EVALUATIVE AND

PERSUASIVE
ESSAY
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Destya Pramudita (2088203096)

Meylia Putri Angesti (2088203064)
Virna Mustika (1988203067)
 Definition:
Evaluation
Essay
An evaluation essay or report is a type of argument that provides
evidence to justify a writer's opinions about a subject.

Any kind of review is essentially a piece of evaluative writing

(Allen S. Goose).
STRUCTURE OF EVALUATION ESSAY

Introduction
1 An evaluation essay introduction carries the weight of the
paper since it lets the reader understand the importance of
the piece you’re working on.

Body Paragraph
2 The body of an evaluation essay, it is vital to include all the
supporting points that give meaning to the topic.

Conclusion
3 Evaluation essay conclusions wrap the text. Here, you can
give recommendations and state your stand regarding the
topic.
 EXAMPLE OF EVALUATION ESSAY

the implications of drugs used in sports

Perfomance enhancers are illegal drugs that can improve physical activity, like in sports or bodybuilding. many athletes, especially
in pro-sports, use perfomance-enhancing drugs. athletes dont take these drugs to level the field, they do it to get advantage. the
end game will eventually end up in violence, committed by strong built players. knowing that those kinds of drugs can create
health problem.

Performance enhancing drugs creates health issues, for example, cardiovascular and liver diseases, it also causes many nosebleeds,
and sometimes insomnia. while these type of drugs help improve hysical activities, that require a lot of strength and energy.
athletes hurt themselves in long run just for a small competition reward. this is the reason why sports judges and doctors are
trying to ban steroids and other forms of perfomance enhancers in major competitions. some positive effects are increased
muscle strength, body size, healing rate enhancements can cause a great dosage of testosterone in both the male or female blood
system.

Perfomance enhancers are known for getting a guaranteed win, but also causing long-term health issues in the near future. it
helps athletes "cheat" in the olympics. enhancements can easily get an athletes disqulified from any games or champions. it also
increases the risk of aggravated acts and depression. yes, they help them get stronger but it is not worth.
 Definition :
Persuasive Essay
A persuasive essay is a piece of writing that's designed to sway
a reader to one point of view or another.
STRUCTURE OF PERSUASIVE ESSAY

Introduction
1 This is where you'll introduce the topic at hand. Talk about
why the subject is so divisive or important, and why a
decision needs to be made.

Body Paragraph
2 Use each paragraph to introduce a new point to support
your thesis. Once you've introduced your point, make sure
to use evidence to back up what you're saying.

Conclusion
3 Use this section to tie all of your main arguments together.
Nothing new should be introduced here.
 EXAMPLE OF PERSUASIVE ESSAY

Why Women Should Not Have an Abortion

Many women in the entire world have abortions. Women believe there are many reasons to abort such as fear of having or raising
a child, rape, or not having enough money. But whatever the situation, there is never an acceptable reason to get an abortion.
Some important reasons why women should not abort have to do with human values, religious values, and values of conscience.

The first reason why women should not have an abortion is related to basic human values. Women need to think about their
unborn babies who are not responsible for this situation. These unborn babies should have the privilege to live and grow into a
normal person. Women need to be more humanitarian and less egoistic with these babies. On the other hand, the baby doesn’t
know how or why he is here. It is not necessary to kill a life; there are many other solutions to resolve this problem short of
abortion.

The second reason why women should not abort has to do with religious values. In almost all religions, a woman is not permitted
to have an abortion. If they do, their religions will punish them. In some religions, for example, a woman cannot take communion
after having an abortion, and before taking communion again, she must do many things as a form of penitence. In whatever
religion, abortion is punished and for this reason, women should not abort.
 EXAMPLE OF PERSUASIVE ESSAY

Finally, the third and most important reason why women should not abort is the related to her conscience. When a woman has an
abortion, she will always think about the baby she might have had. She will always think about the future that could have
happened with her baby which will always remind her that she killed it. Because she has had an abortion, she will never have a
good life, and her conscience will remind her of what she had done. Because a woman who has an abortion can’t forget about
what she has done, these thoughts will always be with her, and the results can be calamitous.

There are many reasons why women should not have an abortion. The truth is that women need to think about the consequences
that can occur before having sexual relations. I think that the effects of an abortion can be very sad for everyone involved, both
for the woman who has the abortion and for the family who lives with her.
 conclusion

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So, a persuasive essay is any written

communication that attempts to persuade or
influence the reader to believe in an idea or
opinion and act on it. An evaluative essay, on the
other hand, is a piece of writing that is designed
to provide a statement or response based on our
point of view on something.
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