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WRITING
Telf: 940196177

Student: __________________________________ Date ______________________ Unit 06 Coar


SCORE

The house of the future

Situation:

IDTechEx is looking for people all over the world to enter a


competition about their ideal future house. The winner will
win 1 million dollars to build their ideal future house.

Task: Write an email to the CEO of IDTechEx describing


your ideal future house and saying why you should win
the competition. Choose 3 gadgets/devices from its web.
(paste the photos) – (200-300 words)

1. STRUCTURE (2 points)

1. Introduction

2. Purpose of the email (describe my ideal future house)

3. Description of the ideal future house 1 (rooms and gadgets/devices that your house will have)

4. Description of the ideal future house 2 (what the gadgets/devices are going to do)

5. Why your ideal future house should win the competition

2. VOCABULARY and GRAMMAR (8 points)

( ) gadgets/devices: ________________________________________________________

( ) will: ________________________________________________________

( ) going to: ________________________________________________________

( ) linkers: so, moreover, also, definitely, probably, perhaps,


additionally, however, or.

( ) expressions: It looks very futuristic!, I would like to, I am sure that…, I have
thought that…, regarding…, I believe that, to my mind, for all these reasons, in brief.
3. DRAFTING (10 points)

Dear CEO of IDTechExv

I hope this email find you well. I am Abdiel David Carhuaricra Aliaga, i am from to Oxapampa and
im have 16 years. I am writtin to express my enthusiasm for the IDTechEx future House Competitition
and to sahre my visión of an ideal future house that integrates cutting-edge technology for
sustainable living

I have to considerat that in my ideal future house the sustainability and innovation are the Forefront
of desing. The Smart energy management system that utilizes renewable energy sources such as
solar panel and wind turbines, because This system not only Powers the house efficientle but also
stores excess energy for future use, minimizing reliance on traditional grid power and reducing
carbon footprint.

Fulthermore, is necessary have to consider that in owns houses the contions should be the best, so in
this way i think that with Solar energy, automated cleaning devices and automated garden robots
are help us to make informed decisions about their health and lifestyle. If we talking of each devices
we can say that:

First of all, the Smart Energy is going to generate electricity for the all house. This means that with the
sun you can have any energy renovable for a long time, until the sun is over that its Will never pass.

Then, the automated claening devices are goingo to help us to realice the labor of clean our
house. This robotic clean all the parts and it could be power on o off when we make it.

Finally, the automated garden robots are going to collect fruits or vegetables and many aliments
that are beneficiet for our helth and for our organism.

I firmly believe that my visión for an ideal future house alings with the goals of the IDTechEx future
House Competition, and thtat contribute to advancing the field of technology-enabled sistainable
housing

Thank you for consider my entry. I am excited to look forward to the possibility of bringing my visión
to life.

Regards

Abdiel David / 994049014

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