunctions to create Adverbs to start sentences
complex sentences Suddenly Carefully asked argued Without warning Gingerly enquired insisted although after before Immediately Nervously questioned retorted Abruptly Apprehensively queried snapped because even though Unexpectedly Slowly replied asserted Instantaneously Lethargically answered suggested since when until Unhurriedly responded declared Furiously once while whenever Quickly Angrily Sadly whispered shouted Miserably Rapidly Unluckily murmured yelled as if now that unless Sulkily Swiftly Unfortunately mumbled bellowed Despondently Briskly Happily muttered cried Hastily Luckily whimpered screeched Adverbial Phrases to show time Hurriedly Fortunately barked Joyfully many years ago, earlier, later on, soon, roared eventually after, minutes later, finally , in the afternoon, hours later, later that day, moaned explained sometimes, often, each day, ‘ing’ verbs to start sentences groaned elaborated years/months/days/hours passed, Laughing, Running, Shouting, Yelling, Panicking, whined continued sometime later, that evening Sulking, Smiling, Frowning, Hurrying, Weeping, complained added Giggling, Scowling wailed suggested Remember conjunctions and adverbs snivelled commented may be used as sentence starters. sighed remarked