COM K16 – TEST CUỐI KHÓA

1. Lục Thị Chi

Dear Mrs Hallam, Thank you so much for your idea I think it will be a great competition for
students On behalf of the class 12A2, I would like to make the following comments: I believe that
the competition should be open to all pupils in the school so that they can demonstrate their
skills.I guess many talents will be developed through this competition. In my opinion, the school
should invite the president of the parents' association to attend, they can make an excellent jury.
Since it's a contest organized by the school, our class proposes that the winner of the Contest will
be given a prize of a $200 scholarship. The opinion expressed above is that of the entire class.
Thank you so much for taking the time to listen!
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2. Phạm Nguyệt Anh

Dear mrs hallam I think that planning to organise a school talent competition is an excellent ideal
idea. I suggest that students taking part in the competition can sing, dance or acting In my
opinion, the talent show could be for students of all ages is better because there will be many
students joining, show many good performances, we will discover student talent of all ages I think
that some parents should judge the competition is a good ideal. I agree with that opinion I
recommend the winners should receive a bunch of flower, a winner certificate and 500$. I'm
looking forward to school talent competition
Students Your sincerely
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3. Phương Trang
Dear teacher Beatrice Hallan I just recevied your email and know you want to oganise a school
talen competion. This is an a perfect idea to help us show talent for other students in school. In
my opinion, the talent has no age limit, it is better for students all of age. I absolutely agree to let
some parents should judge the competion. It shows different points of view and brings the fair for
competion. I suggest the prize that the winner should recevie are medal and money. That’s all my
opinion
Trang
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Lois smiled as she put the tickets in her pocket and walked out of her house. She is on his way to
the music concert he has been waiting so long to see it. Concert tickets were difficult to buy and
she had to buy them from another seller. Unfortunately, while Lois was going to the intersection of
the town center, she saw a serious accident and the injured person in the car needed to be taken
to the hospital in time. She decided to take the injured person to the hospital immediately. When
Lois returned, the music concert had ended, she had just a bit sad but still felt proud to have
helped others.
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4. Trần Huyền
Dear Hallam, I think it's a great idea, that competition can attract the talents of all the students in
the school. Besides, it also helps students to get close and sociable to each other. If the talent
show could be for students of all ages that would be great. Everyone has opportunity to
participate. Don't miss any talent. Yes, of course. Parents should participate in the judge of the
 competition. They can understand their children better, see the interests of young people. And the
winners can get $500 or a beach trip with their family in two days, that's my opinion.
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5. Bùi Thế Duy -

Duy viết lạc sang đề nào rồi đó em nha. Cả lớp viết đề số 1 mà.
Part 1 :
Hi James Smith Wow!!! It’s a surprise and a delight. I think that’s a very significant thing. I think
we should hold it right there in the classroom at the and of the day. Because it’s a place where
students spend a lot of time learning, so it’s also a place with many memories. Also the
classroom space is very large and very comfortable to allow us to organize a party. This is my
last lesson, so I would like to suggest that we playing should play language game or play team
that demands knowledge and understanding. I think we should have a solo confectionery. We
can carry things we like, for example cakes and drinks like Coca Cola and people will be happy.
See you everybody DUY
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Part 2: Ben and his father got off the plane and left the airport. They were both excited. It was
their first time visiting VIET NAM. They got their luggages and were walking towards their hotel.
When they entered in the building, they were greeted by the receptionist. They got the keys to
their room and a ticket where they could visit the mausoleum HO CHI MINH. They walked up the
stairs, to their room, to put their luggages in. After that, they went to go visit the mausoleum HO
CHI MINH. When they are were in the mausoleum, they couldn't believe what they saw! They
had a great time.
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6. Nguyễn Thị Lan Hương

Part 1
Dear mrs Hallam It's an interesting idea because it creates a playground for students through the
program, bringing everyone together and everyone can freely express their talents. I think the
talent competition should be for students of all ages because it can find many talents, from there
you can find your talents through that playground and it can also bring together the students. little
friends closer together câu này chưa rõ ý, em cần viết lại cho rõ rý nhé! I think parents should
evaluate the competition so that they can better understand the competition and also see the
talent of their children. It also helps to strengthen the relationship between home and school. I
think it's a good idea to give the trophy to the winner and a special reward.
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Part 2 In addition to the clubs related to the professions serving the subject, there are also sports
clubs such as volleyball clubs, soccer clubs, martial arts clubs, etc in my town/city. we can join
one of those clubs and participate in daily activities. Daily exercise is essential for our health. It
helps us stay in shape, effectively reduces stress, provides energy for work, it can also prevent
diseases, and especially helps us have a good night's sleep. In my opinion, exercise is very good
for health and suitable for all ages. In addition, exercising every day also helps us connect with
people and reduces the time we spend on our phones.
107 words – 15/20
 Đoạn đầu em cần viết 1 câu nào đó thể hiện rằng em đang nói đến các hoạt động thể thao ở nơi
em sống nhé, vì câu hỏi có nhắc đến “in your area”. Đoạn sau em cần nhắc đến “young people”
vì câu hỏi muốn hỏi tầm quan trọng của hoạt động thể thao đối với “young people”

7. Nguyễn Phương Thảo

1, Dear Beatrice Hallam ,
I really like that a the school talent compition And I am also are looking forward to taking part in .
Do you know ,students are very intelligent and have a lot of talents , So that is a good idea for the
students. In my opinion, we shouldn’t limit ages to join in competition because I think any ages
can also have individual talent. If we choose a student over 15 , I am afraid we miss an actual
talent student . I don't think we choose parents is refee is fit , câu này chưa rõ nghĩa và ko
đúng ngữ pháp. In my experient , If we do it , The other people or students will not feel fair,
Because , for instance, they know each other and are Close-knit with the student of the
competition they certan will choose her or him And the prize which is given to the winner. I think
we should choose to book and Certain money , câu này cũng chưa rõ nghĩa em nhé! It is
really meaning and whoever wins will be able to use the money to do things they like! Thanks!

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2, Nowadays, most people seem to know the importance of health , specifically is young people
who were are educated from schools, internet, or their parent . But the economic conditions have
difficulties, so still now have lack of sport activities and my the area is one of the cases. In
addition, in addition a few family think they and their children don’t need to practise sports, or
other people say talk that they are too busy to do it. That reason is the cause of that problem. I
think it í great if all the young people to do sports and exercise is the great . Because it makes
you them stronger, enjoy life more and prevents any cancer which is afraid of the human
human beings are afraid of. In besides , It helps you relax after work or after Long day arrived at
school If we take part in sport club We will have chances to meet other people And we can share
experience work or study working and learning experiences and I think it makes we us happy ,
reduce stress, pressure , and learn more everything So I think all the people should practise
sports from today !
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8. Nguyễn Văn Cường

Writing Part 1
Dear Hallam Your idea about a school talent competition is really nice. This time is also a good
time to organize a show.It can relax everyone after a study period. It is a good idea to allow a age
of student.Because we can see a lot kind of performent performences such as:modern
dancing,pop music,classical dance or some lyrical songs and everyone will like the competition
that is suitable for all people. I agree with your idea.The judge is a compulsory part of all
competition and some parents will be the best to give fair comments with each performent
performence.And they have many experience a lot of experience about all kind of shows about
talent. At first, I think an amount of money will be a nice prize but I think we can make a special
cup and a certificate is the best choice.It can remind the winner a long time about the contest and
the certificate is easy to hang in on somewhere in a class.
Your student Cuong :>
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 Part 2
Sport and exercise In my country
There are a lot of sport activities that young people can join in.Some kind of sport like: cycling,
running, football,basketball,volleyball or some that need terrain like skateboarding, skiing… Sport
and exercise is are very important to young people, it They can keep you fit, make your health
better, when we join this these activities we can decrease the time we need to working with
spend on computer,phone,…. It can connect all member in a family, create some funny moments.
e kb kết thế nào cô ơi :V

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Baì viết hơi ngắn, bài này em cần viết khoảng 120 từ, viết thêm các ví dụ và tình hình luyện tập
thể thao ở nơi em ở, viết thêm về tác dụng của nó nữa. Kết bài có thể đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân
hoặc 1 lời kêu gọi mọi người nên dành thời gian luyện tập thể dục thể thao.

9. Tạ Thị Luyến
Dear Mrs Hallan
I am so happy when i receive your email. Your plan is amazing. I am really interested in it. I think,
every involved will develop not only talent but also soft skills. In my opinion, this talen contest
should be limit age participants because each orthers different age has a different talent and
person'talent grows with age. I don't agree that some parents should judge the competition
because it will make the result of the competition more objective subjective. I recommend that
prizes the winners should receive is are a cup and valuable rewards.
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10. Nguyễn Thị Ba Ngọc

Dear Mrs Hallan,
Thank you teacher for sending me a letter. It's a good idea because it wil be fun and we can find
many talented people. I think the talent show could be for students of all ages is better because
of it we will find many talens at many all ages. Of course, we invite some parents judge the
competition, they will know more about music, musical instruments and dance so they can
understand their children better. I think the winner will get should be given a cup because it
represents the winner and everyone likes it. Hope the talent show goes well
See you soon Ngoc

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11. Khương Duy

Part 1

Dear Mrs Hallan

It's a good idea because it creating creats a playground for the students through the program, helps
people have more fun getting along with each other, allowing allows everyone to show off their talents.
I think the talent show could be for students of all ages better because it is very fun and it will help find
more talent. It helps all student unite.

I should some parents I think some parents should judge the competition because parents can learn
more about the competition and they could see their children perform represent. Besides it link
between parents and school.

I think the winner suggest get should be given a cup because everyone wants a gift and they deserve it.

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Part 2

Sport and exercise

In my school, there are a lot of sports and exercise activities such as walking, volleyball,
batminton,gym,… so on. We usually play it every day.

I think we should do exercise and sport is very important. Not only does it helps us entertain after
stressful school hours, but it also helps us exercise. Besides , it also helps people connect more . it helps
young people stay away from the internet.

In my opinion, sport and exercise are very improtant for eveyone and all ages

84 words – cần viết dài hơn, tránh lặp lại cấu trúc. 15/20