Band Score: 45 Task Response: The writer addresses the task only partially, the format is inappropriate in places. The development of ideas isnot always lear and no clear conclusion is dan Coherence and Cohesion: & The wr ‘and ideas butthese are not arranged c ‘no ciear progression inthe response. Th ‘s confusing Lexical Resource:5 The writer uses a limited range of Vocabulary which i minimally adequate forthe task There are noticeable errors in speling and word formation that cause some dificult for the reader Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 4 The writer makes frequent grammatical erors and the punctuation is faulty. The ‘errors cause some difficulty for the reader, presents information ly and there is use of paragraphs Sample answer 2 Ie s-conmon today or some workers to attend mestings in many cffeentcountriesatall hou'sof ne day. However others wijust go tothe sane office each day and aay work a sivilarroutine. So there are two aistinct styles of work and Some individuals wil prefer each ore you travela lot you wllsee mary paces, experiences and cultures whichis anexeitig way tolead your fe ana an opportunity hat many people carmot ave Wats mere. you sre working regu how's innew places, younever know hat ishappeningrext. you" day isnot predctavle and this wil hep motivate some people. Final itis good fr your professional developentent tosee how your business isin other cities and On the other hand, there are advantages ta naving a regular ‘tine at ork Employees withyounganviesmay prefer to this style af working We because they car spend more tine (wth ther children ana wate them group Secondy, sone ‘of iy Friends and Fansly menbers get jet lag soe rot ike aveling Fray, some people are more productive na Fanta erwironmient and wed not werk wellalvays traveling Inconclusion,itieuptoeachindwvidual te decide what style ofworkib most sulbabe for then: mn my ob self situation ‘woud ke to travel hile lan’ young, ut work ina more Fixed enveorment later wher Ihave a family Band Score: 8 Task Response: 8 The writer addresses al parts ofthe task and presents a well-developed response tothe question wth Felevant and supported ideas. Coherence and Cohesion: & Ideas and infomation are ‘sequenced logically and paragraphing is used appropriately, ‘The writer manages all aspects of cohesion we Lexical Resource: 8 The writer uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently andtexibly to convey precise meanings, although there are occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 Awide range of structures is used and the majority of sentences are ‘error-free, although there are very occasional errors and inappropriacies Task 2 A Problem/Solution ssay B IELTS PRACTICETASK (page 249) Wie people in developed nationshave sufficient food there are manyothorsin developing countries whe donot eat enough The reasons er this situation and the waysto sole it are compicated but itis tooimportant we cannot ignore. There are many causes of starvation and it depends on which regonvve thnk about Themost generalproblemis that world population is growhy all the tive toa huge nunber Then, Some parts of the word there are wars and cant that stop ood coming to the people wro need it. nother places there are poltical problems ot corruption which means fead distripution isaffected Last'y. in some courtsies such as my oar home, Brazil there are severe weather events ike foods anda ought which means the hw vest isbad ard people canmot have enough toeat that year The solutions to the problem are difficult out we esn see seme possibilities. n China. far exanple, they have the one= child pokey, to inst posuation and ths could copied in other nations, h addition, scientists are finding ew vaystogrow cropsbetter and nove praductive so we can hope fora good outcome Lastly, the United Nations must fndawayto stopall \warand.corription sofeod supplies can reach people who are desperately starving In conclusion, there sno quick fx for this issue as the because there are many causes. The ost iiporcant thins fa for everyvody around the world to have adesine tosoive the problen'and then we can nskea progress Band Score: 8 Tesk Response: The write fully addresses all parts ofthe 3 fly developed postin in ansiver othe ‘question with relevant and well supported ideas. Coherence and Cohesion:8 Information and ideas are logically sequenced throughoutthe answer. Paragraphs ‘writer manages all aspects of cohesion well Lexical Resource: 8 The writer uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexiblyto convey precise meat ‘although there may be eccasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. Grammatical Range and Accuracy: 8 A wide range of structures is used and the majority of sentences are error free, although the writer makes occasional errors and ingporopriacies, D IELTS PRACTICE TASK (page 257) Sample answer 1 Inmany large city some people waste how's of ther timesevery day because of trafic congeston onthe road, What you thn are the cause ths problems wnat solution canyou suggest “Trafic congest.on serious problem many city because too niany car Every day's big trafic queu tate niany hour for short travel to school works shops business everything You cannot get here quick may belong tine to go tle place Pol very bad many people sicks fools tred ard exnastng all day polutions veryvery bad and get worse al ine. Goverment has Fobebuldmanyerainand bus and other thing ike subways ana nology sanotso many thousandot caren road and no pelutions, jonvery SAMPLE WRITING ANSWERS 241