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    In the opinion essay, the author argues that zoos should be illegal. First, animals in zoos are not in their natural habitats and cannot satisfy instincts like hunting or interacting with other animals. Second, zoo enclosures are too small and do not allow animals to roam as they would in the wild. For example, lions are given dead meat instead of hunting, and giraffes have little space despite their large size. In conclusion, the author believes zoos do not benefit animals and should be replaced with digital zoos using technology to simulate natural habitats.

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    In the opinion essay, the author argues that zoos should be illegal. First, animals in zoos are not in their natural habitats and cannot satisfy instincts like hunting or interacting with other animals. Second, zoo enclosures are too small and do not allow animals to roam as they would in the wild. For example, lions are given dead meat instead of hunting, and giraffes have little space despite their large size. In conclusion, the author believes zoos do not benefit animals and should be replaced with digital zoos using technology to simulate natural habitats.

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    10th GE

    How to Write an Opinion Essay


    Name: __________________________________
    Derek Guia Lladó Date: ____________
    29/3/2023 Class: _______
    3ESO A

    Objective
    In this lesson, you will practice the OREO strategy to write an opinion essay. An
    opinion is a belief, judgement, or the expression of the way you feel about
    something. It is not necessarily a fact for everyone. To write an “Opinion Essay”
    think OREO!

    Opinion:Tell your readers HOW you feel about


    something.

    Reason: Tell your readers WHY you feel that way.

    Example/Explanation: Give your readers examples


    of why you feel that way.

    Opinion: tell your readers again WHY you feel the


    way you do.

    You can use these sentence starters to help make your opinion/persuasive writing
    flow smoothly. Be careful to choose your sentences starters carefully. Make sure
    that the words you have chosen make sense as you reread your text.

    O R E O

    I think… Here are some For example... Remember, I believe...


    I feel… reasons why… For instance… Remember, I think…
    I prefer... First... / Firstly… For one thing. All in all…
    In my opinion.. Let me tell you why 'Here's an All things considered…
    The best thing about… I want a example...If I Finally…
    Everyone should.… because.… had…I could…. For the above-
    The greatest part about… I feel this way I would… mentioned reasons...
    …is better.. because, Clearly... In conclusion…
    I believe… I think I should In fact… Therefore I feel that…
    It seems to me that… have... a…because…. Obviously... Therefore I think that…
    Most people feel… Of course.. In summary…
    I am writing to… According to... In short…
    How would you feel if… Reason 2+ ….shows that To summarize…
    Do you want... Also... Overall…
    I would like... Furthermore.… Lastly.…
    My favorite.… Second.…/ Secondly, In other words…
    The best…. Third../Thirdly.….
    ….is awesome Not only is…. but it
    is also
    Moreover…

    1
    Think about a topic of your interest and write a short opinion essay about it using
    the OREO strategy. Use the language provided in the sentence starters chart.

    Topic: _________________________________________________________________
    Zoos

    Opinion. Give your opinion:


    In my opinion, I think that the family attraction, a zoo, must be
    ilegal

    Reason. Your reason(s) for your opinion:


    Firstly the animals are not in their habitats which means that they
    are not in the conditions and place were they are accustomed or
    the things and other animals that are there.

    And also then, they are closed in a space where they can't
    answer to their instincts like go to hunt, relate with others or just
    move throught the terrain to do what ever they want.

    Example. Give an example(s) to support your opinion(s):


    For example the depredators like lions, they give them fresh meat, but it's not the
    same that he hunt his meet in his own so we are changint their instincs and needs.

    Another example are the giraffes, they have the instinct to live and rest their life in
    groups, but in the zoo, how they are so big, they only have three or four giraffes in a
    space that for us it's big, but for them it's small.

    In case of a zoo, I would make a digital zoo leveraging the new technologies make
    screens where you could see the animals in their habitat, some vr glasses and
    manual things like a fair that simulate how feels the animal skin, etc.

    Opinion. Restate your opinion(s):


    To summary I would eliminate all the zoos because they don't
    aport nothing good to them, only for us, and I would make them
    digital.

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