Reviewing Technical Documents – Review Comment Sheet

GED106: Module 2 - Technical Writing

Name: Juan Carlo S. Delos Reyes Date: June 29, 2022

Section: GED106_C41 Professor: Mr. Jose Rafael Benito

Step1: Identifying your document/s

Document Type Google.com

Target Audience The target audience of google is people who like researching any particular
Who is the target audience of issues, people, and many more. All of them have different professions and
the document? Are they all in fields. They can easily understand how it works and what you need to
the same field or profession? access the website entirely.
Do you think they will be able
to easily understand the
content of the document?

The Message Google's mission is to organize the world's information and make it valuable
What is the message of the and accessible. As a result, search makes it simple to find information from
document? Are there technical various sources.
or specialized words used? Do
you find it difficult to
comprehend the message of the
document? Explain.

Step 2: The message

Problem/s encountered The problem with the website is that restrictions are not that strict. This
Briefly discuss the problem/s means any person can access or see inappropriate photos or websites. If I can
encountered in reading and change anything from the website, I would change the security measures.
understanding the document in With this, the problem of lower restrictions can be solved.
this section. In addition, if you
can make changes on the
document you found, what
changes would you make?

What do you think will the target
audience think about the
document?
What are the outstanding features
of the document that made it a
technical paper?
Everybody uses the website. It has many features that any person can like.
For example, there is this thing called Google maps, where you can locate
your own house and quickly find a place you are looking for. That is just one
feature of Google, and many more are outstanding.

Step 3: Document Design

Describe the document. The design of the website now is simple. But sometimes, it changes
What did the writer use to depending on the season, trend, and many more. And sometimes it can be
make it appealing, interactive wherein the letters GOOGLE move freely.
comprehensible and interesting
(eg: graphs, charts, pictures,
etc.)