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KINGDOM OF ALOCODIA

Once upon a time, there was a big palace near the farm, it was

glamorous and made up of annual Frech crystal, vast superb, colorful cubist,

splendid underground, and finest archiepiscopal. This palace is owned by one

of the richest families in Alocadia. King Russel Alodia was the father of the

family, he was centered, and decisive, protected his realm, blessed the lives of

others, provided order, and did everything just to protect his loved ones,

Queen Eliza Alocodia is the loving wife of King Russel, her attitude was

opposite to her husband because she is kind, softhearted, embrace changes,

hardworking, and respect others. Queen Eliza and King Russel have

differences, but they always understand and share the opinions of each other,

so they do not misunderstand the decisions that they are going to make.

Somehow living in the palace would not allow you to wander freely outside

without a tourist or photographer capturing your every move, the Alocadia

family tends to host official guests and their photographers in their living

rooms meaning nothing is private for them, Every people in Alocodia

admired King Russel’s family especially his daughter named Alanzia Alodia

she had the feminity, grace, affection, generosity, and thoughtfulness Every

man in Alocadia wants to marry her but their family has a rule which Alanzia

should marry a son of one of the richest family also in Alocodia but Alanzia

was not yet ready to be married and she doesn’t have like a man yet.
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One time, Alanzia was looking at a farm from the veranda early in

the morning and she saw the back of a man carrying a dirty sack of parsnip

instead of hating the man because he was dirty, she


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admired the man for being hardworking even if it was too early, the man faced

the veranda of the palace and saw Alanzia looking at him, Alanzia got

surprised by what happened her heart started beating triple fast and she froze

while looking at the man and don’t know what to do so she just turned around

and go back to her room while her she is panting and doesn’t know the reason,

when she is already inside her room she can’t stop thinking the man at the

farm and keep on remembering his face while she is smiling out of the blue,

reminiscing stop on her mind when someone suddenly knocks at her door, she

was surprised that it is her father, King Russel told her that she need go down

because someone is waiting for her, Alanzia just smiled to her father and said

“I’m coming”. When King Russel is already gone Alanzia came back with

reminiscing the handsome face of the farmer, while going down at the spiral

stairs her smile arrayed in her face, but her smile eventually fade because

she saw a another rich family in Alocadia and she already knows what’s going

to happen, her father told her to sit at the dining area because the Ranquins

Family is waiting Alanzia nervously sit at costly chair. King Russel said

“Alanzia this Raeim Ranquins your fiancé” Alanzia did a violent reaction and

said “No, I’m not going to marry him I already liked someone” Everyone in

the dining area was surprised, Queen Eliza broke the silence and “Really

Alanzia? Who is that lucky man then?” Alanzia quickly intonated ‘In time

you all will know, so please King Russel call off this fix marriage, please.”

King Russel wants only to make his daughter happy, so he drops the
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arrangement and just apologizes to Ranquin family. Alanzia looked at King

Russel nervously while it is talking to the Ranquin Family regarding some

matters, she didn’t know what to enunciate a words if King Russels asked him

about the man that she liked, Suddenly Queen Eliza called her name and she

felt nervous because she already knows that her mother is going to ask her

about the man she’s pointing out a while ago, Queen Eliza utter a word asking

her about the man that she liked Alanzia just told to her mother that she just

liked the man and she has no plans yet to


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marry someone and sadness appears on her face knowing that her family has a

rule which is to marry the son of one of the richest families here in Alocodia,

Alanzia decides to go back to her room since her parents are already talking

about a different matter. Alanzia is already inside her room and decides to

have some fresh air because of the sadness that she feels so she goes to the

veranda and looks at the beautiful view, her eyes stare at the farm, and finding

someone, butterflies start flying at her stomach when she saw the farmer again

named Luisito, when she saw a man looked at her this time she smiled instead

of turning her back around, but Luisito did not smile back Alanzia felt

dismayed with that action but she just shrugged her shoulders and go back to

her room but the smile in her face is really unavoidable.

Another day came and every morning after eating breakfast Alanzia was

going back to her room and looking the farm from the veranda just to see

Luisito working hard and helping his family, Alanzia was always smiling

when she always saw Luisito and this time he is smiling back at her, At night

King Russel and Queen Elizabeth was going to leave the palace for three days

to go to another country Alanzia was really happy because she can go outside

whatever time she want, when her parents is already left even it’s already

dark she decided to go outside and planning to see Luisito but she is not sure

if it is still outside and doing something related to their farm because it is

already late, when she is already outside she looked first at the farm to see if
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there is still people but she felt dismayed when Luisito was not there so she

decided to go back to the palace and wait until the morning comes so she can

see the man that he loved, when she is already walking towards the palace

someone says her name she turned back and look around to see who is that

someone who called her name and when saw nobody she continued walking

going to the palace but when someone says her name again she felt fear and

hurriedly walk but someone said “it is me Princess Alanzia” she heard that

voice once
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that’s why her hopes got up that it was Luisito who called her when she

turned her back around and looked at the surroundings, she saw someone

hiding at the back of the tree it scared her out because it was dark, but she still

found the courage to ask who is the person behind the big tree Alanzia said

“Who are you? Why are you hiding?” and then the person at the back of tree

utters a word “Don’t be scared Princess Alanzia, It is me Luisito” Alanzia felt

relieved after Luisito showed himself and said “What are you doing? Why

are you hiding?” Luisito just said “I might be caught by your security

guards if I don’t hide,” Alanzia said “I know a place where there are no

guards, come with me” While they were walking Luisito asked Alanzia “Did

you know that this is wrong princess?” “Don’t worry” King Russel looked mad

and going to kill someone he uttered a word “What is this Alanzia? You broke

our rules” Luisito spoke and said “With all due respect King Russel we

genuinely love each other and we’re happy, I do love your daughter” Alanzia

said “King Russel I love him, I will fight for him, I don’t care about the rules

he is the only man that I won’t be with” King Russel was full of anger he

commands his guards to get Alanzia to bring inside the palace and also Luisito

to punish because he disobeyed the rules of the palace of Alocodia he is going

to bring at the jail of the palace while King Russel was still thinking the

punishment for him. Alanzia grounded at the palace for a month and did not see
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Luisito, she has no news of what happened about him all she really know is

Luisito was still there at the jail of the palace while waiting for the punishment

she is really scared because death might be the punishment of Luisito because

they disobeyed the important rule of the palace, she goes down but still not

talking to anyone because she’s mad of what they did to Luisito, while going to

dinner she heard an conversation at the dining area about Luisito she secretly

listened to it, all the members of her family was present they were talking about

the punishment King Russel utter a word with finality “Death is the punishment

for him, no one has the right to break my rules” after hearing all those words

Alanzia showed up and raised her voice to her family “No! You can’t do that to

him, It’s my fault, Don’t kill him King Russel please I’m begging you” she said

teary eyed but King Russel ignored her word and said “Tomorrow at the place

where you always see each other, say goodbye to him” merciless, Alanzia cried

after those words from his father with finality, she looked at Queen Eliza with

pleading eyes hoping that she can changed my father’s decision but she just

Shaked her head signed that she can’t do something to change King Russel’s

decision. I just decided to go to my veranda hoping that I could see Luisito

again with a smile even I knew that is impossible to happen, I just went inside

my room and thought about what is going to happen tomorrow, as I closed my

eyes, I wished that there will be not tomorrow and she dozed off to sleep.
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Tomorrow morning Alanzia don’t have the energy to get up on bed but the fact

she is going to see Luisito he is happy but the fact also that this is the day that

they are going to punish him with death I felt like I already lost myself, my

alertness just came back when someone knock at my door, It is Queen Eliza she

utter a word “Darling I am very sorry I can’t do anything about your father’s

decisions you know he provides order right? he just want you to be happy” “I

am very happy when I am with Luisito, I can live in a poor way as long as I am

with him” Alanzia said, Queen Eliza just hugged her and said “fix yourself

your father is waiting downstairs” Alanzia just looked at her. Afternoon came

and everyone is ready to spot the punishment that is going to happen, Alanzia

was at there favorite place waiting for Luisito, when she look at where her

father is, he saw Luisito held by many securities she ran to Luisito while crying

but the guards did not let her to be near at Luisito as King Russel’s command,

King Russel positioned Luisito kneeling at the grass and said “you disobeyed

my rules and my daughter is involved, I cannot forgive you ever, no one can

forgive for what you did, As the punishment you will be shoot with a gun”

After Alanzia heard those words she screamed and said “Noo! King Russel

please, I am begging you just please let him live I’ll do everything” then King

Russel ignored her and screamed “shoot him now” two gun shots filled the

palace, Alanzia forced herself to escaped from the guards, while running
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towards to Luisito she screamed “NOOOOOO!!!” as he hold Luisito’s hands,

Luisito utter a last words “I love you my princess, forever” as he wiped the

tears of Alanzia and died after the two gun shots. Alanzia was hugging the dead

body of Luisito, blood filled her dress and she felt like she also lost herself as

she looked at King Russel, she just felt dissatisfaction and will never forgive

him. King Russel utters a word “Bury the man where he got shoot, Alanzia”

Alana was crying and didn’t want to let go the body of her love the guard

forcedly pulled the dead body to Alanzia, she’s watching Luisito buried at their

favorite place with mourning and resentment, it was getting dark and all the

people was already gone only her because she really don’t want to leave Luisito

she’s been crying since afternoon but her tears was still present she’s willing to

outwear all the tears she had for Luisito, her mother came and said “let’s go

inside he’s gone” but Alanzia utter a word “you will be always in my heart, I

love you, my prince” as she left the their favorite place.

One year later, she is from Switzerland and leave her parents at the palace so

she can at least forget why they did but every time she can see the palace she

still can remember all the details how she lost someone really important to her

life. She came back here at the palace to see her favorite place with her favorite

person, she looked around to find where Luisito got buried because there are

changes with this place when she couldn’t find it, she asked one of the guards
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and they pointed out a medium tree with small violet fruits that could be sized

as tears, the guard said “After you left here in the palace we noticed that there

were tree at the place where Luisito buried and it continues to grow” As I walk

towards the tree and touch the small violet fruits that shaped as tears then I

remembered that one time I dreamed about Luisito and he said “Stop wasting

your tears I am happy to be with you even in a short period, go back to our

favorite place I have something for you my princess” I got teary-eyed when I

realized that this is the gift he is talking about I looked at the tree and utter a

word “I will take care of this and visit you always, I love you my Luisito.”

PART II

In the heart of a once-forgotten kingdom, a majestic palace stood as a testament

to a bygone era. Its towering spires and intricate architecture told tales of

splendor and grandeur. However, the palace had long been abandoned, its halls

echoing with the whispers of history.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow upon the palace

walls, a weary traveler named Elyra approached. Drawn by both curiosity and a

sense of destiny, Elyra felt a connection to the ancient structure. She pushed
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open the heavy doors, their hinges creaking in protest, and entered a world

frozen in time.

As Elyra explored the labyrinthine corridors, she uncovered the palace's

secrets. Dust-covered tapestries depicted the kingdom's rise and fall, while

forgotten chambers revealed treasures of wisdom and forgotten magic. Elyra,

with a heart full of compassion and a thirst for knowledge, sought to revive the

palace and its lost legacy.

Days turned into weeks, and the once-silent halls echoed with the sounds of

restoration. Elyra enlisted the help of villagers from nearby towns, each drawn

to the palace's enchantment. Together, they breathed life back into the stone

walls, planted gardens in the courtyard, and ignited long-extinguished torches.

Word of the palace's revival spread far and wide, reaching the ears of a wise

elder who had once served the kingdom. With a twinkle in their eye, the elder

arrived to guide Elyra in unlocking the palace's dormant magic. Ancient spells

were uttered, and the palace responded with a radiant energy that pulsed
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through every stone.

As the palace blossomed anew, so did the surrounding kingdom. Villagers, now

united by a common purpose, rebuilt their lives and rekindled the spirit of

community. The once-forgotten kingdom transformed into a beacon of hope,

drawing travelers, scholars, and dreamers from distant lands.

Elyra, having fulfilled her destiny, stood on the palace balcony overlooking the

now-thriving kingdom. The sun dipped below the horizon once more, casting a

warm glow upon the land. A gentle breeze carried the laughter of children and

the melodies of newfound joy.

The palace, once a relic of the past, had become a symbol of resilience and

renewal. The story of its ending marked the beginning of a new chapter for the

kingdom, where the echoes of history mingled with the promises of a brighter

future. And so, the tale of the palace's revival whispered through the ages,

inspiring generations to come.


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PART 3

Isabella, a woman with weathered hands and a heart full of passion for her

craft, had inherited the vineyard from her ancestors. She knew the secret to

cultivating the most succulent grapes lay in a delicate balance of sunlight, soil,

and love. Every morning, as the first rays of dawn painted the sky, Isabella

would stroll through the rows of vines, inspecting each cluster with a

discerning eye.

One summer, a mysterious traveler named Luca arrived in the village. Intrigued

by tales of the exceptional grapes, Luca sought out Isabella's vineyard. The

moment Luca set foot on the sun-dappled soil, the fragrance of ripening grapes

enveloped the air, leaving an indelible mark on Luca's senses.

Isabella, recognizing the wanderlust in Luca's eyes, welcomed the traveler with

warmth. She shared the secrets of her trade, from the importance of the soil's

composition to the rhythm of the seasons that orchestrated the vineyard's

symphony. Luca, captivated by Isabella's wisdom and the magic of the

vineyard, decided to stay and learn the art of grape cultivation.


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Together, Isabella and Luca toiled through seasons, nurturing the vines and

witnessing the miraculous transformation of blossoms into plump, juicy grapes.

Their shared laughter echoed through the vineyard, blending with the rustle of

leaves and the songs of birds. The vines seemed to respond to the harmony,

yielding the most exquisite grapes the village had ever seen.

As autumn painted the landscape in hues of amber and gold, Isabella and Luca

harvested the grapes, their hands stained with the essence of the season's

bounty. The village celebrated the culmination of their labor with a grand

festival, where the air was filled with the sweet aroma of freshly pressed grape

juice and the joyful melodies of local musicians.

The fame of Isabella's vineyard spread far and wide, attracting connoisseurs

and traders from distant lands. The once-small vineyard became a symbol of

unity and shared dreams, bringing prosperity to the village.


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In the heart of the vineyard, Isabella and Luca stood together, gazing at the

thriving vines and the legacy they had built. The story of the grapes,

intertwined with the tale of two kindred spirits, became a legend passed down

through generations—a reminder that even the humblest of fruits, when

nurtured with love and shared with others, can create a tapestry of joy and

prosperity.

PART 4

Once upon a time, in a kingdom nestled between rolling hills and sparkling

rivers, there lived a wise and just king. King Alaric ruled with kindness, and his

people flourished under his benevolent gaze. The kingdom was known far and

wide for its enchanting beauty, but its true jewel was the royal family.

King Alaric and Queen Seraphina had two children, Prince Adrian and Princess
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Amara. The siblings, though born of the same royal blood, possessed distinct

qualities that complemented each other perfectly. Prince Adrian was known for

his courage and adventurous spirit, while Princess Amara charmed the kingdom

with her kindness and wisdom.

One day, a neighboring kingdom sent an invitation to celebrate a grand festival.

The prince and princess, eager for new adventures, set out with their entourage.

The festival was a dazzling spectacle of music, dance, and laughter. Among the

guests was a mysterious figure, a masked stranger who moved gracefully

through the festivities.

As the night unfolded, Prince Adrian and Princess Amara found themselves

captivated by the masked stranger's elegance and mystery. The stranger,

sensing a shared spirit of curiosity, approached the royal siblings. In hushed

tones, they spoke of a hidden realm beyond the known lands—a realm filled

with magic, challenges, and untold treasures.

Intrigued by the stranger's words, Prince Adrian and Princess Amara decided to
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embark on a journey to uncover this hidden realm. The stranger, revealed to be

a wise enchanter named Eldara, guided them through enchanted forests, across

crystal-clear lakes, and over towering mountains.

Throughout their journey, Prince Adrian's courage and Princess Amara's

wisdom were tested by magical creatures and mystical puzzles. Together, they

overcame each challenge, their bond strengthening with every shared triumph

and comforting moment in the face of adversity.

As they approached the heart of the hidden realm, Eldara revealed a magical

portal that led back to their own kingdom. The siblings, now wiser and more

connected than ever, returned home with tales of their extraordinary adventure.

The kingdom rejoiced at the safe return of the royal siblings, and King Alaric

and Queen Seraphina marveled at the newfound depth of their children's

characters. The hidden realm had gifted Prince Adrian and Princess Amara not

only with magical artifacts but also with a profound understanding of the

importance of unity, courage, and wisdom.


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The kingdom flourished under the reign of a royal family whose love for each

other and their people was as boundless as the realms they had explored. And

so, the tale of Prince Adrian and Princess Amara became a cherished legend,

inspiring generations with the magic of adventure, the strength of family, and

the wisdom found in the unlikeliest of places.

In the sun-soaked vineyards of Verona's neighboring kingdom, there existed a

longstanding feud between two noble families, the Monticellos and the

Capriannis. Amidst the simmering animosity, a forbidden love blossomed

between Alessio Monticello and Isabella Caprianni.

Alessio, with his striking features and a heart that beat passionately, was the

youngest heir to the Monticello estate. Isabella, an ethereal beauty with eyes

that sparkled like starlight, belonged to the rival Caprianni clan. Their paths

crossed during a masquerade ball, where love transcended the boundaries set

by their feuding families.

Drawn to each other like magnets, Alessio and Isabella danced under the
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moonlit sky, their hearts syncing in a rhythm only they could hear.

Unbeknownst to their families, the pair met in secret, their love blossoming

amidst hidden gardens and clandestine rendezvous.

As whispers of their romance spread, tensions between the Monticellos and

Capriannis escalated. The elders, fueled by ancient grudges, forbade any

contact between the two families. Undeterred, Alessio and Isabella vowed to

defy the odds, dreaming of a future where love would conquer all.

Fate, however, had other plans. A series of misunderstandings and misguided

attempts at reconciliation led to a tragic confrontation between the Monticellos

and Capriannis in the heart of Verona. In the midst of the chaos, Alessio and

Isabella found themselves caught between loyalty to their families and the

unyielding force of their love.

In a desperate bid to end the violence and unite the feuding clans, Alessio and

Isabella decided to reveal their forbidden love. They stood before their enraged

families, declaring that their union was a testament to the possibility of


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reconciliation and a chance for a new beginning.

Yet, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a melancholy glow over the

battlefield of broken ties, a tragic twist unfolded. A single arrow, fired in the

heat of the moment, found its mark, claiming the lives of Alessio and Isabella,

two hearts entwined in an ill-fated love.

The senseless tragedy shocked both families, and in the aftermath of sorrow, a

bitter understanding dawned. The Monticellos and Capriannis, faced with the

consequences of their feud, chose to bury the hatchet. In memory of Alessio

and Isabella, the families erected a shared monument, vowing to nurture a

future where love would triumph over hatred.

And so, the tale of Verona's star-crossed lovers echoed through the ages, a

cautionary yet poignant reminder of the devastating consequences that can befall

those ensnared by the chains of ancient enmity.

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